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Post by phoray on Oct 24, 2017 22:20:12 GMT
I'm not familiar with Queenie but the story sounds great. I like the idea that he has to win in order to be sponsored as a Chevalier. Great for a bit of tension. Have you any preference as to what his favoured style of fighting is? Queenie is about a half Irish half Indian girl who passes for White living in India while England still owns the country. She ends up moving to England (a death is involved) and becomes an exotic dancer. She sort of exchanges boyfriends as she climbs the social ladder of stardom but ends up with a husband that knows her whole secret and supports her as well as protects her. Her mother eventually comes to see her at the height of her fame after many years of not seeing her. And pretends to be her servant. I do think I much care how he fights. Don't you have to be sword and shield to be a Chevalier?
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Post by riverdaleswhiteflash on Oct 25, 2017 0:52:54 GMT
I'm not familiar with Queenie but the story sounds great. I like the idea that he has to win in order to be sponsored as a Chevalier. Great for a bit of tension. Have you any preference as to what his favoured style of fighting is? Queenie is about a half Irish half Indian girl who passes for White living in India while England still owns the country. She ends up moving to England (a death is involved) and becomes an exotic dancer. She sort of exchanges boyfriends as she climbs the social ladder of stardom but ends up with a husband that knows her whole secret and supports her as well as protects her. Her mother eventually comes to see her at the height of her fame after many years of not seeing her. And pretends to be her servant. I do think I much care how he fights. Don't you have to be sword and shield to be a Chevalier? I think a chevalier is traditionally associated with the sword and shield, and the Academie would likely have tried to steer them in that direction. So they'd know how to use a sword and shield and some of the techniques, because they wouldn't have been likely to graduate otherwise. But that's not to say they can't know some other things and try to use those instead when given the choice; for example the Codex for Foot Soldiers makes clear they know how to fight without a shield as a backup plan, and the Codex for the Summer Sword says that a chevalier bore it at the behest of his father.
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Post by gervaise21 on Oct 25, 2017 9:10:38 GMT
I think that Chevaliers are trained in all forms of fighting, if nothing else so they know how to counter an opponent using a different style, but sword and shield is probably the classic form and basis of their training around which they develop their highest skills.
However, the key aspect to Chevaliers is their ability at mounted combat. They are said to be renowned as powerful warriors but unsurpassed on horseback. Having a good cavalry was key to warfare in the Middle Ages in real life and that is pretty much the era we are talking about in Thedas. Of course their weak spot would be an opposing army comprised of long bowmen. As the French discovered against the English, or more correctly, the Welsh bowmen. Ghengis Khan got around this by his horde being primarily comprised of horse bowmen, a particularly fast and deadly way of taking down the enemy. It is worth noting that the French cavalry that came unstuck at Agincourt were probably more of the heavy cavalry type. However, the idea that knights were just capable of charging the line and nothing else would be a mistake. The destrier was a highly trained animal and very agile. The airs above ground of the Spanish Riding School in Vienna (also found in Jerez in Spain) are based off what a battle steed would have been trained to do to be useful when fighting both mounted and foot soldiers. This is why such a horse was so valuable because they were specially bred and trained for their role. They were only used for fighting and would be led to the battle field by a servant on the back of a horse, the knight travelling on a palfrey designed for long distance comfortable travel. Thus both the knight and his horse would have their energy saved for the actual fray.
So it is possible Markham still needs to train in mounted warfare but maybe he has impressed someone enough with his handling of a horse, as well as his martial skills on foot, that they think he may be worth sponsoring to be a Chevalier. Chevaliers tend to be almost exclusively taken from Orlesian nobility. Ser Michel was accepted into the order on false papers obtained by his sponsor that had him being from a minor noble house. I would imagine it might be possible for a commoner to distinguish themselves in battle and then be elevated to the ranks of the nobility to allow them to join and presumably that might also be the route for someone who wasn't a native to Orlais. Were Markham's forged papers just to have him not be associated with his father's house or do they actually indicate he is from an Orlesian background? I assume, since you say they gave him the option of being a Chevalier, that they show him as being linked in someway to an Orlesian noble family.
As I have Gaspard as ruler in Orlais in my world state, would you think it too much for it actually be him who has spotted Markham's potential and offered to sponsor him to enter the Chevaliers? His reaction to the discovery of Michel's heritage show that Gaspard is not as prejudiced as some other members of the order when it comes the worth of individuals, so even if he suspected Markham's papers were a bit dodgy he might be prepared to overlook the fact if the person had sufficient talent.
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Post by riverdaleswhiteflash on Oct 25, 2017 10:45:06 GMT
So it is possible Markham still needs to train in mounted warfare but maybe he has impressed someone enough with his handling of a horse, as well as his martial skills on foot, that they think he may be worth sponsoring to be a Chevalier. Chevaliers tend to be almost exclusively taken from Orlesian nobility. Ser Michel was accepted into the order on false papers obtained by his sponsor that had him being from a minor noble house. I would imagine it might be possible for a commoner to distinguish themselves in battle and then be elevated to the ranks of the nobility to allow them to join and presumably that might also be the route for someone who wasn't a native to Orlais. Were Markham's forged papers just to have him not be associated with his father's house or do they actually indicate he is from an Orlesian background? I assume, since you say they gave him the option of being a Chevalier, that they show him as being linked in someway to an Orlesian noble family. As I have Gaspard as ruler in Orlais in my world state, would you think it too much for it actually be him who has spotted Markham's potential and offered to sponsor him to enter the Chevaliers? His reaction to the discovery of Michel's heritage show that Gaspard is not as prejudiced as some other members of the order when it comes the worth of individuals, so even if he suspected Markham's papers were a bit dodgy he might be prepared to overlook the fact if the person had sufficient talent. The wiki uses the phrase "noble blood" to describe what the papers were supposed to falsely show Michel had. And if being ennobled was all that was required, then the Comte de Chalons might not have needed a forgery at all. He might have adopted Michel, or persuaded Celene to declare him the head of a new, low-ranked house. Taken together, those seem to be evidence that the chevaliers don't want freshly minted nobles. Though Gaspard might be able (and is probably willing) to force them to break with that tradition.
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Post by gervaise21 on Oct 25, 2017 13:11:20 GMT
I've checked back in Masked Empire and you are quite correct, the Academie only accept those of noble blood, so unless Gaspard thought to change things, you could not be accepted unless you had noble origins. Presumably the only noble origins they would recognise would be Orlesian, so Markham would need to have forged papers showing that he was descended from Orlesian nobility plus if it was a rather obscure line then a sponsor who would vouch for their authenticity. In Michel's case the Comte de Chevin said he was a distant cousin and that was sufficient assurance until someone started delving further into his affairs.
I wonder, though, if you have to be from a legitimate line? Over here in England, several leading aristocratic families actually trace their origins to Charles II and his numerous mistresses. His offspring from these dalliances were then ennobled and from then on the family were accepted as nobility. This frequently occurred in earlier times as well, not just in England. A similar thing was shown in the film Kingdom of Heaven, where Orlando Bloom's character was a village blacksmith and bastard son of a noble who then sought him out when he had no legitimate heirs. They might even be acknowledged if the noble did have a legitimate heir but the coat of alms of the illegitimate offspring would have some indicator that they were from the illegitimate line.
So in Orlais, provided the father was willing to acknowledge his offspring as his own, would they then be accepted as noble? This would be a different situation from Alistair in Ferelden. It would not be a case of someone else vouching for their parentage. It would have to be the actual parent or not valid. So a document, allegedly signed by a noble (and witnessed), in the absence of legitimate heirs, recognising the bearer as his/her son and heir to their name and title. You see, so long as there is a direct link to noble blood then any success that person enjoys can be attributed to their noble lineage overcoming the common blood of the other half of the parentage. The reason they would not be in favour of a total commoner being elevated is that it would set a dangerous precedent considering the nobility regard their position in society as having been given them automatically by Divine Right of their birth, unlike in Ferelden where you can earn the privilege.
For some reason the epithet "the beautiful bastard" keeps running through my head. I seem to recall this title was given to some leader of the French forces in the time of Joan of Arc, because he was illegitimate and strikingly good looking, not because he was a nasty piece of work. Not that I'm suggesting that has to be the background for Markham but I could see it as a way that someone could be connected to nobility without arousing too much suspicion among those who make a study of family connections.
Perhaps I'm getting too complicated here. I get carried away occasionally with back stories.
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Post by gervaise21 on Oct 25, 2017 13:44:20 GMT
I have to say that I am rather excited by the PC characters involved so far and their back stories:
Issala (riverdaleswhiteflash) - the scholarly Qunari and his books, who needs to keep away from the Qunari delegation in case anyone recognises him. Arria (phoray) - the talented elven performer who will want to follow the progress of her son without arousing suspicion in anyone else. Ellas (me) - an elven mage who needs to avoid the attention of various people but particularly the Templars who are bound to surround Madame de Fer.
So that is two rogues and a mage with some diverse other skills and interests but which also might provide something to connect them as well. How many people do you think we need for the main plot? I was thinking of adding Alsgaard Stormhold (the Avvar) to the group as an NPC warrior if we don't get a PC from that category, as I think he could be a really cool character to have along with his eagle.
I'm also going to make a link between Burren, the dwarven NPC friend to Ellas, and someone in the Orzammar contingent, so we get the true story why he was exiled from Orzammar but also a reason why he might be visiting the Diamond Den (the dwarven enclave) and can witness events there.
By the way, I don't think I mentioned it before but weapon classes and skills are going to be those found in DAO. In other words you can have a warrior who is proficient in archery or dual wielding provided they have had the training and a rogue who can wield dual swords or other weapons as well as daggers. So Arria's portrait is entirely accurate. I've assumed she is a rogue but of course she could be a warrior as either class can dual wield swords and there is no reason why a warrior can't be a talented singer and linguist.
When it coms to specialisms you can draw from any of the games DAO/DAA/DA2/DAI but some of those in DAI need toning down a little and some, such as Rift Mage, are not going to be possible unless their backstory can show realistically how they acquired the skill (most mages were sent a bit odd or had their minds blown completely trying to learn it). I would suggest using Force Mage instead. In addition there are the specialisms Marksman (rogue) and Chevalier (warrior)
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Post by phoray on Oct 25, 2017 15:58:01 GMT
By the way, I don't think I mentioned it before but weapon classes and skills are going to be those found in DAO. In other words you can have a warrior who is proficient in archery or dual wielding provided they have had the training and a rogue who can wield dual swords or other weapons as well as daggers. So Arria's portrait is entirely accurate. I've assumed she is a rogue but of course she could be a warrior as either class can dual wield swords and there is no reason why a warrior can't be a talented singer and linguist. I have Arria as a Dual Wielding Warrior, rather than a rogue. Although I have her swords as being light and slender like Katana. Which may not be world supported? hmmm? I kinda don't care? I just think she needs lighter swords than even a short sword would provide. Perhaps a Dwarven Crafted gift from the General's friends in the Ambassdoria? Also, I find it unlikely that Gaspard is that free thinking. Michel proved himself an amazing Chevalier with many years in service and besting Gaspard himself in battle. If anything, overlooking his elven heritage was as much wrapped in Gaspard's own pride as a belief in the tenets of the "way of the Chevalier" that seems to be becoming unpopular in a country more and more invested in The Game. I hadn't put tons of thought into the boarding shool situation. Would rather tweak story to say Markham was given into an Orlesian Noble friend of the General's care. Similar to how Alistair was given to Eamon. Except Markham was 8, and the forged papers say that he is the orphan of some dead orlesian parents that had taken to living in Tevinter due to their mage status. So the Orlesian Noble father? fled to Tevinter. MEt a woman. Married. Had a son. Parents are dead. Son returned to Orlais. Better as Markham's fake Origin story? edit add: haha. Just realized his "fake noble history" is the near the same as the Hawke Family situation. So totally in world believeable! amirite? 
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Post by gervaise21 on Oct 25, 2017 18:41:46 GMT
That fake noble history sounds very plausible, so definitely go with that. It would be difficult for anyone in the south to dispute it because the mage would have been an apostate so likely no official record of him and the family would likely have hushed up the whole thing out of shame. So they only really needed to find an obscure noble family, probably from the north of Orlais. Even better, they could say they were from the western hills that were conquered by Nevarra in 8:70. Not all Orlesian noble families would have fled and there is still an Orlesian resistance active there, so there would be a lot of confusion over who was still around, who had died, how many members each family had and official records would be lacking on the families since that date, so quite possible to fake an ancestry around a family that was historically from that area.
The idea of her having been gifted swords crafted by the General's dwarven friends is a good one. He is bound to have contacts there seeing he is such an important military figure. They would certainly know the enchantments to put on them to make them light enough to wield correctly and they could then also be personalised to her (special hilts or runes on the blade). They could also have crafted something that was like a katana by making a cross between a rapier and a long sword. Whilst in Thedas the writers say that rapiers are used for thrusting, in fencing IRL the rapier is used for slashing and the foil for thrusting. Anyway, go with the katana idea but perhaps give them their own unique name type because they were custom crafted just for her, or if you prefer to keep it simple then just call them katanas. Then people can admire them and mention how they've never seen anything like them before and she can explain.
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Post by gervaise21 on Oct 25, 2017 18:56:22 GMT
I have changed the world state so that the HoF, Hawke and Inquisitor are no longer vague but match my canon world state. It makes life easier if I can mention them as they are in that reality and since the rest of the world state is customised to my canon one, including some additions of my own to reflect my head canon, I may as well complete it.
If you are unhappy with this, please let me know.
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Post by gervaise21 on Oct 26, 2017 10:16:59 GMT
Quick clarification of characters and their class:
Issala - Rogue, dual wielder and scout abilities, multi-lingual (Qunlat, Tevene and Trade) and can read Qunlat. Arria - Warrior, dual wielder abilities, multi-lingual (Tevene, Qunlat and Trade) and can read modern Tevene* and Trade. Ellas - Mage, focus on primal spells but also some from spirit school (some taken from Core Rule Book so will not have encountered them in game), multi-lingual (modern Elven+ and Trade) Can read Elven (within the limitations any Dalish would have with ancient texts+) and Trade.
Both Issala and Ellas will be able to mix up potions to heal and assist in other ways.
I think this works well as an investigative team because both the weapon wielders will be fast, nimble types, which is what we will need I think. Also all three are intelligent, thinking types so should be effective at brain storming ideas and also using brains as well as brawn in a difficult situation. On the whole Ellas will avoid shapeshifting too much because of being in an urban environment where a snow leopard will stick out like a sore thumb and probably create a lot of panic. So only likely to resort to this in an emergency.
* I seem to recall that there was a text in Ancient Tevene where we had to appeal to a specialist scholar to get it translated as even Dorian couldn't read it. This makes sense as languages do change over time and old English is nearly unintelligible to me.
+ It is emphasised both in WoT2 and references by Cole and others, that modern Dalish elven is a bit of a mish mash of what it should be and whilst they can understand one another, their speech is recognisable as not being entirely accurate in its pronunciation when compared with Solas. In any case, just as with Tevene, the elven language would likely have developed over time even if it had not been supressed when they were slaves of the Imperium. Elven texts do not lend themselves to literal translation and this would account for variation in how they are interpreted by modern scholars and the Dalish. Only an ancient elf or one given the knowledge (for example drinking the Well of Sorrows) is capable of truly understanding the ancient texts.
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Post by gervaise21 on Oct 26, 2017 15:54:45 GMT
THE SPONSOR OF THE GRAND TOURNEY

Rainer Aehrenthal is merchant prince and a native of Cumberland. He is forty five years of age and has a son, Typhon (19) and daughter, Gabrielle (21) to follow him in the family business but he is looking to raise their profile on the political front as well. He is a widower but his wife was Emmeline Forsythia, a leading noble family in Nevarra. Rainer, Typhon and Gabrielle are all accomplished fighters if the need arises. Gabrielle is participating in the Tourney on behalf of Nevarra in the single weapon category.
His family made their wealth as arms dealers supplying weapons to the Freemarches for generations and he has continued the family tradition with great success. He had a long standing agreement with the Chantry to supply the Templar Order and also the Grey Wardens in the south. However, his biggest profits have come from supplying both sides in the various conflicts that have occurred in recent years. He supplies the Nevarran army in maintaining their hold on former Orlesian territory in the western hills but also Orlesian rebels who object to the high taxes charged by their conquerors. In the Orlesian Civil War he happily sold to both sides and even donated some to the alienage elves because his agents said that this would help prolong the conflict and thus increase his profit. He sourced weapons for the Inquisition and, whilst it may never be proven, he probably supplied the Venatori as well.
He has widely travelled throughout Thedas to source suppliers and get ideas. He has contacts in the Ambassadoria in Minrathous and the Magisterium but no doubt if he could gain a business deal with the Qunari he would. The leaders in Par Vollen are not interested in trading their secrets though and have probably been keeping a careful watch on him to ensure he doesn’t try and steal them either. He has also financed groups to risk forays into the Deep Roads to salvage artefacts from wherever they can find them.
What better way could he spend his wealth than in sponsoring a display of martial prowess? Thus, even in a time of relative peace in the south, he is able to encourage the sale of arms.
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Post by phoray on Oct 26, 2017 16:10:58 GMT
His family made their wealth as alms dealers That gave me an image that made me laugh. 
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Post by gervaise21 on Oct 26, 2017 18:23:31 GMT
Damn it, I thought I had corrected the spelling on that. Mind you, there were people who sold pardons from the Church during the middle ages but I don't think the Chantry are that bad!
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Post by phoray on Oct 26, 2017 23:08:03 GMT
Damn it, I thought I had corrected the spelling on that. Mind you, there were people who sold pardons from the Church during the middle ages but I don't think the Chantry are that bad! I don't think there are any Sin Pass Cards with the MAker. He just don't give a shit till everyone knows his name. 
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Post by gervaise21 on Oct 30, 2017 10:47:47 GMT
Have been giving some thought to the framework of the thread. I thought it might be helpful for you if you are considering how you might develop your PCs personal story. I suggest something along the following lines to begin with:
Introductory sequences:
Each write a post covering their character, when and how they hear about the Tourney. Possibly also some additional posts covering other important NPCs.
Build-up:
One or more posts covering the PCs preparations for the event and travel to it. Again possibly some additional posts to provide background to what is developing in Cumberland behind the scenes.
Arrival in Cumberland :
Reaction to seeing the city by each PC. Exploration of it by each PC which helps set the scene and allows different areas to be highlighted, plus coming into contact with key NPC figures.
Opening Ceremony:
Big colourful setting the scene: Opening speech by Sponsor welcoming guests of honour - which can introduce the Qunari delegation: Reaction of PCs. Grand parade of all participants in the Tourney: Reaction from PCs. Arria's performance. Reaction from PCs and possibly NPCs.
This will effectively set the scene for the next part, which will alternate between reporting on the actual tourney and the PCs being drawn into the underlying investigation into the rogue cult. We can discuss this in more detail when we get that far.
Does this seem okay to you?
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Post by phoray on Oct 30, 2017 19:34:45 GMT
I wanted to post the events of why my Tevinter Character has been living in the Free Marches for the last year as Post One.
Then her being in her new vocation leading up to being asked to perform at the Tourney as Post 2.
Then Travel to and arrival of as Post three. Optionally, the Opening Ceremony could also be tied into this,but perhaps is better as it's own post.
Let me know how that works.
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Post by gervaise21 on Oct 30, 2017 22:08:44 GMT
That sounds like it will work within the framework I've suggested, just start a bit further back in time. Riverdales will probably need to do a similar post with Issala to explain what they are doing in Denerim before the news breaks about the Tourney, so that's okay. It is only meant to be a rough guide to give a general idea of how it will start but I'm always open to suggestions and nothing is set in stone.
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Post by phoray on Dec 4, 2017 14:43:57 GMT
Can we have a "post outline plan" thingie, gervaise21 ?
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Post by gervaise21 on Dec 4, 2017 18:38:17 GMT
I take it you mean a posting order? I think initially it was just going to be the three of us: Riversdales, You and Me, then Hero would join with Loyalty once the Ferelden party have set out for the Tourney and WardenC would participate once we actually reach Cumberland, plus Cowboy when we need a dwarf perspective.
I think who posts first depends on how far back in time before the Tourney you begin your story. Since you have quite an involved backstory for Arria, how about you go first. Then I'll post with Ellas and then Riverdales can post for Issala.
I think it would be a good idea if you make your introductory story more than one post as I will need more than one to cover the period before my group set out. There is roughly a six months time lapse from when the Grand Tourney is announced to its commencement so that leaves plenty of scope for a detailed lead into events.
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Post by gervaise21 on Dec 4, 2017 18:40:39 GMT
wanted to post the events of why my Tevinter Character has been living in the Free Marches for the last year as Post One. Then her being in her new vocation leading up to being asked to perform at the Tourney as Post 2. Then Travel to and arrival of as Post three. Optionally, the Opening Ceremony could also be tied into this,but perhaps is better as it's own post. This seemed like a good outline but may be break up Post One into more than one part. The Opening Ceremony should definitely be a separate post.
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Post by gervaise21 on Dec 4, 2017 19:06:59 GMT
Timeframe for the introductory period: The year is 9:46
Month 3 (Drakonis) the Tourney is announced. Month 8 (August) travel to Cumberland Month 9 (Kingsway) opening Ceremony
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Post by phoray on Dec 4, 2017 19:30:45 GMT
wanted to post the events of why my Tevinter Character has been living in the Free Marches for the last year as Post One. Then her being in her new vocation leading up to being asked to perform at the Tourney as Post 2. Then Travel to and arrival of as Post three. Optionally, the Opening Ceremony could also be tied into this,but perhaps is better as it's own post. This seemed like a good outline but may be break up Post One into more than one part. The Opening Ceremony should definitely be a separate post. But that's just my posts. What about the other players? 1. Phoray writes a prequel/introductory post 2. River writes a prequel/introductory post 3. Other Player writes a prequel/introductory post 4. Other player writes a prequel/introductory post 5. Gervaise writes a prequel/introductory post 6. Phoray writes 2nd prequel post And so on... or are you wanting me to write all three and post all three in a row, and then River writes their posts and posts in a pile?
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Post by gervaise21 on Dec 4, 2017 21:02:07 GMT
No, I think to begin with it should alternate between characters unless someone isn't ready/doesn't wish to post. I am waiting to hear back from River but why don't you make a start as I think your story begins farthest back in time even before the Tourney is announced. So the order would be:
Phoray (1st) Gervaise (1st) River (1st) Phoray (2nd) Gervaise (2nd) River (2nd) Hero (1st) Warden (1st)
At which point we can see whether there are any adjustments that need to be made.
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Post by gervaise21 on Jan 15, 2018 9:22:02 GMT
Okay, everyone, I am about to take the plunge. I think the time sequence I gave above still holds good but I will amend it if it doesn't seem to work with your individual back stories. However, you can always do flash backs to cope with getting out of sinc with the main narrative.
The posting order will not be rigid whilst we are dealing with the introductory posts prior to Cumberland. I will now go first and then I suggest everyone else just posts when they are ready. Once everyone has made a first post (or indicated to me that they do not wish to post this early) then we can regroup and see how we want to arrange things from then on.
If you have any queries, please post them here if they are of a general nature that everyone can help with or PM me over anything specific to your character.
Dareth Shiral!
P.S. Please don't be daunted by the length of my first post. I needed to do some scene setting and explain the Grand Tourney to readers as well as introduce Ellas. Your initial post can be as long or as short as you need it to be.
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Post by phoray on Feb 8, 2018 23:11:22 GMT
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