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Post by rolenka on Jul 10, 2017 18:00:42 GMT
This is made using preset 2. I'm not quite happy with it, but I'm not sure what to try. I like to think I'm proficient with Bioware's character creators, but I'm nowhere near some of the experts I've seen here.
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Post by shechinah on Jul 10, 2017 18:57:18 GMT
What are you unhappy with? I know it's sometimes just a feeling that something is amiss but if you have a hunch or know what it is then it's a bit easier to help you. You could try to move the nose down along with the eyes and/or expand the upper lip's size upwards. The "space" between the upper lip and nose is what caught my eye as otherwise I think the character looks good
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Post by Psychevore on Jul 10, 2017 19:10:29 GMT
Raise the eyebrows Remove or darken the blush Lower all of the following: chin, mouth (more than chin), nose and maybe the eyes. I'd also get rid of the tattoo but you probably put that there because you wanted to
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Post by rolenka on Jul 10, 2017 21:08:00 GMT
What are you unhappy with? I know it's sometimes just a feeling that something is amiss but if you have a hunch or know what it is then it's a bit easier to help you. You could try to move the nose down along with the eyes and/or expand the upper lip's size upwards. The "space" between the upper lip and nose is what caught my eye as otherwise I think the character looks good Raise the eyebrows Remove or darken the blush Lower all of the following: chin, mouth (more than chin), nose and maybe the eyes. I'd also get rid of the tattoo but you probably put that there because you wanted to Thanks very much! I did all of those. I do like the tattoo. I like to use tattoos or beards with my characters. They're a little bit of flair and kind of underutilized. Here is the before/after: That's only one shade of blush opacity darker. It's a big difference. The color is just a little southwest of the center of the triangle, too. Raised the brow and lowered the eyes, nose, mouth and chin. I had been obsessing over the cheeks and couldn't see the more obvious solution. The eyes are actually all the way down to 0 height, and the chin and mouth are at like, 14 or 16 out of 20. Normally I start with all sliders in the middle, but she has a few extremes regardless. Any further nitpicks, or do you think she's spaceworthy?
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Post by shechinah on Jul 10, 2017 21:30:22 GMT
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Post by rolenka on Jul 10, 2017 22:43:59 GMT
I could probably accomplish that by moving the pointer toward the white corner. Thanks.
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Post by KaiserShep on Jul 11, 2017 6:15:10 GMT
Personally, I'd move the eyebrows slightly downward, and perhaps move the mouth up just a teensy bit. I assume you played around with the complexions but I'd be curious to see what this character looks like with one or more different options.
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Post by Deleted on Jul 11, 2017 13:24:48 GMT
I prefer more transparent eyes on the characters, so I'd change the inner eye shade to more luminous.
Also, this haircut is not my favorite because it's so obviously solid, and if it were me, I'd go with natural/darkened lipstick, but I can't stand pink lips and blush, so... yeah.
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Post by rolenka on Jul 11, 2017 21:21:58 GMT
Personally, I'd move the eyebrows slightly downward, and perhaps move the mouth up just a teensy bit. I assume you played around with the complexions but I'd be curious to see what this character looks like with one or more different options. Done! And here are some complexions. The first is the original. The third is the one I used with my first Sara playthrough. The last I also paled the skin tone to 0, because that's the only one that looks right with the new "ginger" complexion. I prefer more transparent eyes on the characters, so I'd change the inner eye shade to more luminous. Also, this haircut is not my favorite because it's so obviously solid, and if it were me, I'd go with natural/darkened lipstick, but I can't stand pink lips and blush, so... yeah. That was actually my attempt at a natural color just with the gloss, but you are right it looked pink. Great tip on the eyes; I didn't think of that. With the haircut I was just trying something new. I might stick with it, but this one below is my favorite. I used it on my first Sara. Thanks again, everyone. Here is her link, if anyone wants to use her: masseffectarchives.com/#user/2296570856/playthrough/1371240721/gender/female
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Post by KaiserShep on Jul 11, 2017 23:13:55 GMT
Personally, I'd move the eyebrows slightly downward, and perhaps move the mouth up just a teensy bit. I assume you played around with the complexions but I'd be curious to see what this character looks like with one or more different options. Done! And here are some complexions. The first is the original. The third is the one I used with my first Sara playthrough. The last I also paled the skin tone to 0, because that's the only one that looks right with the new "ginger" complexion. I prefer more transparent eyes on the characters, so I'd change the inner eye shade to more luminous. Also, this haircut is not my favorite because it's so obviously solid, and if it were me, I'd go with natural/darkened lipstick, but I can't stand pink lips and blush, so... yeah. That was actually my attempt at a natural color just with the gloss, but you are right it looked pink. Great tip on the eyes; I didn't think of that. With the haircut I was just trying something new. I might stick with it, but this one below is my favorite. I used it on my first Sara. Thanks again, everyone. Here is her link, if anyone wants to use her: masseffectarchives.com/#user/2296570856/playthrough/1371240721/gender/femaleI like the last one the most. That little change made a noticeable difference.
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