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Post by smilesja on Jun 25, 2017 4:01:32 GMT
yes, I was debating how to say she entered stealth. or stealth mode. the lore on that seems to be 'flexible'. DA Wiki says this Okay. |
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Post by cmoe on Jun 25, 2017 4:05:22 GMT
yes, I was debating how to say she entered stealth. or stealth mode. the lore on that seems to be 'flexible'. DA Wiki says this Okay. It also says this I'm trying to learn more about rogue skills. |
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Post by smilesja on Jun 25, 2017 4:08:43 GMT
I'm still learning about the Spirit Warrior. Don't worry too much about the technical details though. It's good for the lore, but it's okay to bend the rules to suit the story.
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Post by cmoe on Jun 25, 2017 13:41:17 GMT
I'm still learning about the Spirit Warrior. Don't worry too much about the technical details though. It's good for the lore, but it's okay to bend the rules to suit the story. I'm struggling with my spider fight. I thought stopping our post where I left it with Willis down and Kailyn scrambling would be a great time to bring Durk in. what do you think? Space Cowboy would you like to come save the day for Kailyn and Willis. She will just love that  |
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Post by Space Cowboy on Jun 25, 2017 13:43:35 GMT
I'm still learning about the Spirit Warrior. Don't worry too much about the technical details though. It's good for the lore, but it's okay to bend the rules to suit the story. I'm struggling with my spider fight. I thought stopping our post where I left it with Willis down and Kailyn scrambling would be a great time to bring Durk in. what do you think? Space Cowboy would you like to come save the day for Kailyn and Willis. She will just love that Sure, that works! Durk can arrive just as Willis goes down  |
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Post by smilesja on Jun 25, 2017 13:51:48 GMT
I'm struggling with my spider fight. I thought stopping our post where I left it with Willis down and Kailyn scrambling would be a great time to bring Durk in. what do you think? Space Cowboy would you like to come save the day for Kailyn and Willis. She will just love that Sure, that works! Durk can arrive just as Willis goes down Hold on it's only the end of part one of the collab. Let me do my piece later today and I'll post it. |
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Post by Space Cowboy on Jun 25, 2017 13:53:55 GMT
Sure, that works! Durk can arrive just as Willis goes down Hold on it's only the end of part one of the collab. Let me do my piece later today and I'll post it. Maybe make a three way PM, or just discuss the collab here then? Durk can be there for part two. What's happening in Part two then? |
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Post by smilesja on Jun 25, 2017 13:57:06 GMT
Hold on it's only the end of part one of the collab. Let me do my piece later today and I'll post it. Maybe make a three way PM, or just discuss the collab here then? Durk can be there for part two. What's happening in Part two then? Willis will enter spirit mode in part two and will assist Kailyn with the spiders. Afterwards they find the thief who is trapped In web and interrogate him afterwards they cut him down and decide what to do with him. The duo can meet Durk around the entrance of new hope. |
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Post by cmoe on Jun 25, 2017 14:02:13 GMT
Maybe make a three way PM, or just discuss the collab here then? Durk can be there for part two. What's happening in Part two then? Willis will enter spirit mode in part two and will assist Kailyn with the spiders. Afterwards they find the thief who is trapped In web and interrogate him afterwards they cut him down and decide what to do with him. The duo can meet Durk around the entrance of new hope. We already agreed Durk would make it to the cave. I think I need a better outline if you are going to change the details so much. I've tried making several suggestions you don't seem to like. How can I learn if I don't get a chance to add any ideas to the story. |
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Post by smilesja on Jun 25, 2017 14:05:35 GMT
Willis will enter spirit mode in part two and will assist Kailyn with the spiders. Afterwards they find the thief who is trapped In web and interrogate him afterwards they cut him down and decide what to do with him. The duo can meet Durk around the entrance of new hope. We already agreed Durk would make it to the cave. I think I need a better outline if you are going to change the details so much. I've tried making several suggestions you don't seem to like. How can I learn if I don't get a chance to add any ideas to the story. All right we'll meet him outside the cave. |
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Post by Space Cowboy on Jun 25, 2017 14:07:35 GMT
We already agreed Durk would make it to the cave. I think I need a better outline if you are going to change the details so much. I've tried making several suggestions you don't seem to like. How can I learn if I don't get a chance to add any ideas to the story. All right we'll meet him outside the cave. He's already enterig the cave. He can show up after the current collab |
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Post by smilesja on Jun 25, 2017 18:08:29 GMT
All right for part 2 of the collab. Willis and Kailyn find the thief tangled in spider web. They question him and then decide what to do with the elf. When they escort the thief out they can meet Durk. Is that good? cmoe Space Cowboy ? |
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Post by Space Cowboy on Jun 25, 2017 20:59:57 GMT
All right for part 2 of the collab. Willis and Kailyn find the thief tangled in spider web. They question him and then decide what to do with the elf. When they escort the thief out they can meet Durk. Is that good? cmoe Space Cowboy ? Or Durk can just come in and find them. Not sure why this isn't acceptable? |
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Post by smilesja on Jun 25, 2017 21:00:28 GMT
All right for part 2 of the collab. Willis and Kailyn find the thief tangled in spider web. They question him and then decide what to do with the elf. When they escort the thief out they can meet Durk. Is that good? cmoe Space Cowboy ? Or Durk can just come in and find them. Not sure why this isn't acceptable? That's fine by me. |
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Post by Space Cowboy on Jun 25, 2017 21:12:35 GMT
Or Durk can just come in and find them. Not sure why this isn't acceptable? That's fine by me. Awesome, include me in the colab then! |
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Post by smilesja on Jun 25, 2017 21:15:25 GMT
Awesome, include me in the colab then! I'll think about it. |
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Post by cmoe on Jun 25, 2017 21:17:41 GMT
Before I go any further with this story, I believe a clear outline needs to be done and then discussed in this thread. This story has changed a lot and is not what I was expecting. As someone who is new to RP and trying to learn, it would be helpful to have more input. smilesja Space Cowboy |
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Post by Space Cowboy on Jun 25, 2017 21:18:50 GMT
Before I go any further with this story, I believe a clear outline needs to be done and then discussed in this thread. This story has changed a lot and is not what I was expecting. As someone who is new to RP and trying to learn, it would be helpful to have more input. smilesja Space Cowboy That's a good idea. Sudden changes are hard to deal with even for experienced people |
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Post by smilesja on Jun 25, 2017 21:21:53 GMT
Sorry for not updating the plans so:
Willis and Kailyn find the thief trapped in a web. They interrogate him and then decide what to do with the thief
Willis and Kailyn run find Durk and he explains his discoverings
Either the trio heads to lothering or go to new hope to rest and restock supplies
That's what I came up so far
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Post by Space Cowboy on Jun 25, 2017 21:23:18 GMT
Thanks Smiles. Anything more? I think she's looking for an outline of the entire story
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Post by smilesja on Jun 25, 2017 21:25:37 GMT
Thanks Smiles. Anything more? I think she's looking for an outline of the entire story I haven't thought too much ahead. But after resting the trio heads to denerim and Declan springs a trap on them. Not sure what it is specifically but it'll end up with the trio trapping Declan is own trap and taking the compass which is acting all magical pointing them to denerim |
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Post by smilesja on Jun 25, 2017 21:41:28 GMT
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Post by cmoe on Jun 25, 2017 22:51:11 GMT
You say the trio heads to Denerim then Declan springs a trap. Is this before they reach Denerim? What form of a trap are you thinking? Ambush? When the trio gets the compass is it, they find the treasure and The End. I would like Declan to be alive at the end of the story in case I use Kailyn again down the road. Space Cowboy any thoughts, suggestions? |
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Post by smilesja on Jun 25, 2017 23:01:27 GMT
You say the trio heads to Denerim then Declan springs a trap. Is this before they reach Denerim? What form of a trap are you thinking? Ambush? When the trio gets the compass is it, they find the treasure and The End. I would like Declan to be alive at the end of the story in case I use Kailyn again down the road. Space Cowboy any thoughts, suggestions? This BEFORE they reach Denerim. I'm not sure what kind of trap at the moment , maybe an ambush. Once the trio gets the Compass, it leads them to Denerim and the final piece which is located in a shop. They try to convince the shopkeeper to let it go and I think Declan will get involved as well quickly recovering from the trap. Since Declan is your character, he'll be alive at the end. |
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Post by smilesja on Jun 25, 2017 23:16:38 GMT
All I know as at the end, Willis will quit the Swords of Ammarok and strike out on his own.
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