Calenhad: My first Lore video

Well done. I liked it a lot.

It's lovely and well done. Perhaps you can invite DA fans to participate in future narratives; add their voices.

One point though, I think the music can be toned down more. I feel that at times, it's drowning out some words.

Got round to watching it, excellent work! You've earned yourself another sub.

I liked your voiceover style, it works really well for informative pieces like this. Good use of background images as well, and I liked seeing the map pop up at relevant points, as not all of us have memorized the layout of Thedas.

As for improvements, I'm no expert in video editing, but some of the quotes were a little tricky to read due to a lighter background; I wonder if using darker images for quotes would help?

Anyway, great job, and keep it up.

Funny, I actually added that because I wasn’t sure how I was supposed to pronounce “Ser Forannan” and I thought “Whatever, I’ll just let people read the names”

I think I might change the font to something a little less stylized for the large quotes, as I’ve received feedback that it can be a bit hard to read (especially the ‘d’s)

I’m thinking I’ll go for a Ferelden theme for these videos first, so all of those are on my list. I thought I’d go for an overview of Alamarri history pre-Calenhad (Only briefly touching on Andraste, because that’s a whole other video) and the splintering into the Chasind, Avvar, and the Clayne next. Then get into more specific stories, like Dane and Hafter.

Most of these stories will probably have fewer quotes than this one.

I think I’m going to try to see if I can add a background color block for the quotes (Although many of these stories don’t have as many quotes available as Calenhad’s)

How about adding a dark outline to the font to help it stand out? I don't know if that would look better than a background colour block.

It's a minor niggle anyway, most of the text was perfectly legible.

I was actually thinking about that today. The plan was for informational videos only, but there are some things I’d like to say about Calenhad and what I like about his story...

Well, I’ll be busy for the next week or two so we’ll see.

Great video. I've learned a lot about Calenhad.
I have to agree, you have a good narrating voice.

Welp, my computer isn’t turning on today. Could be awhile before I can put together another video depending on what’s wrong with it.

Yup.

A few times in the past week I’ve had the fans turn on really loud and the whole thing shut down.

This time, it refused to turn on again. I’m going to take it apart and clean the components, it needs it and I’ve been meaning to rearrange some of the messy wiring anyway.

If that doesn’t work, well, the last time something like this happened I had to replace my graphics card, which would suck