Nitpicking: "Nexus Uprising" edition (spoilers)

Since I can't decide what game to play next, I started reading Nexus Uprising instead. I'm not very far yet, only through the prologue and first 2 chapters. A few comments about it so far...

It starts out written from Sloane's perspective. In the prologue, she's musing about Alec and how he raised his kids after his wife died. Now, we know from Alec's memories that Sara and Scott were adults in the Alliance by that point, so I'm not sure if this is an author goof or just Sloane not having correct information. Considering she admits to not knowing many others in the Initiative very well, it could plausibly be the latter.

In Ch. 1, the shit hits the fan. Sloane wakes up in her pod and hears all kinds of alarms etc. She speaks some kind of emergency password and her cryo pod unlocks. However, she is apparently the only one to have such a code because she then proceeds to pry open cryo pods of other people in her same area. First one she gets out is Kandros. He's awake, so he could have said a passcode to open his pod but for whatever reason, that isn't what happened. I'm sure Avitus Rix would have really liked having a code like that too.

A passing mention is made of "two teenagers" in this same area, more folks being busted out of their pods. No idea how pods were assigned, but it seems strange that teenagers would be in the same cell as Sloane and Kandros. I would think blocks would be of similar types - security, admin, etc. If this was a security block, teens shouldn't be a part of it, unless maybe they were children of one of the other security team members? Anyway, them being there didn't make sense to me.

Sloane tells Kandros to lead everyone to the docking bays in case they have to bug out quick. Meanwhile she goes further in to see if she can find out what happened. She comes upon a nearly dead asari who gives her a few hints on what may have happened. Sloane asks her where the council and Garson are because she wants to check on their pods, make sure they're ok, and get them out. Now, why she has to ask this makes no sense because she is the one who sealed up Garson's pod. She should know exactly where it is.

Anyway, she goes to the correct location and the place is completely empty. Pods are open - no damage, no bodies - until she hears a cough and our dearly beloved Foster Addison pops up from beneath a table or something. She tells Sloane she was looking for Garson. I might actually go back and re-read this conversation because I'm certain this is the beginning of the "Garson is already dead at this point" part of the story, and Addison is already being shifty. I was very amused by Sloane really wanting to punch her.

Random thought - Sloane's awakening process was obviously not done properly given the state of the Nexus at that point. I wonder if some kind of damage was done as a result and that's how she ends up the way she is in the game?

That's it for now. These things stood out to me as red flags regarding consistency and sense-making plot points. Hopefully it gets better.