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Post by smilesja on Aug 22, 2017 2:58:43 GMT
ZOMG. My question exited the Googleverse and appeared here in the BSN-osphere. HOW IS THIS POSSIBLE.
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Post by cmoe on Aug 22, 2017 2:59:30 GMT
ZOMG. My question exited the Googleverse and appeared here in the BSN-osphere. HOW IS THIS POSSIBLE. It was Vanasha, I just know it. She is sneaky!
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Post by phoray on Aug 22, 2017 12:27:17 GMT
ZOMG. My question exited the Googleverse and appeared here in the BSN-osphere. HOW IS THIS POSSIBLE. Lol Sorry. On a phone, I can see the messages by email but can't see them on the document at all. So I thought I'd answer by copy pasting over here.
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Post by phoray on Aug 22, 2017 12:32:27 GMT
This evening, I will make myself do a lot of writing. I was trying to coalesce Vanasha's final establishment posts down to three large posts. Two posts in Lothering, third post arriving at Weishaupt. Then I'll do the short meeting between the First Warden amd Cyryl that will explain her "sour expression" in the group colab.
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Post by dragontartare on Aug 24, 2017 2:28:53 GMT
I left a question in the document. I need to know in order to decide how Maggie will respond to Vanasha's statement 
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Post by phoray on Aug 30, 2017 1:04:03 GMT
The NPCs of Lothering I am utilizing in my upcoming posts: - The Innkeeper: Marge. Female, 48, widow. Short, fat, strong. Brunette, hair in a bun. weapon of choice: A club
- Stanley, the innkeeper's son. Also serves as Bartender as needed. 22, Male. tall, sturdy, barrel chested. Weapon of choice: his fists.
- The Chantry Mother: Ada, 52. Female. Slim, quiet, hair already a dull grey tied back loosely at her nape. Weapon of Choice: Faith. Unless it's Darkspawn. Then she knows where the cleaver is in the Chantry kitchen.
- Herbalist “leader”: Allison. 31 daughter of the previous Lothering Elder and young widow, mother of an 11 year old girl. Weapon of choice: Dagger.
- Elsabeth, apprentice herbalist, daughter of Allison. She's gotten good with a sling shot, keeps her mom deep in nug.
- Theo the Blacksmith/Repairman: Unmarried, Male. 30, ex solider. A single sword, no shield, aims for finesse. picture found here
- The Seamstress/Grocer Attendent: Maralyn. Female. 26, unmarried. Keen on Theo. Weapon of choice: Cross bow.
- The Grocer/ Baker: Hayne. Male. 55. Widow. Child less. Weapon of Choice: Also a club.
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Post by phoray on Sept 2, 2017 2:00:22 GMT
Post Plan (can be adjusted as needed)- Vanasha's series of Establishment: In progress
- First Warden/WC meeting
- Secret Meeting: First Warden/Kirsa: Colab Complete, not posted.
- Here are your assignments: FW/Kirsa/Mag/Vanasha/WC meeting: Colab, Completed
- Into the West Wing: Colab, In progress
dragontartareDid you want an interim post for the day off you character gets or want to skip to the leaving part?
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Post by dragontartare on Sept 2, 2017 3:09:08 GMT
Post Plan (can be adjusted as needed)- Vanasha's series of Establishment: In progress
- First Warden/WC meeting
- Secret Meeting: First Warden/Kirsa: Colab Complete, not posted.
- Here are your assignments: FW/Kirsa/Mag/Vanasha/WC meeting: Colab, Completed
- Into the West Wing: Colab, In progress
dragontartare Did you want an interim post for the day off you character gets or want to skip to the leaving part? I would like an interim post.
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Post by phoray on Sept 2, 2017 3:30:43 GMT
Post Plan (can be adjusted as needed)- Vanasha's series of Establishment: In progress
- First Warden/WC meeting
- Secret Meeting: First Warden/Kirsa: Colab Complete, not posted.
- Here are your assignments: FW/Kirsa/Mag/Vanasha/WC meeting: Colab, Completed
- Into the West Wing: Colab, In progress
dragontartare Did you want an interim post for the day off you character gets or want to skip to the leaving part? I would like an interim post. Is there anything I can do to help?
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Post by dragontartare on Sept 2, 2017 3:50:12 GMT
Not really. I just need Lars and Maggie to fight about her running off  When do I need to have it posted?
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Post by phoray on Sept 2, 2017 11:54:27 GMT
Not really. I just need Lars and Maggie to fight about her running off  When do I need to have it posted? Next Saturday sounds good. Add to my feeling of a dead line. I've run into just being tired this week. Up at 8, home by 6, then dinner and wanting to catch up on the board, only to find I'm thinking about sleep at 8. And usually sleepy doesn't interrupt my creativity too bad but it did this week. Still, I have 3 solid days of little to no work and no plans, so my stuff is happening this weekend.
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Post by phoray on Sept 2, 2017 15:24:20 GMT
I added two NPC lists which may help you, dragontartare, in making your interim post. added another "rule" (sounds so controlling, but I don't know what else to call it.) Wanted to add more to the world state using Gervaise's world state as a good example, but then couldn't find it. 
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Post by phoray on Sept 2, 2017 18:23:23 GMT
Added a Basic Lothering Map of my own making to the OP of this thread. My drawing skills are not as good as my writing skills by a long shot. 
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Post by dragontartare on Sept 2, 2017 20:30:03 GMT
Do you envision the wardens as living in large group dorms or smaller shared rooms? Would my couple be allowed to bunk together while at Weisshaupt?
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Post by phoray on Sept 3, 2017 0:24:00 GMT
Do you envision the wardens as living in large group dorms or smaller shared rooms? Would my couple be allowed to bunk together while at Weisshaupt? oop, sorry I missed this. I imagine them living in large dorms, but if they're willing to deal with a longer walk and less comfortable accomdations, I imagine there are some East Wing rooms that used to deal with Griffon care they could pair off in. Is that okay?
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Post by dragontartare on Sept 3, 2017 3:51:03 GMT
Do you envision the wardens as living in large group dorms or smaller shared rooms? Would my couple be allowed to bunk together while at Weisshaupt? oop, sorry I missed this. I imagine them living in large dorms, but if they're willing to deal with a longer walk and less comfortable accomdations, I imagine there are some East Wing rooms that used to deal with Griffon care they could pair off in. Is that okay? Yes, that works for me  The only NPC I envision needing is the healer. Do you have any preferences about him/her?
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Post by phoray on Sept 3, 2017 12:08:30 GMT
oop, sorry I missed this. I imagine them living in large dorms, but if they're willing to deal with a longer walk and less comfortable accomdations, I imagine there are some East Wing rooms that used to deal with Griffon care they could pair off in. Is that okay? Yes, that works for me  The only NPC I envision needing is the healer. Do you have any preferences about him/her? Nope. 
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Post by phoray on Sept 3, 2017 12:10:21 GMT
I am not on call at the hospital today or tomorrow. I was yesterday, they called me four times! Point is, I have a goal for 3000 words today. Yesterday was only 775. *Making it happen*
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Post by phoray on Sept 3, 2017 14:47:50 GMT
There is a back story of the two guards at the Chantry doors in my head, but having a moment figuring out how it could even come out without it sounding like they're telling their personal business to strangers. hmmm.
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Post by phoray on Sept 3, 2017 16:41:30 GMT
1,800 words, I'm calling that post complete and will add a second today. dragontartare cmoe
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Post by phoray on Sept 3, 2017 19:25:42 GMT
I am amused at how much clothing Vanasha is going through. "This is what she wears in the morning. Then this for the ride. Then this for the evening. Then this for that meeting."  Hope DA4 gives us some optionally sexy clothing and a real dress for the ladies.
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Post by phoray on Sept 3, 2017 20:44:20 GMT
I ran my post by husband, and I'm perhaps being too subtle. How did my (Dalish-kidnapped by Templars<-only her closest friends know this)Circle trained Ellowen Surana come to want to build a massive Chantry as part of the rebuilding efforts of Lothering? Because she became a fervant Andrastian as a result of the Sacred Ashes Quest. Additionally, being, imo, my smartest Warden, she knew it'd boost the economy of the place. Considering it struggles to feed its own with the land not quite recovered from the Blight, this was important to create as a real means of people still living there based on tourism, rather than exporting of goods which they would have been unable to support. I apologize that my world building isn't up to par with my goals of information sharing and had to resort to this little summary. 
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Post by phoray on Sept 4, 2017 19:38:59 GMT
I'm just going to do a lot of little posts. Huge posts wear me out dealing with formatting. New small post complete.
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Post by phoray on Sept 5, 2017 0:33:15 GMT
You're reading them as soon as I put them out! What's your opinion so far, smilesja? I think it had a slow start, but I'm getting into it. I enjoyed writing the magical battle scene parts. In game, Entropy seems too weak a school, but I imagine it as much more powerful narratively.
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Post by smilesja on Sept 5, 2017 0:35:22 GMT
I love it! You put so much depth and detail into your story, I admittedly feel a little envious. The thread actually inspired a new RP story for me, though that's FAR away because I need to continue to work on Nature of Conflict.
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