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Post by Catilina on Oct 15, 2017 0:52:23 GMT
Ralph Hawke (Background) Legacy, Part II.As we moved on, we found dwarf corpses, we found journals( I., II., III.) with them. Legion of the Dead... Paragon Tethras Garen... Varric's family! That guy was innocent in the crime with which they accused him! And trapped in this cursed place, just as us... I performed the Legion's rite. Rest in peace, dude! Nearby we found the Altar of Dumat. An Old God, and the first Archdemon... Fenris and Anders warned me. But the Altar attracted me, I started the ritual. But one thing missed. I turned around and saw Anders's face. Stop! Once I turned on him, in the Fade, because tricking that fucking demon was so important. Will not happen anymore! No more flirt with demons! (Okay, I will help Merrill, if she needs, because I promised... but after, no more! At least if he's there... eh, never say never...!) So, I defiled the Altar, and relieved. Everyone relieved. We left the altar. We're close. Anders hears voices. Fenris mocks: "Abominations hear voices, what a surprise!" Fenris, stop that! According to Carver, he can hear Corypheus... great! What the fuck this shit!? Anders cant handle this alone! I suppose Justice felt his panic... Don't fight Anders! We'll help. Fenris, Carver! To the shades! I will save him! Oh, fuck, don't do it, Justice again...please! You're right, Love? Okay, time to kill that ... whatever shit! Go! Another seal. Crazy Wardens. They want my blood, what else. They will die, of course. Sooner or later, better, if sooner. But now, let's talk... Janeka, the Wardens' leader spoke about a talking darkspawn she wants to use. Total madness... Corypheus almost used Anders/Justice, and according to Larius Corypheus leads Janeka. Foolish woman! Anders told, that the Hero of Ferelden dealt with a similar thing, and he not sure about that was a good idea. Fenris agrees, and Carver too. And I insist to my blood. Janeka wasn't so happy... Bitch! Fled and blocked the way. I think I should have killed her right away. I never really liked to talk a lot. We started to look for another way, and we found crazy Carta Dwarves. Have not we killed all of them yet? It is time to make up for this omission! Oh! Janeka! And her demons... The way cleared, go to Corypheus! What a surprise, the Wardens waited us. Janeka told us an old story about my father, my mother, Larius and blackmail. Larius, you bastard! Could you have been able to kill my mother? Ah! You never had to do it. Of course, he has accepted your terms, for her, for us! This fucking world where a man, who just want to live, can be forced into such a situation! Eh, no matter for now, this bastard still right about Corypheus... so: get out of my way or die, Janeka, as I said: my blood is mine! Then here we are... and now, the last seal. The key's not enough. Needs my blood. The ancient Darkspawn woke up. And seemed confused... He recognized the dwarf architecture, but he believed that we are in Tevinter, and he's Magister, a priest of Dumat? The Chantry was right, the Blight caused by the ancient Magisters, and this is one of them? Anders doubted: he believed, that the legend of the Black City and the Blight only a Chantry propaganda. "There's no any magical bogeymen", he told... ...and we killed this "magical bogeyman". I searched the corpse and found an amulet. Anders recognized the motif, they used it before the first Blight. He was confused. The medal confirmed the Chantry's legends. Fenris seemed satisfied. I reassured Anders, whatever happened a thousand years ago, not justify the Chantry's practice today. When we went home, Larius behaved strangely... or rather he was too... normal. At home, I finally could talk with Carver. Perhaps, he will be less asshole. Mother told, we more alike than we ever thought.
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Post by Catilina on Oct 23, 2017 1:36:42 GMT
Ralph Hawke (Background), Act 2, The Long RoadA weird mission.Yesterday, in the Hanged man, Aveline asked my help. Late morning I visited her in her office with Anders and Fenris. I thought we had to kill something again. We are good at this, better than her guards. But now not about this. Aveline got us a little pack, to give it to Donnic. Hmm. Interesting. Anyway, I accepted this weird task. I admit I was curious. Copper marigold.When we gave this pack to Donnic, he was surprised. Aveline! Are you kidding me? What the fuck is this? "Tell me, it wasn't wasted time!" "Sorry, serah Hawke, I can't do that.""Aveline! I need answer! Now."Another interesting task... Let's play! Failed. What a surprise! Aveline! What do you want? Three goats and a sheaf of wheat…What a courtship! Why Varric's not here now? “She’d do a lot better, to just get this fellow alone in a room.Life’s too short.”(Anders! Three years, remember?) Okay, I suggest, go to the Hanged Man! A drink can help. It gives some courage. The plan is: I call Donnic, and Aveline will join us... The Hanged ManAveline nowhere... What the fuck! Aveline! Donnic supposed I want something from him... Aveline, you...! So. You are here. So, speak! And don't be a coward! Okay, Aveline, I have an idea. A patrol. Together. We clear the way, you can speak with him. Do not fail! Do not waste my time! Let's go! The Long Road... Hopeless. And painfulAnders can not stand it anymore: “Are you blind, man? Kiss her already!”“Captain?”Aveline angry. On us. Painfully fun. Back to the office!Aveline worries. Unnecessary. Everything is okay. Next time, when I come, I have to knock before I go in ... C'mon, guys, we need a drink, and Varric needs a story! ___ Video:
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Post by Catilina on Oct 29, 2017 17:18:31 GMT
Ralph Hawke (Background) All That Remains It's hard to start. Three weeks, but nightmares do not disappear. Drunken visions, whispering in silence. Mom's dead eyes. Fenris's cold, lifeless hand wakes me up, I open my eyes and look at him... Anders smiling at me: "Do you know, what the strongest force in the universe is? Love", his mouth's sewn. Quentin whispers, "I love you. You always made me so proud." Mother stands beside him, in white dimness. Her hand on his shoulder. Smiles. Enough! Time to sober up! ___ Before that the Carta dwarves broke into the castle, we went to the DuPuis house. The house was full of shades, and we found some evidence (Aveline, your guards...!), and Meredith's apologetic letter. Pathetic. We also found Du'Puis, with a woman. He said, he supposed this woman in trouble, he needs her blood for track her, if she's in danger. It's suspicious, but I know the spell, so probably he does not lie, nevertheless, I'm sure, he knows more. He said, he will help me in the investigation, I can find him in the Lowtown. I feel, it worth a try. Back to Emeric. But Emeric was not at Gallows, disappeared. Poor man, his possible death probably enough proof to the Templars, that his theory's not a delusion. Anyway, I did not say anything about my discovery. Better to continue the investigation without these idiots. So for a while, I did not have time to deal with this issue and seems nobody cares about it. A few weeks later Gamlen visited me. He was nervous. He said Mother did not visit him at the usual time. He was worried about it. I didn't wonder so much, Gamlen's a grumpy bastard, but somehow Mother insists him. Bodahn suggested, she probably meets with her suitor, who sent these white lilies. What?! Emeric spoke about white lilies... Go, to DuPuis, until it not too late! Let's show me, what you know! Gascard duPuis helped, as he promised, I hope, isn't too late! Mother's amulet! And an altar. With her portrait?! What the hell is this?! I feel more and more, it's too late. That smell! Finally we found the murderer. Totally mad. Said, Mother was waiting for me... And Gascard, that bastard, knows him. He was his mentor. Quentin –as he called the madman–, offered to DuPuis, he can be his apprentice again. Turn against me, little shit, and I'll kill you! Gascard stayed with me. Good boy! We'll return to this topic later, just get my mother back! “Do you know, what the strongest force in the universe is? Love.” The madman says. With crazy adoration in his eyes turned to a lifeless body, and gently touched its face. The corpse stood up and walked slowly toward us. It was wearing a wedding dress. Mother?! I killed the monster. I went to my mother and hugged her cold body. "I can't do anything for her. His magic kept her alive." Anders said. "I love you. You always made me so proud.", I heard. Mother dead eyes looked at me. She smiled when finally found her peace in the death. At home, Gamlen was already waiting for me. I told him what had happened. He blamed me, and the magic. Anders was with me and didn't blame me for anything. He remained to me. He's my family. ___ Since then I have not seen Gascard duPuis. I don't give a shit. His death wouldn't bring my Mother back. The nightmares will disappear over time, I know... I hope.
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Post by Catilina on Nov 7, 2017 3:01:29 GMT
Ralph Hawke (Background) The first day after mother's death, what I did not start in The Hanged Man. I went to Aveline, maybe she has any work what can help to drown my anger in blood to forget. But she just helped to remember to my loss and failure. She wanted to speak about. Smile on my face, why not enough this to her? "What is it about the death, that brings out the speeches", I answered, and went away. "Don't lose your friends too, Hawke", I heard... Eh, I don't think, she deserved my sarcasm. Yet I need a mug of that rat urine. The Hanged Man. Again. Family MattersVarric came to me. He said, it is time to visit Bartrand. Fuck, I almost forget. Just a beer, and go! I took Fenris and Anders, and followed Varric. Strange. Bartrand's Mansion was neglected as if nobody lived inside. I kicked the door. Crazy guards rushed us. It looks like Bartrand is prepared. We slaughtered them. From behind a corner, a dwarf ran to us. Compared to what massacre we did, he was very happy to see us. Varric knew him, Hugin was his name, he was the steward of Bartrand. He said, seems Bartrand got mad: that the idol we found in the Deep Roads, he said, singing to him. Bartrand sold the idol. Strange. We must find him! Finally, we found Bartrand. He attacked us with his remained guards. We spared his life, need to know what happened. He seemed crazy. A lot. He said, he committed a mistake when he sold the idol. He doesn't hear the song anymore. He wants to hear the song again. He must to hear the song again! I asked him, who was, who bought the idol, but he just said, a woman. A woman, who was like the sun. I did not understand anything. I asked Anders, perhaps he could help. Anders said, that this is unnatural. If Bartrand wouldn't a dwarf, he would suspect demonic possession. He tried a spell on him, but even said, its effect will not last long. He was not able to say any important, but at least Varric could say goodbye to him. I know I should have killed him, but I was not able to do it. A Rumor Making the RoundsIn a few days, Varric told me, rumors circulate about me in the city. I, and a band of pirates tried to burn the chantry down in the middle of the night... What? Varric! I already told, you must Stop spreading rumors about me! He said it was not he. Just warned me, that the people fear me. Great. (Video): To be continued...
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Post by Catilina on Nov 11, 2017 11:23:35 GMT
I finished Act 2. with Ralph Hawke(Background) Demands of the QunI got a message from the Viscount. His son disappeared again, he fears, he in trouble, and he suspects, the Arishok wants to use Seamus against him. Okay, let's go to Arishok, straight after I visited Aveline. Perhaps she would a useful companion when I speak with Arishok, and... she didn't deserve my sarcasm before, let's try to placate her! I don't have too many friends here. I did come to the conclusion that I'm not good at that. I just quarrelled with her again. She said, maybe the Templars' preventive methods are good: imprison the suspected criminals before they can commit crimes, perhaps not that bad... Aveline, maybe not you are the best guard captain ever, just think about it... So, I rather took Anders, Fenris, and Isabela... but Isabela at the last minute said, she has some... problem. Fortunately, Varric was at the docks, so he joined us. The Arishok denied, that Seamus would be been a captive. He joined to the qun freely, and now he went to meet with his father to the Chantry. Anders doubted, that the Viscount want to involve the Chantry. But we know someone, who would be able to do this... Go! The Chantry was quiet and empty. It never was really loud and lively place, but this silence was strange. Above, behind the railing, we found Seamus. He knelt like he would pray. He was dead. Petrice came, with her fucking Templars and some civilians. They attacked us. You will pay for that, Petrice, the time came. While we killed Petrice's mob, she warned the Grand Cleric. Clever girl, her plan almost worked. Almost. Elthina perhaps not that dumb, as she assumed. And undoubtedly has some-kind dry humour, I would appreciate it if she had cared more about the people, than the eternity, and would not believe, that here among the mortals, she should count the Maker's time instead of the man's time... anyway, she was late with the punishment. A qunari archer came in and executed Petrice. Viscount arrived. He was broken when he saw his son. A few days later I found Aveline and Isabella in my house when I got home. They quarrelled. Seems almost fun, but I was tired and impatient. Shut up... please! Now one by one! Aveline has a problem with Arishok, and Isabela will die, because of this fucking artifact. I already said, she shouldn't let that bastard to blackmail her. Looks like she's not listening to me... Isabela said, the artifact related to the qunari. Okay, go for it then! This artifact was the Qunari sacred scripture. And Isabela ran away with it. Fuck. So: go to the Arishok. Aveline already waits for me there. She wants back two elves, who killed a guard, and the qun gave them shelter. The Arishock called the elves. They said, that the guard raped their sister. They reported, but the guards didn't do anything. So, they made justice. "This is true, Aveline?""There were rumours... I will investigate... but this not justified...""This IS justified, Aveline, you know me, I would have done the same thing."
But just after that, I castrated him with a rusty knife... You and your law and order! I know, this doesn't help, but I don't want to help in it. Koslun was a bigger problem. Fuck, Isabela! I would have helped you to kill that bastard... but this mess! The Arishok wanted a war... ...and already started it. Somehow we got out the of docks. On the way, Fenris and Anders ran to us. "You’re safe! Thanks to Maker! I thought they got you!" Anders hugged me hard. How I love you! The city on flames. Corpses and qunari everywhere. In the Lowtown some Grey Wardens fought against a bunch of qunari. We helped them. But... Carver? And Stroud. We could have used some swords, but they had to go. Anyway, was good to see you again, brother. The situation in the Hightown was not even better. We killed many qunari, but I didn't saw that Saarebas. I fell to the ground, my head was dizzy. The Saarebas came closer, and started to casting. I had no chance. A high ranked Templar saved my life, a woman. Knight Commander Meredith. Impressive! I am glad that there is no time to be grateful! We found First Enchanter Orsino. He lay on the ground, dead mages around him. We must go to the Tower and stop the qunari! I will lead. I did not even mention: the Knight Commander let me use my magic to defend the city. What an honor! Many qunari rallied at the gate. Meredith said, we need to attack, but Orsino suggested distraction. I'm with him. Meredith doesn't believe, this works. "Have confidence, Knight Commander!" Orsino said, and attacked the qunari guards. Worked. The Viscount's head rolled to our feet when we entered. The Arishok spotted us. I did not really hope, but it looks like he is willing to talk. Let's try! He needs that fucking book... Fuck, Isabela! But we must end this madness. And there's only one way this ends! Fenris spoke. (Sexy when he speaks qunlat.) He convinced the Arishok, I deserve a duel with him. Let's do this! Fucking strong bastard! And fast. But still mortal. I looked around. People celebrating. Meredith and Orsino arrived. „Is it over?” „It's over.” Meredith was not happy. "The city has a new Champion", she said. That face! I really liked it. I looked at Anders. He looked at me. I won, love. For you. And now, I need to drink. Lot. Do not look like that, love, after that, you can deal with my broken body. I'm not a good healer. Let's go!
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Post by fylimar on Nov 11, 2017 11:58:39 GMT
I finished Act 2. with Ralph Hawke(Background) Demands of the QunI got a message from the Viscount. His son disappeared again, he fears, he in trouble, and he suspects, the Arishok wants to use Seamus against him. Okay, let's go to Arishok, straight after I visited Aveline. Perhaps she would a useful companion when I speak with Arishok, and... she didn't deserve my sarcasm before, let's try to placate her! I don't have too many friends here. I did come to the conclusion that I'm not good at that. I just quarrelled with her again. She said, maybe the Templars' preventive methods are good: imprison the suspected criminals before they can commit crimes, perhaps not that bad... Aveline, maybe not you are the best guard captain ever, just think about it... So, I rather took Anders, Fenris, and Isabela... but Isabela at the last minute said, she has some... problem. Fortunately, Varric was at the docks, so he joined us. The Arishok said, they denied, that Seamus would be been a captive. He joined to the qun freely, and now he went to meet with his father to the Chantry. Anders doubted, that the Viscount want to involve the Chantry. But not Petrice... Go! The Chantry was quiet and empty. It never was really loud and lively place, but this silence was strange. Above, behind the railing, we found Seamus. He knelt like he would pray. He was dead. Petrice came, with her fucking Templars and some civilians. They attacked us. You will pay for that, Petrice, the time came. While we killed Petrice's mob, she warned the Grand Cleric. Clever girl, her plan almost worked. Almost. Elthina perhaps not that dumb, as she assumed. And undoubtedly has some-kind dry humour, I would appreciate it if she had cared more about the people, than the eternity, and would not believe, that here among the mortals, she should count the Maker's time instead of the man's time... anyway, she was late with the punishment. A qunari archer came in and executed Petrice. Viscount arrived. He was broken when he saw his son. A few days later I found Aveline and Isabella in my house when I got home. They quarrelled. Seems almost fun, but I was tired and impatient. Shut up... please! Now one by one! Aveline has a problem with Arishok, and Isabela will die, because of this fucking artifact. I already said, she shouldn't let that bastard to blackmail her. Looks like she's not listening to me... Isabela said, the artifact related to the qunari. Okay, go for it then! This artifact was the Qunari sacred scripture. And Isabela ran away with it. Fuck. So: go to the Arishok. Aveline already waits for me there. She wants back two elves, who killed a guard, and the qun gave them shelter. The Arishock called the elves. They said, that the guard raped their sister. They reported, but the guards didn't do anything. So, they made justice. "This is true, Aveline?""There were rumours... I will investigate... but this not justified...""This IS justified, Aveline, you know me, I would have done the same thing."
But just after that, I castrated him with a rusty knife... You and your law and order! I know, this doesn't help, but I don't want to help in it. Koslun was a bigger problem. Fuck, Isabela! I would have helped you to kill that bastard... but this mess! The Arishok wanted a war... ...and already started it. Somehow we got out the of docks. On the way, Fenris and Anders ran to us. "You’re safe! Thanks to Maker! I thought they got you!" Anders hugged me hard. How I love you! The city on flames. Corpses and qunari everywhere. In the Lowtown some Grey Wardens fought against a bunch of qunari. We helped them. But... Carver? And Stroud. We could have used some swords, but they had to go. Anyway, was good to see you again, brother. The situation in the Hightown was not even better. We killed many qunari, but I didn't saw that Saarebas. I fell to the ground, my head was dizzy. The Saarebas came closer, and started to casting. I had no chance. A high ranked Templar saved my life, a woman. Knight Commander Meredith. Impressive! I am glad that there is no time to be grateful! We found First Enchanter Orsino. He lay on the ground, dead mages around him. We must go to the Tower and stop the qunari! I will lead. I did not even mention: the Knight Commander let me use my magic to defend the city. What an honor! Many qunari rallied at the gate. Meredith said, we need to attack, but Orsino suggested distraction. I'm with him. Meredith doesn't believe, this works. "Have confidence, Knight Commander!" Orsino said, and attacked the qunari guards. Worked. The Viscount's head rolled to our feet when we entered. The Arishok spotted us. I did not really hope, but it looks like he is willing to talk. Let's try! He needs that fucking book... Fuck, Isabela! But we must end this madness. And there's only one way this ends! Fenris spoke. (Sexy when he speaks qunlat.) He convinced the Arishok, I deserve a duel with him. Let's do this! Fucking strong bastard! And fast. But still mortal. I looked around. People celebrating. Meredith and Orsino arrived. „Is it over?” „It's over.” Meredith was not happy. "The city has a new Champion", she said. That face! I really liked it. I looked at Anders. He looked at me. I won, love. For you. And now, I need to drink. Lot. Do not look like that, love, after that, you can deal with my broken body. I'm not a good healer. Let's go! Ralph really looks dashing in that Grey Warden armor - especially that modell looks far better on men than on women (the mage version, I like better on women) and Ralph really rocks it
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Post by Catilina on Nov 13, 2017 23:20:23 GMT
Okay, I started Mark of the Assassin with Ralph and this feeling: I love red!Hawke!
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Post by Catilina on Jan 1, 2018 16:25:08 GMT
Back to Ralph HawkeIntermezzoThe Champion of Kirkwall. I love it! It's not about the power... not yet... and I don't mind. I achieved my goal, I do not need to look over my shoulder to see if the Templars follow me. I'm virtually untouchable. This means more than any power! Never ever need to hide, what I'm. All my life I wanted this and I reached. Anders already moved into my mansion. Kirkwall most famous noble is an apostate and openly live with an apostate in the middle of Hightown. Fuck of everyone!
"Just be careful, silent!" – No, Father! I never will lower my head anymore! I will never retreat without a word anymore! But I learned a lot. No more compromise! You didn't want mage children because you didn't want such a life for us, what you had. You never showed that, but we knew, we never will be "normal". Bethany died thinking she was a burden, but she wanted to be useful for the last time. I live as a mage, and when I die, I will die as a mage, proudly. And I will fight for the others! I know, I was unjust to you. You raised us safely and we had a good life, but your way is not mine. I don't want to hide anymore, and I don't have to hide anymore! I did it. And I'm sad, you and Mother don't see it. Mark of the AssassinI get some social invitations. I enjoy rejecting these, but not all. I know, I need allies, only I don't really like to smile with uninteresting people. But we got a promising task: Varric told me some Orlesian party... I don't really into Orlesians, but at least we can go away from Kirkwall's shit... for a while. Away from Kirkwall, together! Great. Of course, I accept. An elf assassin asks me to steal something... But... wait... Varric! Why this elf thinks, I steal things, because people ask me this...? „I may have talked you up a bit. Maybe more than once.” Wonderful. I sighed (I will kill him once...) „What? You’d rather I told everyone you were a mage” Very funny, dwarf... very funny, thank you for reminding me. Arrival Get out of my way!Carver?! „So, still playing at these little adventures. You never did know when to put away your toys. ” „And you never knew when to shut up”Alpha Wyvern Some shit. And the deserved victory In the Castle Problems. „Give me a moment alone with this guard! I’ll get the key.” „No, murders … or whatever you thinking!”The elf girl is a qunari. Problems again. The Qun is interesting. An interesting awful bullshit.
After some treasure hunt and fight, we finally confronted with the Duke. And his pet. Say goodbye, Orlesian! Carver loves the fair game – my lovely little brother! Duke: “You wouldn’t dare!”Hawke: “Wouldn’t I?”Carver: “Drop a sword on him!”Finally we helped to Tallis, her task was understandable. And profitable. Tallis left. I realized, Anders angel-face perhaps even more frightening than Justice's anger... It's already was there, but so romantic, beautiful moment! Back to Kirkwall. Okay, Varric, it wasn't a bad idea, I owe you a jar of that rat urine in The Hanged Man.
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Post by Catilina on Jan 22, 2018 22:46:59 GMT
Ralph HawkeWe're back from Orlais. Anders doesn't stop to try to convince my dog, not with much success!
But he's mostly nervous: still doesn't believe we're safe, so I gave him the key to the old secret passage to his clinic. Calm down, love! No one dares to threaten the Champion of Kirkwall! I try to help him, but I see, he's more and more depressed, and he has a reasons. The Knight Commander crushed the Mage Underground. Seems, what for he worked's gone. Sometimes I feel helplessness and it makes me angry. *** Three years passed since the qunari war. Kirkwall quietly regenerated. But the city still doesn't have Viscount, Meredith and her Templars rule over the city. Orsino tried to gather sympathizers, I suppose he succeeds. The nobles are divided, but many of them would support a change. But the Grand Cleric don't care. „If the Maker wants...” (Oh, yes "Your Grace", how do you said before? "...the Maker's time isn't men's time, we do not need to rush ...but you not trouble yourself, I will step in when if time..." And when the fucking time coming, "Your Grace", when you're already willing to lift your holy ass and to create order on your garbage-dump? Hold back your dogs, "Your Grace", or I will! Pathetic!) But seems I have supporters: some nobles offered their help against Meredith. More bad news. Sandal and Bodahn will leave: they go to Orlais. Where will I find such a good staff and friends? Bodahn worries about Sandal's future. I offered my help, but Bodahn refused. Sandal got a work in Orlais. What can I say: good luck then. Good thing, they stay for a while yet.
And if this not enough yet, the current problem is: Anders wants to drink some strange Tevinter potion, to separate Justice and him. I know some Tevinter rituals and magic, but I've never heard any potion like that. If this exists, probably a dangerous experiment, true, I'm not an alchemist... (side note: I have to find out!) Anders hiding something, I know. When I question him about it, he tries to avoid my gaze or just joking (I was not really curious to your dream about the naked Grand Cleric, love. I had enough nightmare for a life, and it not over yet...). I don't even understand. Justice didn't cause any trouble in the last three years. If he insists to this, I'm with him, as always. But, the later the better, maybe change his mind... perhaps, once we will find some safe solution. This just weird and risky. And why he doesn't tell me, what's wrong with it? Because there's something, I'm sure. I don't want to lose him! And the ingredients ... who would able to drink such a ... shit ... willingly? Let's give him some time to thinking. (And again: I must find out!!!) Now, go to Fenris! I didn't talk with him since we back from Orlais. But before I need a drink. + Maraas in The Hanged Man (video)
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Post by Catilina on Jan 29, 2018 22:15:03 GMT
Ralph HawkeAlone + QB
When I arrived in Fenris' Mansion, Aveline was there. She was impatient, Fenris swore as usually. Aveline left, Fenris told, he found his sister and contacted her. His sister will wait for him in The Hanged Man. But he suspects a trap. If this a problem, I'm with him, let's go to find out. I did not call anyone, I did not think I should. Fuck. His sister betrayed Fenris. Danarius smirked, at the stairs and called Fenris "pet". There's nothing between us long ago, perhaps never was, but as this bastard look at him, I flooded with anger "I'm going to wipe that smirk off your face!" That fucking bastard! We almost died. I should develop my defensive abilities, or just miss Anders. Anyway, the magister dead, Fenris ripped out his heart. I'm glad, he's on my side... And he turned on his sister. I felt his anger, but I didn't let him kill her. I did not want him to become his sister's murderer. When he realized, he lost his just found family, I saw the sadness in his eyes, while he desperately scolded the magic. I ensured him, he has friends. He looked at me and said bitterly: " Yes, a mage is my only friend" I have often heard the word "mage" to pronounce with such a disdaining tone. My hands clenched into fists... I succeed to restrain my suddenly erupting anger, and drank a lot. Later, when I already calmed down. I visited him. Varric and Aveline were there. I just heard, he want to stay here, and Varric answered: "The freedom must be a terrible burden, I guess". Eh, Varric... They left, and we started to speak finally. We've been trying to avoid it for three years. (But when will you stop blaming the magic?) Anyway, maybe he's my most loyal friend I ever had. (I'm sorry... for everything!) I went home at dawn. Anders was worried and jealous. I tried to reassure him, there's nothing wrong, I was able to handle the things well, but he didn't believe when saw the scars. I told him, what happened. He was angry I didn't call him, and he started to heal me. We did not talk about the potion, and I was glad for it, if this is what need for it, I will be wounded every day until he doesn't forget that bullshit. + Video:
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Post by Catilina on Feb 11, 2018 23:22:48 GMT
Ralph Hawke (Charactersheet)Finding NathanielAnders and I just went to Aveline, for some rumours, when a black haired lady stopped us. She asked us to find her brother, a Warden, Nathaniel Howe. When Anders heard his name, exhilarated, I not really remember, when he was such enthusiastic recently... Was something between them? And why this bothers me? Anders tells they were together in Amaranthine, just usual warden things... okay, let's go for him, Anders perhaps would kill me, if I refuse that. But the Deep Roads' not that funny place, so, probably we need some help. I called Fenris and Aveline. As Nathaniel's sister said, we followed our old path of the expedition, through some Darkspawn, and found Howe. Should I be jealous? Rather let's go! We found Nathaniel, this was the task. We're done here... ..as I imagined. But Nathaniel had another plan, his crew missed, he doesn't want to come without them. Of course, let's go to save people! Aveline doesn't like the idea to protect „foolish” Wardens „from themselves”. A dwarf, named Temmerin Glavonak, from the Vigil's Keep, helped us with his explosive. He said a little farther, maybe there are survivors. Other groups of Darkspawn, and... Carver?! Thanks to the Maker we didn't leave! Did he thank me? Who are you? Did you eat my brother? Or the Taint ate his brain... Now, we're done here. Okay, new target: The Hanged Man! +videos (To be continued.)
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Post by Catilina on Mar 30, 2018 11:03:12 GMT
Hmm... I have a question. I want to build a "perfect" red!Hawke, so I went back to a rare moment in DA2. It happens in the Act2, if Hawke sends Feynriel to the Dalish in the Act1, and visit on the Sundermount before of the “Night Terrors” (Feynriel’s quest). The Dalish hunter tells, that the Templars tortured an elf, and interrogated him. The Templar didn’t deny that, in fact, says, they’ll continue this – they’re ready to kill every elf (she don’t care about the “knife ears”) for their escaped “property”: Feynriel… So: there's a peaceful and a bloody solution. Which one should I pick with Ralph Hawke? Which would his decision? (Background) He Killed Karras as well (he can't lie) and the Templars at night, who wanted to avenge him. To kill the Templars, especially with blood magic, surprisingly satisfying. I'm rather inclined to the violent solution, but the peaceful one also has some points (perhaps, the Templars will not abuse the clan anymore, and Ralph, while hot-headed and aggressive, never kills just for fun, only for reason – true, mostly he find a reason, so he's not a diplomat...) Questions, questions... Here the video with both solution:
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Post by fylimar on Mar 30, 2018 12:55:49 GMT
Hmm... I have a question. I want to build a "perfect" red!Hawke, so I went back to a rare moment in DA2. It happens in the Act2, if Hawke sends Feynriel to the Dalish in the Act1, and visit on the Sundermount before of the “Night Terrors” (Feynriel’s quest). The Dalish hunter tells, that the Templars tortured an elf, and interrogated him. The Templar didn’t deny that, in fact, says, they’ll continue this – they’re ready to kill every elf (she don’t care about the “knife ears”) for their escaped “property”: Feynriel… So: there's a peaceful and a bloody solution. Which one should I pick with Ralph Hawke? Which would his decision? (Background) He Killed Karras as well (he can't lie) and the Templars at night, who wanted to avenge him. To kill the Templars, especially with blood magic, surprisingly satisfying. I'm rather inclined to the violent solution, but the peaceful one also has some points (perhaps, the Templars will not abuse the clan anymore, and Ralph, while hot-headed and aggressive, never kills just for fun, only for reason – true, mostly he find a reason, so he's not a diplomat...) Questions, questions... Here the video with both solution: I'd go with the violent solution. It would be more in line, if he killed Karras too. The situation is a bit similar. Ralph tries to protect a group of people from templars abusing their power - I never played a truely red Hawke, but I killed that templar girl once too. She was a mean cookie - a bit like the templar mirror image of Grace in act 3. Played Lia Aisling, my human commoner a bit more. She saved Redcliffe, freed Jowan so he could help and decided to go to the circle for mage help. Morrigan was sent into the Fade (she simply has the most funny dialogue with Eamon and the demon there ) and defeated the demon. Then we had a bit of confusion in camp, because Leliana became jealous of Alistair. Lia never was anything but friendly to Ali, but all of a sudden, he had 'care' as status. I told him that he has to go look elsewhere and - bam - 26 disapproval. I have choosen the nicest possible answer and never even encouraged him in the first place and still it was obviously my fault - whiner. At least Zevran takes it like a sport. Recruiting for the batlle of the walking dead Nicely enough, everyone survived Facing the demon And Ali is happy
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Post by Catilina on Sept 18, 2018 23:41:02 GMT
Today just added some miscellaneous to Ralph Hawke's character sheet (still under construction)
(His "What did you today in DA" story)
9.41 Dragon – Herald Rest, Skyhold:
"Thin little boy with a puppy. They are coming! I'm not afraid. Never! Nevermore! I will not run away! I will not give him to you! You will not hurt him!" –
"Shut up!"
"I was a coward, COWARD! I ran, he suffered. ... COWARD!" –
"Shut the fucking up!"
"But. I'm. No. Longer. A COWARD! I'll face you! Just come here! ... Anger. Heat. Red. Take it! Heat. My hands are flaming! How? They're flaming! Screams! Gone. Peace. They will not hurt you anymore! I will not run anymore. I am strong." –
"It was an accident..."
"I know... Mother cries. Why are you crying? Try to hug her. She turns away. Her face... sad. Cold." –
"She blamed me..."
"As always, yes? Father coming. Angry? No... It's... different... I don't understand. I did nothing wrong... they wanted to hurt him! Again! I couldn't... let... them! Tears. I don't cry! I..." –
"What do you want, spirit?"
"I want to help... it still hurt you. You're not coward. Not murderer. They're gone... but..."
"Yes, not my fault. Nothing's my fault. Now leave me, I want to drink my beer. ALONE!" ... "Spirit! Cole! Wait..." ... Fuck..."
His jug has been emptied. „One more... or two!” yelled.
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Memories drifted into his brain. Again.
9.13 – A farm, near to Redcliffe, Ferelden
It's been a long time since. He didn't tell anyone. Sometimes they caught him, beaten him, took away his coins – it was not so hard. They were two, and much stronger than him. They threatened him, they'll catch his mabari. He once saw what they did to a cat. And he ran away and hid when he saw them. And he felt deep shame.
He did not want his father to see his fear, so just went to "play" as usual, but avoided the place where he met them. He felt like a coward. He was sitting under a tree and the puppy ran around him. He fell asleep and dreamed. In his dream, he was big and strong – like the heroes, in Mother's tales. They begged for their lives...
Suddenly he woke up and saw them – his dog in their hands, disgusting smile on their face. He was terribly afraid but stood up. He can't let again! He must face them! Suddenly he felt like in his dream. He felt, he to have grown. His eyes were feverish, his hands flared up. He stepped toward them, no longer felt fear.
The guys stopped, the dog was released, jumped down, and looking for shelter at his feet. "You will not hurt anymore! You will not hurt anyone anymore!", hissed. His fury exploded, burning the guys. They burned like a torch, their scream was terrible. Then everything suddenly became silent. It's over. He was strong. Invincible. Like in his dream!
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Mother and Father approached.
"You see, I'm strong, can protect myself!" He ran to her, and tried to hug her – but Mother turned around. "Mom, why do you cry? No problem...", It was something he had not seen before in her eyes. Fear. Coldness.
"I've defended ourselves", he explained to Father. But Malcolm was not proud. And he was not angry. That was different. It was sad.
"Do not be angry! I did..." A tear rolled over his face. No. He's not crying. He's strong.
"Come on, boy, we'll go home. Everything will be okay", Father said. But his stomach clenched. And he didn't know, why.
"What happened to me?"
"Do not be afraid! You are a mage just like me."
"But you do not live in the Tower you live with us ... I know, the mages live in the Tower. Are you a Mali...ficiarum?", whispered. "You did not hurt anyone! Am I a Malificiarum?", shuddered.
"I'm not a Maleficarum, you either. You're my son and a mage. Where did you hear that word?
"When we were in Chantry. An old woman said. It sounded bad. I was glad I'm not ... like that... But you did not do that like me... your hand never flared."
"You shouldn't do it either. You have to learn to hide it. You're my smart son. You know what they say about those who have the Gift."
"But what kind of Gift is this, if I can not use it?" He asked disappointedly.
"You can use it. I'll teach you how. But you have to learn not to use it. You have to learn to defend yourself without it. You do not want it to happen again. "
"No," he said and lowered his head. He was not entirely honest.
The next day they collected their belongings and moved away.
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Post by Catilina on Oct 14, 2018 11:32:05 GMT
Catilina I would love to read your stories. Can you add the links here for me? So, if you want...
Ralph Hawke's "What did you today" story and character sheetand a little unfinished story related a mage kid. Willard Trevelyan's character sheetI have many other characters, but only these have some written background yet. All of them under construction, so don't expect some great stories, and my english is really weak – sorry for it.
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Post by Slyvalyth on Oct 14, 2018 18:24:38 GMT
Catilina I would love to read your stories. Can you add the links here for me? So, if you want...
Ralph Hawke's "What did you today" story and character sheetand a little unfinished story related a mage kid. Willard Trevelyan's character sheetI have many other characters, but only these have some written background yet. All of them under construction, so don't expect some great stories, and my english is really weak – sorry for it. LOVE IT!! I will savor every read but after a few cups of coffee and when Gasper is dead.
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Post by Slyvalyth on Oct 24, 2018 19:20:10 GMT
Catilina I would love to read your stories. Can you add the links here for me? So, if you want...
Ralph Hawke's "What did you today" story and character sheetand a little unfinished story related a mage kid. Willard Trevelyan's character sheetI have many other characters, but only these have some written background yet. All of them under construction, so don't expect some great stories, and my english is really weak – sorry for it. Between Reinhardt and Willard, they have a lot of sarcasm and anger in them. Maybe Abram and Anduin can help them trust again. Sagittarians are very loyal, patient, caring friends. Reinhardt is a hottie but Anduin knows he has no chance against Anders, lol. How do you figure out their birthdates? I don't know if I done mine right. I found out when the modern inquisition started and counted backwards. Sad about Willard and his templar paramour. Such a shame that love can't truly blossom in circles. I feel conflicted about supporting circles that protects people from magic but needing major changes so mages don't feel like they are in prison.
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Post by Catilina on Oct 24, 2018 20:10:11 GMT
So, if you want...
Ralph Hawke's "What did you today" story and character sheetand a little unfinished story related a mage kid. Willard Trevelyan's character sheetI have many other characters, but only these have some written background yet. All of them under construction, so don't expect some great stories, and my english is really weak – sorry for it. Between Reinhardt and Willard, they have a lot of sarcasm and anger in them. Maybe Abram and Anduin can help them trust again. Sagittarians are very loyal, patient, caring friends. Reinhardt is a hottie but Anduin knows he has no chance against Anders, lol. How do you figure out their birthdates? I don't know if I done mine right. I found out when the modern inquisition started and counted backwards. Sad about Willard and his templar paramour. Such a shame that love can't truly blossom in circles. I feel conflicted about supporting circles that protects people from magic but needing major changes so mages don't feel like they are in prison. Hawke's mother and father met in 9:05 Dragon, they left Kirkwall a few months later, and Leandra already was pregnant, so: Hawke born at the end of 9:05, or in 9:06. Hawke ~24-25 in 9:30, when the Blight destroyed Lothering, and they went to Kirkwall. My really angry guy rather Ralph, he's the most problematic among them – Reinhardt is a hotheaded sweetheart, a devoted lover and friend – Willard more distrustful, or rather he wants to believe, but don't want to be naive, if this has some sense – he already lost many whom he trusted sometimes. Abram and Anduin probably would their good friend. And you're right, not a chance against Anders. I never felt conflicts about the Circles. They must be destroyed – at least as prisons. As education and research centres, they're useful – but not necessarily in one place. The Inquisition paints a grotesque picture about the Circles. Vivienne absolutely wrong – the truth is the Kinloch Hold, The Gallows and the White Spire, and that the mages' children become the Chantry's properties, like Wynne's son.
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Post by Slyvalyth on Oct 24, 2018 20:14:03 GMT
Between Reinhardt and Willard, they have a lot of sarcasm and anger in them. Maybe Abram and Anduin can help them trust again. Sagittarians are very loyal, patient, caring friends. Reinhardt is a hottie but Anduin knows he has no chance against Anders, lol.
How do you figure out their birthdates? I don't know if I done mine right. I found out when the modern inquisition started and counted backwards.
Sad about Willard and his templar paramour. Such a shame that love can't truly blossom in circles. I feel conflicted about supporting circles that protects people from magic but needing major changes so mages don't feel like they are in prison. Hawke's mother and father met in 9:05 Dragon, they left Kirkwall a few months later, and Leandra already was pregnant, so: Hawke born at the end of 9:05, or in 9:06. Hawke ~24-25 in 9:30, when the Blight destroyed Lothering, and they went to Kirkwall. My angry guy rather Ralph, he's the most problematic among them – Reinhardt is a hotheaded sweetheart, a devoted lover and friend – Willard more distrustful, or rather he wants to believe, but don't want to be naive, if this has some sense – he already lost many whom he trusted sometimes. Abram and Anduin probably would their good friend. I never felt conflicts about the Circles. They must be destroyed – at least as prisons. As education and research centres, they're useful – but not necessarily in one place. The Inquisition paints a grotesque picture about the Circles. Vivienne absolutely wrong. So I got the birthdates wrong then. Abram and Anduin is 31 but I had their dates on 9:07. The modern inquisition occurred in 9:41 / 9:47 (something like that).
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Post by Catilina on Oct 24, 2018 20:17:46 GMT
Hawke's mother and father met in 9:05 Dragon, they left Kirkwall a few months later, and Leandra already was pregnant, so: Hawke born at the end of 9:05, or in 9:06. Hawke ~24-25 in 9:30, when the Blight destroyed Lothering, and they went to Kirkwall. My angry guy rather Ralph, he's the most problematic among them – Reinhardt is a hotheaded sweetheart, a devoted lover and friend – Willard more distrustful, or rather he wants to believe, but don't want to be naive, if this has some sense – he already lost many whom he trusted sometimes. Abram and Anduin probably would their good friend. I never felt conflicts about the Circles. They must be destroyed – at least as prisons. As education and research centres, they're useful – but not necessarily in one place. The Inquisition paints a grotesque picture about the Circles. Vivienne absolutely wrong. So I got the birthdates wrong then. Abram and Anduin is 31 but I had their dates on 9:07. The modern inquisition occurred in 9:41 / 9:47 (something like that). 9:41. The 5th Blight started at 6.30, the Kirkwall's rebellion started at 9:37. Cassandra interrogated Varric in ~9:40-41. The Trespasser happened in 9:43. So: if Abram and Anduin born in 9:07, they're 33 when the Inquisition started.
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Post by Slyvalyth on Oct 25, 2018 17:15:54 GMT
Catilina I would love to read your stories. Can you add the links here for me? So, if you want...
Ralph Hawke's "What did you today" story and character sheetand a little unfinished story related a mage kid. Willard Trevelyan's character sheetI have many other characters, but only these have some written background yet. All of them under construction, so don't expect some great stories, and my english is really weak – sorry for it. Amazingly detailed backstories, especially Ralph's! Thank you for sharing your stories with me. I'm not certain if I want to create character sheets for my 3 inquisitors than what I've already written. I'm having more fun revealing their personalities through their dialogue.
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Post by Catilina on Oct 25, 2018 18:36:12 GMT
So, if you want...
Ralph Hawke's "What did you today" story and character sheetand a little unfinished story related a mage kid. Willard Trevelyan's character sheetI have many other characters, but only these have some written background yet. All of them under construction, so don't expect some great stories, and my english is really weak – sorry for it. Amazingly detailed backstories, especially Ralph's! Thank you for sharing your stories with me. I'm not certain if I want to create character sheets for my 3 inquisitors than what I've already written. I'm having more fun revealing their personalities as I write their dialogs. I'm glad you did read their stories – and you found them interesting, especially Ralph's (He's my first red!Hawke, I didn't expect that a red!Hawke can be my favourite, but the character grew on me). I didn't expect you'll like him – he's a little bit different than your characters. * I just found that place and started to gather the pieces of information and stories about my characters here. Easy to put everything in the character sheet, and to find it later. Do it, what you found more fun, of course. I like your dialogues, by the way.
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Post by Slyvalyth on Oct 26, 2018 2:33:44 GMT
Between Reinhardt and Willard, they have a lot of sarcasm and anger in them. Maybe Abram and Anduin can help them trust again. Sagittarius (Sages) are very loyal, patient, caring friends. Reinhardt is a hottie but Anduin knows he has no chance against Anders, lol.
How do you figure out their birthdates? I don't know if I done mine right. I found out when the modern inquisition started and counted backwards.
Sad about Willard and his templar paramour. Such a shame that love can't truly blossom in circles. I feel conflicted about supporting circles that protects people from magic but needing major changes so mages don't feel like they are in prison. Hawke's mother and father met in 9:05 Dragon, they left Kirkwall a few months later, and Leandra already was pregnant, so: Hawke born at the end of 9:05, or in 9:06. Hawke ~24-25 in 9:30, when the Blight destroyed Lothering, and they went to Kirkwall. My really angry guy rather Ralph, he's the most problematic among them – Reinhardt is a hotheaded sweetheart, a devoted lover and friend – Willard more distrustful, or rather he wants to believe, but don't want to be naive, if this has some sense – he already lost many whom he trusted sometimes. Abram and Anduin probably would their good friend. And you're right, not a chance against Anders. I never felt conflicts about the Circles. They must be destroyed – at least as prisons. As education and research centres, they're useful – but not necessarily in one place. The Inquisition paints a grotesque picture about the Circles. Vivienne absolutely wrong – the truth is the Kinloch Hold, The Gallows and the White Spire, and that the mages' children become the Chantry's properties, like Wynne's son. Correct me if I'm wrong but I think I understand what you meant by "he wants to believe but don't want to be naive". Willard is cautious, maybe even calculated, and trusts facts which contradicts being able to believe in something or someone through faith. He makes a good strategist, lol.
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Post by Catilina on Nov 1, 2018 18:15:43 GMT
I wrote another moment to Ralph Hawke's back story (red blood mage, Anders, friendship). (I like the dialogues, just like you, Slyvalyth ) Malcolm and Ralph... and poor Bethany between them: The lunch after the Sermon, started quietly, as usual. But when Leandra stood up and went to the kitchen for the roast, Ralph turned to Malcolm and continued their debate. "I was right! They shouldn't speak about us like this!" "Ralph, what happened to you? Cannot do this! You must be careful! Can not attack everyone who says wrong about the mages!" "About us, father! And what happened?! Did you not hear? Did you not see? That fucking bitch frightened Bethany with her damned superstition about us!" "Not again, not now, and… not 'fucking bitch' –", Malcolm tried to hide his proud smile when he looked at his son, and stay rigorous. " 'revered mother' the term you look for... Ralph don't---" "Yes, quieter, they'll hear it... ", Ralph snapped, "Well, just hear it! They must hear it! I don't fear from them, I don't fear anything! Eh, I know... just... you'll go away again, for work, and I'll face Bethany's fears!" "You should too", Malcolm said quietly, "but especially for sake of Bethany, you have to be careful!" Malcolm looked at Bethany, who concentrated on her plate look very busy to spoon the soup. "Do not endanger her! Do not endanger us all! I try to keep us safe, Ralph, and for it, need many compromises, I hope, you'll see too, as soon as is possible. Don't be an idiot, my son, you're smarter like that!" Leandra came in with the food. "...Ralph, I heard, you... and the neighbour girl… Peachy... you tried to kiss her, you not?" "That was not exactly how it happened...she tr..., mom, she's just a friend, nothing more." Malcolm looked at his son, smiling. "That girl is beautiful---" "Yes, Peachy is undoubtedly beautiful...", Ralph smirked. "I wish she would have a brother.", added, and continued looking on Leandra: "Don't change the subject, mom", then turned back to Malcolm. "Yes, father, compromises, safety – how much should we swallow yet? Where’s your limit in the tolerance? Anyway, I will not let anyone scare Bethany!" Ralph angrily got up from the table, but Malcolm grasped his arm."And I'll not let you endanger her –us!– with your thoughtlessness, young man!" Bethany spooned the soup in silence. Carver kicked her ankle under the table, but she ignored now... She just wished to disappear.
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