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Post by gervaise21 on Sept 26, 2018 18:08:50 GMT
MAkes me wonder about writing as my troop of side characters as well. I can see myself doing it with Zucca for certain. Definitely not Lucius Maybe Markham Feel free, it adds to the story and it will become apparent how relevant these various strands are to the plot. Plus I feel it brings the Grand Tourney and Cumberland to life.
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Post by gervaise21 on Sept 26, 2018 18:59:31 GMT
I was also thinking Issala might have some thoughts about the whole occasion but may also have spotted the Qunari delegation in the royal box. Bann Oswyn Sighard has one of the less expensive boxes on the opposite side of the stadium to the Royal Box, so anyone occupying it along with him would also have a clear view of the two boxes adjacent to the Royal. On the left as you view it from the other side of the Stadium would be the box reserved by the Divine for foreign dignitaries as her guests and which I mentioned included the Qunari. I think we previously discussed that Bann Sighard might have invited Issala to join him for the Opening Ceremony along with Jasce. In case anyone was wondering, whilst working with Riverdales on the post for Issala, I changed the logistics a bit for where people were placed during the Opening Ceremony. So as you will have read, Issala never made it to inside the arena, having arrived late on the see the Qunari delegation going in. Meanwhile, Bann Sighard was seated in the Divine's Box, as a visiting dignitary, rather than having one of his own. This is also where the Qunari would have been sat, not in the Royal Box (which was an error in the above quotation). I also discussed with Phoray whether Lucius, the Tevinter mage and son of Marcus, would have attended the ceremony. We decided he would and initially have been placed in the Divine's Box but then raised a stink when the Qunari were ushered in and so Viuus Anaxas (his host in Cumberland) transferred him to the rear of the Royal Box. This would have made a fair number of people aware of his sentiments towards the Qunari, which will be reinforced at the Grand Reception.
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Post by gervaise21 on Oct 6, 2018 14:00:08 GMT
Hi everyone. I've just heard from Warden that unfortunately he must withdraw from our story, so now we are down to just four. If anyone would like to take over Livia, Warden has given us permission to do so. Otherwise I shall just write her into the narrative as appropriate. I will make a post introducing the Grand Reception from Ellas' perspective shortly. Space Cowboy; phoray; riverdaleswhiteflash;
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Post by phoray on Oct 8, 2018 15:19:36 GMT
Otherwise I shall just write her into the narrative as appropriate. I think this is the best idea. I've been really absent. I had two weeks off from work and that made me think I wouldn't be busy. but then I was actually busier than ever because I was driving home (14 hours)cleaning, renovating (14 hour stints, ugh), going to Chicago for a three day educational symposium, having a formal dinner made from scratch for 7... recovering from all that, starting to pack, and then another 14 hour drive back to my place of work. I may actually be less busy working compared to all that! you guys will start to see me more now. 
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Post by gervaise21 on Oct 8, 2018 15:34:56 GMT
Poor you. I have known times like that in the past, when you go back to work for a rest.  Welcome back. 
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Post by gervaise21 on Nov 10, 2018 17:45:17 GMT
Some images of guests at the Grand Reception.

This is Lord Forsard Malecot, a Chevalier and one of the leading hopes for Orlais. He is a veteran of the Grand Tourney having competed at the last one held before the 5th Blight, where he won the joust, and also at lesser tourneys held in Orlais since then. As a current champion, he has not been required to compete in the qualifying rounds but automatically gets a place in the final sixteen. Thus he is not bothered about the presence of the Bronto as it is on the other side of the draw so he would not expect to meet it until the final and is confident he can deal with it should it get that far. He will also be taking part in the sword and shield event against Deshyr Roshek Meino. He and some other nobles are using their presence at the Grand Tourney to do some scheming away from the Orlesian Court without arousing suspicion among their enemies. One such person and his particular friend is:

Marquise Violette Papillon, a leading figure at the Orlesian Court. I have already mentioned her on the PM to Phoray. She is a determined opponent of Divine Victoria, does not approve of any of her changes but particularly those concerning elves, and has been one of the chief figures behind the assassination attempts on the Divine. She supported Gaspard in the civil war. She is here as guest of Grand Cleric Iona of Nevarra, who was aiming for the sunburst throne herself, disapproved of the Inquisition (both these bits of information were given in game in connection with a War Table mission) and is outraged by what Divine Leliana has done since taking office.

Comte Justin Pallier de Churneau of Orlais. Not a Chevalier but another one of the Marquise's allies. He will be taking part in the horse race.
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Post by gervaise21 on Nov 12, 2018 21:30:20 GMT
Something weird is going on with the message board. I left the Grand Reception PM and tried to access the Grand Tourney one I have with Space but it started telling me I was not logged in. Then I tried to return to the Outline of Reception PM and it said the same for that one as well. I hope the messages I left before the blip made sense to you. If you have any further queries it will probably have to wait until tomorrow.
@ phoray;@space Cowboy
It keeps ignoring my tag for Space as well. I keep typing it in correctly but it changes it.
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Post by gervaise21 on Nov 12, 2018 21:37:41 GMT
Help guys, I can't seem to contact you. phoray; @space Cowboy
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Post by Space Cowboy on Nov 13, 2018 10:38:49 GMT
Help guys, I can't seem to contact you. phoray; @space Cowboy . Remove the space in my name. The actual space I mean, not the word heh Spacecowboy I don’t know what going on with your browser though, logging you off. I hope it works this morning.
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Post by phoray on Nov 13, 2018 16:46:26 GMT
The tagging system does not recognize spaces in names, as there are none, as well as random punctuation marks. So on my name above, there is a space after the @ symbol then a semicolon immediately after. Then NO space between the punctuation and the @ symbol. so it needs to be like @nospacenameofpersonyouwant (a space)(punctuation mark optional)(a space) @thenextname
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Post by gervaise21 on Nov 13, 2018 17:12:03 GMT
The weird thing was I kept typing it correctly but the moment I saved it reverted to the wrong spelling. As I say, I think it had something to do with the cyber attack that I was experiencing at the time.
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Post by Space Cowboy on Nov 13, 2018 17:50:29 GMT
The weird thing was I kept typing it correctly but the moment I saved it reverted to the wrong spelling. As I say, I think it had something to do with the cyber attack that I was experiencing at the time. I'm not sure if its that or you are just seeing the display name (with a space) displayed once its posted. That probably sounds like I'm telling you something obvious, heh, but its the only thing that comes to mind.
Proboards has some dodgy advertising, with scripts running to try to get you to click on links. That might be the source of your cyber attack problem?
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Post by gervaise21 on Jan 1, 2019 13:35:30 GMT
Okay, I'm going to make a rather long post and a second shorter one, which covers the initial investigation. I'm not sure quite how well it works but I've gone over it so many times I think I will never post if I want it to be perfect. Anyway I wanted to convey the initial frustration Ellas has with questioning people and how it doesn't really give him much in the way of information to refute the allegations against Lucius Scribonarius, so I hope that at least comes across.
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Post by riverdaleswhiteflash on Jan 1, 2019 18:35:57 GMT
Hey, Gervaise?
When it comes time for my post as Issala, could we make that a collaborative effort, like my last one was and like Phoray's last one was? It's probably the best way to do it, since the post is probably going to involve Ellas coming to brief Issala on what happened.
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Post by gervaise21 on Jan 1, 2019 20:11:41 GMT
When it comes time for my post as Issala, could we make that a collaborative effort, like my last one was and like Phoray's last one was? Yes, I'll set something up on our PM.
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Post by phoray on Jan 20, 2019 22:13:45 GMT
“You think that was what they were about?” Ellas couldn’t hide his disbelief bearing in mind what Sabina had just told him, although it could explain her reluctance to discuss the matter. “The servant wanted her to go with her but at first she objected. Then the servant seemed to say something that persuaded her and they both carried on down the corridor.” Just wanted to say, I really liked these bits.
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Post by Space Cowboy on Mar 12, 2019 0:27:25 GMT
I liked the most recent post! Although I have a query. I'm getting a bit lost as to who is who. Can we have a short one line character summary of the major players? I'm especially confused about all the tevinters besides Lucius 
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Post by gervaise21 on Mar 13, 2019 19:56:39 GMT
Seems like a good time to catch up with where we are on the character front. Have listed the major players introduced thus far by faction:
From Ferelden:
Bann Oswyn Sighard - Dragons' Peak Bannorn Burren - Dwarf secretary Jasce Wolfsbane – Human Ash Warrior + Scruffy his “longhaired” Mabari hound Ellas - Elf mage in the service of Oswyn Issala – Tal-Vashoth Healer and former scout with the Qunari Loyalty/Argos – Spirit Mabari hound Gerry – Elf raven keeper and horse groom Ser Jodhri, Ser Everard and Ser Garrick – knights in the service of Bann Sighard who are participating in the joust.
From Orzammar:
Deshyr Roshek Meino - leader of the Orzammar contingent Liha Helmas, Warrior Caste – His second Deshyr Oerik Vollney - King Bhelen's representative Durk – His second whilst on the surface Edrick of the Legion (Roshek’s illegitimate brother) Adrian Kern of the southern Grey Wardens – participating in mage contest on behalf of Orzammar. Various other dwarves and a bronto participating in the Tourney
From Tevinter:
Sabina Barbus (stage name: Arria Verisimo) former mistress to General Marcus Scribonianus Lucius Scribonianus – Laetans mage and member of the Lucerni Party Zucca – His human female bodyguard
The troupe of travelling performers of which Sabina is now part:
Dimitri – Showman/Leader, Nekel and Mekel (elf twins) - acrobats, Salenia – fire eater, Bingul the Giant and others.
From Nevarra:
Prince Ferdinand Pentaghast – brother to King Marcus and first in line to the throne. Livia Whitestrake – former Templar from the Anderfels, now trainee dragon hunter and his student. Pontifex Viuus Anaxas – Leader of the Mortalitasi in Cumberland and brother to the Duke Duke Sandral Anaxas – Duke of Cumberland Tylus Anaxas – His son, a mage and member of the Mortalitasi Rainer Aehrenthal – A wealthy and influential merchant, sponsor of the Grand Tourney Gabrielle Aehrenthal – His daughter, competing in the Tourney Typhon Aehrenthal – His son Grand Enchanter Vivienne – Now in permanent residence in the Sun Dome Muriel – Her tranquil secretary
From Orlais:
Lord Forsard Malecot – Chevalier and Champion of the previous Grand Tourney Marque de Montagne – His squire but formerly of Tevinter (son of Sabina and brother to Lucius) Marquise Violette Papillon – A leading figure in the Orlesian Court and guest of Grand Cleric Iona of Nevarra. Comte Justin Pallier de Churneau – Not a Chevalier but part of the Marquise’s party.
From Kal-Sharok:
Lord Lyulf Azaharg – Leader of their contingent Renvil Harrowmount – Last survivor of House Harrowmount who sought sanctuary in Kal-Sharok
From the Frostback Mountains:
Astrid Lijadotten O Stormhold - competing in the horse race Alsgaard Ar Kjus O Stormhold - her brother, leader of their contingent and competing in the archery
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Post by Space Cowboy on Mar 13, 2019 23:53:38 GMT
Thanks Gervaise! Very handy 
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Post by phoray on Mar 15, 2019 15:45:14 GMT
Gervais gave me the lovely idea for my next solo post involving the Sabina and the Troupe meeting with a servant witness of the murder. I'm letting it percolate at the moment, will push myself to write at least an outline this weekend ^^
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Post by gervaise21 on Apr 3, 2019 19:06:27 GMT
I thought this might be a good time to regroup and see if everyone is happy with how the story is progressing. I have linked back the Dark Sun to an earlier bit of fan fiction I wrote, that was originally intended to be a RP story here, as I wanted there to be some aspect that would act as temptation for Ellas to use blood magic again. You will recall that my first post mentioned how he had been away being investigated by the College of Enchanters at Kinloch Hold and the evidence was inconclusive whether he had been using blood magic or not. Which is why he knew that a spell can look like one specific to blood magic but may not be. The fact is though that his father did teach him about blood magic but his mother made them both swear an oath concerning its use that means it should only be resorted to as a last resort when lives are at risk. This is why Ellas knows he could just force what he wants from witnesses but the stakes are not yet high enough that he can justify doing so. I am still not sure whether to make Tylus Anaxas (the Duke's son) a guilty party or not. Originally the Dark Sun were just going to be a fringe group who had turned up in Cumberland simply to cause mayhem, with no actual link to anyone there, but when writing the speech by Vivienne I realised that the similarities between the creation of the occula and the Mortalitasi initiation skull are very marked. Then there were those two War Table missions involving Nevarra. Why would the Venatori get away with inciting a mob to attack the Sun Dome when the people of Nevarra are used to having mages walking around free as Mortalitasi? Why would the Duke just stand by and do nothing when his own brother is a mage? (I invented the son). This is why I thought it could have been Mortalitasi behind the action and that Tylus might have persuaded his father not to interfere. Then there was the other mission the Serpent of Nevarra, where a Venatori blood mage was controlling King Markus. In World of Thedas 1 it says that people were concerned that the senile king was too influenced by his Mortalitasi advisers. The fact they were so close to the king made it odd that they wouldn't notice if another mage, not of their group, seemed to have undue influence over him. That suggested that the Venatori controlling him must have also been a member of the Mortalitasi. Then doing more research in the Wiki seemed to uncover other oddities about the formation of the Mortalitasi and that there had been an elitist sect among them at that time. So it seemed feasible that the Dark Sun might have had adherents among them ever since. So these are some ideas that I have already suggested as how different characters can be involved going forward: Sabina - Her group discover an important witness which brings her into contact with Ellas again. This will then get her involved further. (Phoray is currently writing this) Durk - Ellas asks him to do some digging to see what he can find out about some ritualistic murders that have been occurring in the last few months. Issala - Brings forward his books recovered from the dead mage whose destruction of his sword causing him to flee the Qun. These have much valuable information on the spells used by the Dark Sun and how to counter them. Also possibly some clues as to their agenda as the mage was one of their number. Loyalty - I would like to get him involved more in his own right than simply as Ellas' sidekick. What do you think Hero to him deciding to do some snooping on his own? Burren/Lucius - I was going to get Oswyn to sweet talk the Grand Enchanter into letting Lucius undertake his research for Magister Pavus on the condition he doesn't leave the Sun Dome until the true culprits are apprehended and Burren gets to see the results of his studies. Is everyone happy with this? Have you any additional suggestions to make? phoray; riverdaleswhiteflash; TheHeroOfFerelden; Space Cowboy
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Post by Space Cowboy on Apr 4, 2019 23:58:00 GMT
Sounds good!
It makes sense to me that the Mortalitasi have members who are in league with the bad guys. Perhaps one of those mages suspects something and aids in some way.
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Post by riverdaleswhiteflash on Apr 5, 2019 6:50:26 GMT
I could work with that.
This should probably be another collaboration post, right?
(And yeah, your rationale as to the Mortalitasi being in league with the Venatori makes sense. It is kind of a shame, since I like non-villainous necromancers. But on the other hand, this might mean we get to dungeon crawl in the necropoli in a later game, right? And I have wanted that for years...)
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Post by Space Cowboy on Apr 5, 2019 9:49:26 GMT
I could work with that. This should probably be another collaboration post, right? (And yeah, your rationale as to the Mortalitasi being in league with the Venatori makes sense. It is kind of a shame, since I like non-villainous necromancers. But on the other hand, this might mean we get to dungeon crawl in the necropoli in a later game, right? And I have wanted that for years...) It could be just one faction being in league or something
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Post by TheHeroOfFerelden on Apr 5, 2019 17:37:28 GMT
I like the addition of the son persuading his father. I also have no problem with the doggo sniffing around on his own here and there.Do you?Because you'll have to be the one to sort out my queries once i get to it 
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