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Post by cmoe on Jul 28, 2017 16:59:30 GMT
Kirsa respectfully requests to not follow that great post by Dragon. 
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Post by phoray on Jul 28, 2017 17:54:21 GMT
Kirsa respectfully requests to not follow that great post by Dragon.  You have more time to edit, cmoe. Dragon and I gotta colab the office meeting a bit better before you post.
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Post by dragontartare on Jul 28, 2017 20:59:10 GMT
Kirsa respectfully requests to not follow that great post by Dragon. Bah. You'll do great. All of your posts in smiles' thread were good
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Post by smilesja on Jul 28, 2017 21:33:48 GMT
Yes, they are cmoe they are definitely good.
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Post by phoray on Jul 30, 2017 2:39:35 GMT
Post Plan Reminder (can be adjusted as needed)- Mag Establish
- Mag meeting with WC
- Kirsa Establish/meeting
- First Warden/WC meeting
- Vanasha's arrival
- First Warden/Kirsa secret meeting
- First Warden/Kirsa/Mag/Vanasha/WC meeting
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Post by phoray on Aug 4, 2017 19:46:33 GMT
I've gotten my posts outlined, but Ive been co-labbing with Dragon and Cmoe as needed as well. If I don't hurry up, The Secret Meeting will be done before my other two posts. I don't work this weekend. I'm sick today. I'll see what I get done.
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Post by phoray on Aug 8, 2017 0:49:21 GMT
Got interrupted by work, but now the final letter of the day is posted. Speaking of stuck up ( cmoe ) can you believe her post script?  Vanasha will have a bit of growing up to do once she hangs out with 'the peasants" for a bit. Some culture shock, definitely. She's been researching things inside comfortable buildings with as many candles as she could want. So Lothering will bump her world view quite a bit.
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Post by phoray on Aug 8, 2017 22:44:46 GMT
I'm not feeling the writing... I'll work on Cmoe and I's colab about the secret meeting and see if I get inspired.
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Post by phoray on Aug 8, 2017 23:04:12 GMT
I did some more stuff for the secret meeting, cmoeStill don't feel like writing. I suck. Will make myself tomorrow regardless of feeling, but I guess I'll let myself pass tonight.
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Post by cmoe on Aug 9, 2017 0:52:24 GMT
I did some more stuff for the secret meeting, cmoe Still don't feel like writing. I suck. Will make myself tomorrow regardless of feeling, but I guess I'll let myself pass tonight. I have a day like this every other day.  I made a change and have a few questions when you have a chance to look it over.
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Post by phoray on Aug 10, 2017 0:00:46 GMT
I did some more stuff for the secret meeting, cmoe I have a day like this every other day.  I made a change and have a few questions when you have a chance to look it over. The First Warden has answered your question. Now I need to write a real post instead of letters. Does it bother you guys that my establishment post takes...like 8 posts... I guess, in my defense, I'm also world and plot building for you guys. Do you like all the little touches? I thought mentioning Emile in Kirkwall and the inn in Amaranthine were all good little references to the world.
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Post by dragontartare on Aug 10, 2017 3:03:42 GMT
I don't mind the multiple posts at all. I enjoyed reading them
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Post by cmoe on Aug 10, 2017 3:31:51 GMT
I don't mind the multiple posts at all. I enjoyed reading them I have enjoyed them too. But wow do i want someone to tell Vanasha where to put her attitude.
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Post by dragontartare on Aug 10, 2017 3:35:29 GMT
I don't mind the multiple posts at all. I enjoyed reading them I have enjoyed them too. But wow do i want someone to tell Vanasha where to put her attitude. Yes! Me too! I had these weird moments where I sympathized with the cute brother and sister while simultaneously wanting to punch them both in the nose.
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Post by phoray on Aug 10, 2017 12:13:42 GMT
I was thinking, "Evil slave owning Magisters have favorite kid sisters too." I hope I showed that 
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Post by gervaise21 on Aug 11, 2017 13:15:51 GMT
I thought introducing her as part of a family was a nice touch, particularly when we haven't really had that many examples of warm family relations from Tevinter. (Well, there was Alexius and Felix but that was just tragic). It was a timely reminder that Tevinter is the same as elsewhere and just because the system is bad doesn't mean that individuals don't have positive feelings for one another and can appear "human" rather than stereo-type evil bastards (I'm looking at you Erimond).
I really got the sense that slaves should be seen and not heard but that their efforts are sometimes appreciated (and remembered). Loved the culture shock of finding suddenly your status is no longer recognised or valued. Also appreciated all the little nods to previous games set in Kirkwall and Ferelden.
I also liked the letters touch - nothing wrong with this as a form of storytelling: Pride and Prejudice started off as a novel of letters (some of which survived into its later incarnation) and correct me if I'm wrong but didn't Dracula have them too?
(Sorry, I hope I'm not butting in where I'm not supposed to).
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Post by phoray on Aug 11, 2017 23:55:21 GMT
I thought introducing her as part of a family was a nice touch, particularly when we haven't really had that many examples of warm family relations from Tevinter. (Well, there was Alexius and Felix but that was just tragic). It was a timely reminder that Tevinter is the same as elsewhere and just because the system is bad doesn't mean that individuals don't have positive feelings for one another and can appear "human" rather than stereo-type evil bastards (I'm looking at you Erimond). I really got the sense that slaves should be seen and not heard but that their efforts are sometimes appreciated (and remembered). Loved the culture shock of finding suddenly your status is no longer recognised or valued. Also appreciated all the little nods to previous games set in Kirkwall and Ferelden. I also liked the letters touch - nothing wrong with this as a form of storytelling: Pride and Prejudice started off as a novel of letters (some of which survived into its later incarnation) and correct me if I'm wrong but didn't Dracula have them too? (Sorry, I hope I'm not butting in where I'm not supposed to). I don't even know if Erimond was stereotypical- He reminded me of the Disney villains that actually used to be evil. And he believed in his cause. He was a better Villain than Corypheus because I actually hated him enough to want to kill him. His disgusting nature was truly well represented. I recall Fenris' many speeches about how he was a pet- I think that if the owners are satisfied and not prone to anger, they are likely to think of their slaves as higher thinking animal/children. In Gone with the Wind, there were a couple of slaves that had names and the owners knew them, their personality, even that they had kids. Wouldn't stop them from punishing them at the end of the day if they did something wrong. With the letters, I wanted to show time and distance passing without writing out full scenes that weren't important anyway. I think it is a fine way of storytelling, so long as it isn't abused. and I do believe Pride and Prejudice had at least one latter, the apology letter he writes explaining he hasn't ruined everyone's lives with maliciousness. Thank you for your commentary, I appreciated it.
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Post by gervaise21 on Aug 12, 2017 14:49:53 GMT
I suppose the problem I have with Erimond is that he just seems so obviously a nasty piece of work, you honestly wondered how he could ever have given a convincing enough display of "sympathy" for the Warden's dilemma to Clarel that she was willing to believe him. I think I'd have found the whole plot a bit more believable if he had shown something "softer" in his approach, some nuance in his performance that would have made him convincing to her and to the other Wardens he was trying to control. Most Wardens are genuinely committed to their role and doing it for the sake of others, so his obvious cold hearted attitude would surely raise doubts? Admittedly the codices you find in Adamant Fortress do indicate Clarel was having her doubts even before we turned up.
Contrast his approach with the Warden in the Western Approach with that of Duncan with Jordy in DAO. I was appalled at what Duncan did then but at least his expression of sorrow seemed genuine as he murdered Jordy. In fact that is what made it seem so much worse.
Like you say, Erimond was an old fashioned Disney villain and I thought Dragon Age was better than that.
If you want an example of an outstanding villain manipulating people, find a recording of Sian Phillips as the Empress Livia in I Claudius from the 1970s. Now she was truly convincing. Not only that but I spent several episodes absolutely hating her only to feel sympathy for her on her deathbed, just as Claudius did. Brilliant writing and an amazing actress.
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Post by phoray on Aug 13, 2017 13:07:52 GMT
Post Plan (can be adjusted as needed)- Vanasha's series of Establishment: In progress
- First Warden/WC meeting
- Secret Meeting: First Warden/Kirsa: Colab Complete, not posted.
- Here are your assignments: FW/Kirsa/Mag/Vanasha/WC meeting: Colab, Started
- Into the West Wing: Colab,Started
tagging dragontartare and cmoe for informational purposes. I'm writing out of timeline order with you guys so you guys can write at your own pace and so can I.
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Post by dragontartare on Aug 14, 2017 0:43:49 GMT
Post Plan (can be adjusted as needed)- Vanasha's series of Establishment: In progress
- First Warden/WC meeting
- Secret Meeting: First Warden/Kirsa: Colab Complete, not posted.
- Here are your assignments: FW/Kirsa/Mag/Vanasha/WC meeting: Colab, Started
- Into the West Wing: Colab,Started
tagging dragontartare and cmoe for informational purposes. I'm writing out of timeline order with you guys so you guys can write at your own pace and so can I. I saw the PM. I don't come in until well into the post, though, so I can't really start writing yet. I can check the document periodically, or someone can tag me when it's Magdelene's turn to show up.
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Post by phoray on Aug 16, 2017 23:48:50 GMT
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Post by phoray on Aug 17, 2017 17:12:23 GMT
My vacation plans are currently in flux because our 4 month missing pit bull is coming home. I may be able to write tomorrow Or when I get back from vacation as originally planned.
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Post by cmoe on Aug 17, 2017 17:42:18 GMT
My vacation plans are currently in flux because our 4 month missing pit bull is coming home. I may be able to write tomorrow Or when I get back from vacation as originally planned. I hope things go well with your pup. I'm happy she was found.
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Post by phoray on Aug 22, 2017 1:18:19 GMT
Yeah. There are several posts before the Group Meeting.
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Post by dragontartare on Aug 22, 2017 2:56:01 GMT
ZOMG. My question exited the Googleverse and appeared here in the BSN-osphere. HOW IS THIS POSSIBLE.
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