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Post by gervaise21 on Jun 26, 2018 8:36:14 GMT
Okay, Phoray and I are collaborating on a post with Rainer Aehrenthal discussing the format of the Opening Ceremony with Arria, after which I think we should be ready to launch into the actual event. However, how does everyone think this is best dealt with?
I was planning on writing a basic outline and messaging everyone with it and then individuals adding in their character's POV as appropriate.
Alternatively, post the basic outline here in the OOC and discuss where we think we would like various characters to be placed into the narrative, and then deal with each character by PM.
Then I make the final post with everyone's contributions combined into it.
As I'm fairly new to running this sort of collaboration, I am open to suggestions of the best way to manage it.
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Post by Space Cowboy on Jun 26, 2018 15:25:38 GMT
Okay, Phoray and I are collaborating on a post with Rainer Aehrenthal discussing the format of the Opening Ceremony with Arria, after which I think we should be ready to launch into the actual event. However, how does everyone think this is best dealt with? I was planning on writing a basic outline and messaging everyone with it and then individuals adding in their character's POV as appropriate. Alternatively, post the basic outline here in the OOC and discuss where we think we would like various characters to be placed into the narrative, and then deal with each character by PM. Then I make the final post with everyone's contributions combined into it. As I'm fairly new to running this sort of collaboration, I am open to suggestions of the best way to manage it. Does this need to be a big collab if we aren't all together? I can't picture what you have in mind yet so I'll wait got more details. For example my dwarves encountering the Kal Sharok dwarves I think should be it's own post? No one else would be aware of it I think?
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Post by gervaise21 on Jun 26, 2018 15:57:52 GMT
For example my dwarves encountering the Kal Sharok dwarves I think should be it's own post? No one else would be aware of it I think? Well in the original scenario that I am basing this off the confrontation between the two sets of dwarves takes place in the arena, so very public. I think the fact that everyone is there watching is what actually stops it from turning into a bloodbath straight away. However, I do agree that the post with their exchange should be at the end of everything else, except Phoray's song. How I imagined it is that Arria was about to sing when the Kal-Sharok dwarves arrive late on the scene, there is their confrontation with the Orzammar dwarves and tensions are running extremely high, so Rainer urges Arria to begin her performance and it is so beautiful and meaningful that it actually manages to even calm down the dwarves, music being a universal language that can touch to soul. Of course if you think this wouldn't work then I could re-jig the dwarf confrontation to take place after Arria's performance as everyone is heading back to their various bases, so it would then be totally separate from the Opening Ceremony.
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Post by Space Cowboy on Jun 26, 2018 16:03:01 GMT
For example my dwarves encountering the Kal Sharok dwarves I think should be it's own post? No one else would be aware of it I think? Well in the original scenario that I am basing this off the confrontation between the two sets of dwarves takes place in the arena, so very public. I think the fact that everyone is there watching is what actually stops it from turning into a bloodbath straight away. However, I do agree that the post with their exchange should be at the end of everything else, except Phoray's song. How I imagined it is that Arria was about to sing when the Kal-Sharok dwarves arrive late on the scene, there is their confrontation with the Orzammar dwarves and tensions are running extremely high, so Rainer urges Arria to begin her performance and it is so beautiful and meaningful that it actually manages to even calm down the dwarves, music being a universal language that can touch to soul. Of course if you think this wouldn't work then I could re-jig the dwarf confrontation to take place after Arria's performance as everyone is heading back to their various bases, so it would then be totally separate from the Opening Ceremony. Your idea sounds good then! I wasn't sure how it would all work in one post.
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Post by phoray on Jun 27, 2018 6:19:19 GMT
There are:
Sabina (for reference, Arria is her Tevinter name and she's using her own name as an alias in the south)
Spaces dwarf
Wardens dragon Hunter
Gervaise elf
Rivers Qunari
And a spirit dog
That would have point of views. It's difficult to contemplate putting 6 different viewpoints into one post. In the past with such a large group we committed to Third Person POV or a single persons POV for such a post, but definitely no "inside thoughts" of everyone. I think that is what Space is tipping over?
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Post by gervaise21 on Jun 27, 2018 6:54:20 GMT
I see what you are saying. I pretty much agree with that but I wanted to check. So after the post with the discussion between Sabina and Rainer it will probably be best to continue as follows:
General post by me describing the Opening Ceremony which finishes with the arrival of the Kal-Sharok dwarves. Post as a collaboration between me and Space with the exchange between the two dwarf factions.
Post by Phoray with Sabina's song.
Then optional posts with different characters reflecting on the day's events.
Unless I hear to the contrary I shall assume everyone is happy with this.
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Post by riverdaleswhiteflash on Jun 27, 2018 7:12:49 GMT
That sounds like a plan to me.
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Post by phoray on Aug 13, 2018 7:48:37 GMT
General post by me describing the Opening Ceremony which finishes with the arrival of the Kal-Sharok dwarves. Post as a collaboration between me and Space with the exchange between the two dwarf factions. Post by Phoray with Sabina's song. Then optional posts with different characters reflecting on the day's events. The plan! I was just wondering where we were going next. I did a recording (as you know gervaise) but just listened to it and think I should re record  time on the line, 'I'll use what I have. I agree with you, the spanish bit sounds great, but I sound very muted in the started, and flubbed towards the end. I know I could do better. But also! I need to get my Sabina screen shotted with a dress! I do worry my mods will crash, I currently have things set up for Qunari. eek.
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Post by gervaise21 on Aug 13, 2018 14:41:23 GMT
Normally I would leave a day between postings but the Opening Ceremony does follow on naturally from Phoray's post. So I shall post it now. It is necessarily lengthy in accordance with the importance of the occasion but you should find some interesting facts thrown in there as well which can give your characters something to think about. Anyway, I hope you find it suitably entertaining.
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Post by phoray on Aug 14, 2018 4:55:27 GMT
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Post by riverdaleswhiteflash on Aug 14, 2018 7:35:01 GMT
Oh, sorry. I'd assumed I'd get a notification if the RP threads updated, since I always got notifications on the RDAF site if a bookmarked thread updated. So I haven't been keeping up.
Yeah, continuing to move forward seems like a good idea. And I really ought to do some catching up.
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Post by gervaise21 on Aug 14, 2018 7:55:47 GMT
Oh, sorry. I'd assumed I'd get a notification if the RP threads updated, since I always got notifications on the RDAF site if a bookmarked thread updated. So I haven't been keeping up. I did tag everyone when I made my post, so if you didn't receive notification please tell me as I am obviously doing something wrong.
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Post by riverdaleswhiteflash on Aug 14, 2018 8:13:16 GMT
Oh, sorry. I'd assumed I'd get a notification if the RP threads updated, since I always got notifications on the RDAF site if a bookmarked thread updated. So I haven't been keeping up. I did tag everyone when I made my post, so if you didn't receive notification please tell me as I am obviously doing something wrong. I don't see myself tagged anywhere. Anyway, now I'm starting to see notifications for the threads for this RP again.
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Post by Space Cowboy on Aug 14, 2018 10:24:12 GMT
I spoke to Gervais in PM already, but it looks great!
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Post by warden on Aug 14, 2018 12:12:41 GMT
I only received Phoray's notification, didn't receive any from Gervaise21.
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Post by gervaise21 on Aug 14, 2018 12:55:58 GMT
I don't see myself tagged anywhere. I only received Phoray's notification, didn't receive any from Gervaise21. I'm clearly doing something wrong then. Sorry folks.  Anyway, once Phoray has posted Sabina's song, please feel free to give your character's response to events. Obviously Livia has a favoured position to witness everything and also hear how Ferdinand views things, although the disagreement between the two dwarf factions doesn't really affect anyone else other than to provide a bit of entertainment! Of course people are having plenty to say about Livia. I rather imagined that it would amuse Ferdinand to see the looks on the faces of the Nevarran nobility when he arrived with Livia at his side. I was also thinking Issala might have some thoughts about the whole occasion but may also have spotted the Qunari delegation in the royal box. Bann Oswyn Sighard has one of the less expensive boxes on the opposite side of the stadium to the Royal Box, so anyone occupying it along with him would also have a clear view of the two boxes adjacent to the Royal. On the left as you view it from the other side of the Stadium would be the box reserved by the Divine for foreign dignitaries as her guests and which I mentioned included the Qunari. I think we previously discussed that Bann Sighard might have invited Issala to join him for the Opening Ceremony along with Jasce. Then I have also discussed with Space about him posting the Orzammar dwarves discussion of events, which is likely to be colourful to say the least! In addition Sabina's reaction to events and feelings after performing again, I assume she will also have something reflect having seen her son, Markham, in the Orlesian contingent. I will make a post with Ellas and Burren discussing what they have witnessed and then Ellas deciding to take an evening stroll along to the alienage to introduce himself. Meanwhile, the main action will then move to the Ducal Palace and the official reception. This is where the murder of the Qunari delegates, that is the basis for our investigation, is going to take place. We have already established that Sabina will be there as Rainer's guest. I'm assuming that Livia will attend with Ferdinand and that the two Deshyrs from Orzammar will have been invited along with their seconds (although the dwarves will not actually be recruited to the investigation but may be interviewed as witnesses). Bann Oswyn will be there with Jasce, which will put him in the right place to be drawn into the confidence of Rainer and Viuus Anaxas, who are concerned that developments indicate it could be an inside job. He will then suggest Ellas as someone they can trust and back at his camp, when he approaches Ellas with the proposal to include him, Ellas will suggest taking Issala along as well because of his previous experience as a Qunari scout and tracker. So proposed plan of action moving forward: Phoray's post - Sabina's song Various posts (everyone) - Different characters' reactions to the events of the Opening Ceremony. My post - setting the scene at the official reception. Various posts (everyone) - Exchanges between guests and introducing the principle suspect (initially) for the crime, Lucius Scribonianus (see character description and Phoray's earlier posts giving Sabina's history for the background to this character) Discovery of the murder and Rainer and Viuus Anaxas setting up an investigative team. (Me) I think that should be enough to keep us occupied for a while. 
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Post by phoray on Aug 29, 2018 7:11:54 GMT
@gervaise
I don't see a need to react to the Opening Ceremony, as I feel partly like I already did so with my song post. I'm not sure Sabina has any feeling about the Kal Sharok dwarves being present- her being an entertainer first and foremost and not related politically to anyone.
I thought the next post I'd be writing with be at the reception. Sabina being Rainer's partner for the evening.
Is that a post coming soon? If we are waiting on other writers, I could do some work for Twisted.
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Post by gervaise21 on Aug 29, 2018 19:24:47 GMT
Space is working on something for the dwarves and I will make an entry for Ellas to explain how he ends up at the Reception, so if you want to do work on Twisted that is fine.
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Post by Space Cowboy on Sept 1, 2018 18:01:56 GMT
phoray great job with the singing! Finally got a chance to listen 
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Post by gervaise21 on Sept 16, 2018 14:58:24 GMT
I was searching around for images of Nevarra and discovered someone has been working on an independent DLC for DAI.
www.behance.net/gallery/56573787/Dragon-Age-Inquisition-DLCShadows-of-Nevarra
Quite fascinating when you consider what the alternative working title is of our RP story. They have some interesting ideas there and have done some impressive concept art. Anyway, I just thought I would flag it up so if you happened to come across it, you know that I didn't crib any of my ideas from there.
For example, I thought I would have the guests arrive at the Grand Reception by river barges that sail up a channel from the river to a private dock at the Ducal Palace. This person has a main character who is a coffin-gondolier who transports the dead by river to the Grand Necropolis.
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Post by phoray on Sept 26, 2018 3:51:26 GMT
*cough* ELVEN *cough* because it would seem that Renvil made it to the safety of Kal-Sharok. This is a fucking unique and fascinating idea. I'm quite taken with it.
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Post by Space Cowboy on Sept 26, 2018 8:31:17 GMT
*cough* ELVEN *cough* because it would seem that Renvil made it to the safety of Kal-Sharok. This is a fucking unique and fascinating idea. I'm quite taken with it. My dwarf doesn’t know the difference apparently 
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Post by phoray on Sept 26, 2018 14:30:09 GMT
My dwarf doesn’t know the difference apparently  I just realized you're writing as multiple dwarves 
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Post by Space Cowboy on Sept 26, 2018 14:51:43 GMT
My dwarf doesn’t know the difference apparently  I just realized you're writing as multiple dwarves  Yes a whole squad of them 😄
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Post by phoray on Sept 26, 2018 15:14:20 GMT
Yes a whole squad of them 😄 MAkes me wonder about writing as my troop of side characters as well. I can see myself doing it with Zucca for certain. Definitely not Lucius Maybe Markham.
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