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Post by gervaise21 on Aug 25, 2017 19:36:36 GMT
This is fine by me. I take it we are assuming that Jon was happy with Incognito's approach and allowed him to be recruited.
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Post by smilesja on Aug 25, 2017 19:40:20 GMT
He'll probably be annoyed, but he wants the people who are destroying his lands to be rid of.
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Post by NeverlandHunter on Aug 25, 2017 20:08:24 GMT
Jon would have to have given permission for Incognito's entry. So, if he was annoyed, it would have to be due to Incognito's dramatics.
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Post by NeverlandHunter on Aug 25, 2017 20:31:54 GMT
And I'll also suggest that Incognito's claims of nobility could lead to the assumption that they are a human woman. Gervaise says Ellas is tall for an elf, but a human male might be too beefy and big for an elf to pass as. Unless human sizes still vary like they do in our world, which is something I've wondered about.
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Post by smilesja on Aug 25, 2017 20:45:55 GMT
I would imagine they do.
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Post by Nimlowyn on Aug 26, 2017 7:23:00 GMT
I had some time tonight after all, so I went ahead and posted! 
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Post by smilesja on Aug 26, 2017 7:59:01 GMT
Love the post nim! I wonder if you want to integrate the delayed letters into the story? It is an interesting setup you got there!
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Post by smilesja on Aug 26, 2017 8:00:20 GMT
Anyway I'm having internet problems at the moment so don't expect a post from me until later today. It's going to be two posts!
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Post by Nimlowyn on Aug 26, 2017 8:10:54 GMT
Love the post nim! I wonder if you want to integrate the delayed letters into the story? It is an interesting setup you got there! I'm thinking on it! For now, it's a mystery...
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Post by smilesja on Aug 26, 2017 8:11:37 GMT
Love the post nim! I wonder if you want to integrate the delayed letters into the story? It is an interesting setup you got there! I'm thinking on it! For now, it's a mystery... I like a good mystery. 
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Post by NeverlandHunter on Aug 26, 2017 18:02:43 GMT
smilesjaYour post doesn't coincide with gervaise21 's. Gervaise wrote that Incognito does not speak. It's a huge point for the character. He also wrote that Incognito was announced by one of Jon's men, one with a staff. Also, Incognito claims to be a noble, why would it even cross Jon's/Aline's mind that he could possibly be an elf?
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Post by smilesja on Aug 26, 2017 18:03:49 GMT
Ugh, misread it. Thanks for pointing that out! I had a frustrating night with my internet going in and out!
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Post by NeverlandHunter on Aug 26, 2017 18:07:31 GMT
Ugh, misread it. Thanks for pointing that out! I had a frustrating night with my internet going in and out! Gervaise went into detail about Ellas trying to mask his Dalish accent with another, and failing that, he came up with Incognito who doesn't speak and won't until he regains his family's honor. Also, as I pointed this out before, it isn't feasible that Incognito got to the point in the story without Jon being aware. He was announced by one of Jon's men, so one can assume Jon's man told him that he had an applicant interested in taking the job, waiting outside, and would announce him on Jon's behest.
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Post by NeverlandHunter on Aug 26, 2017 18:22:17 GMT
smilesjaIf you'll take a suggestion, I think you should do a small collab if gervaise21 and heathenoxman are on board. The way Gervaise has it written, Incognito waits outside of the room the Teyrn is in, presumably in this time Jon's man is informing the Teyrn of the applicant waiting outside. When Incognito comes in, Jon's announcer reads off of a slip of paper that Incognito had written on, introducing him. I think you should write Jon's reaction and see if Gervaise has anything to add that Incognito will do. Then, another man can come in saying another applicant arrived if Heathenoxman wants to be involved at this point. Jon can ask his questions to Ozek, she (per Heathenoxman) can reply and then it can look like everything is wrapping up before one of Jon's men mentions the bard in question has been apprehended. Cue the bard part. And done.
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Post by smilesja on Aug 26, 2017 18:25:41 GMT
I'm willing they're both are. gervaise21 and heathenoxman I'll PM you my post and you can edit and add your inputs.
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Post by smilesja on Aug 26, 2017 18:28:13 GMT
I'll keep the post up for now and will edit it after they put their inputs in the PM. For now I'm going to work on Cyrus.
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Post by Nimlowyn on Aug 26, 2017 21:13:46 GMT
So what is the official posting order? Maybe I'm blind, but I don't see it anywhere?
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Post by smilesja on Aug 26, 2017 21:29:49 GMT
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Post by gervaise21 on Aug 26, 2017 22:00:18 GMT
Incidentally I hadn't thought about the fact that they would probably assume he was a woman because of the lighter frame. I must admit it would be funny if one of the characters sort of touched him up, behind not in front of course. What would be even better if the nice Templar objected and defended his honour. I am terrible, you see I really am Ellas I so much like my whimsy.
It's just that later on back in his northern base, I can see him telling Burren of the incident and it would just crack him up.
Just so you know Ellas is not gay but he and Burran are just about as close as you can be without having sex. They just have the same sense of humour and everything.
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Post by NeverlandHunter on Aug 27, 2017 1:43:24 GMT
I think it would be pretty amusing for the reveal if most characters were expecting a human woman only to get a male elf 
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Post by smilesja on Aug 27, 2017 2:01:57 GMT
I should make an edit where Jon thinks that Elais is female! 
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Post by smilesja on Aug 27, 2017 4:33:51 GMT
Made edits to the Jon post with gervaise21 input and may add more. I also added a part where Jon thinks Elias is female.
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Post by smilesja on Aug 27, 2017 22:06:57 GMT
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Post by NeverlandHunter on Aug 27, 2017 22:17:16 GMT
Hear ye, hear ye: Due to unforeseen, though perhaps heavily foreshadowed, cirumstances, I will officially be departing this role-play for calmer waters. If any participant wishes me to write a story reason for Rhian's sudden absence (though she had yet to interact with any of the characters) I will do so. Most likely she will decide the danger isn't worth the reward. *** To smilesja Thank you for inviting me to role-play. I really do appreciate it, as I wouldn't have delurked otherwise and I'm glad to have become a part of the Dragon Age role-play community. *** To Nimlowyn I am sorry our characters missed each other, as I'm sure they would have had some interesting interactions. I hope I'll get the chance to meet Lavinia in the future. *** To heathenoxmanYou're probably going to be in for a surprise when you log back in to the BSN. Apologies for any craziness, and maybe we'll actually get the chance to role-play together eventually. *** To gervaise21Smilesja invited me, but it was you who got me enthusiastic about role-playing. Your introduction to The Nature of Conflict made me narrow my eyes in determination to not be out down. How successful I was, I don't know, but the challenge of trying to keep up with a proficient writer is a good one. I'm sorry Rhian will never get to slap her palm to her forehead in realization of Incognito's identity. Ideas like that are never really lost, though, just put away for a rainy day. *** Thank you all for putting up with me on this thread, and I bid this role-play smooth sailing or a calm finish.
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Post by smilesja on Aug 27, 2017 22:20:42 GMT
 I'm sorry that it had to happen for you. But just know that you're always be welcomed back if you change your mind.
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