Constructive Criticism: Peebee's Loyalty Mission (spoilers, obviously)

What bothers me, if the kalinda girlfriend asari is saved, is the stowaway will say to scan the stuff her girlfriend sends. Why wasn't the stowaway's robot scanned after it was recovered from Elaaden? I guess Ryder and the sam voice  thing can take some of the blame for that as well.

This.

I see a lot of intriguing seeds planted throughout the narrative that didn't develop as they could have.

And I can't help but think that the writers (and other functions) are as disappointed with the way things turned out as many of the fans are. They probably ended up having to send rough (or first) drafts of their work to production because they simply didn't have the time to refine them.

The thing that made me mad about this mission was the obligation to run around 4 planets collecting some stuff to finally start it.

The biggest problem about her story mission is just how the game treats the players as if we are ABSOLUTE IDIOT who can't be arsed to find a way forward unless the game REPEATEDLY tell us what to do EVERY. SINGLE. TIME.

It's not enough for the game to give us waypoints, nooooo, they also feel the need to pelt us endlessly with "Ryder! Do this!" "Ryder! Scan that!" "Ryder, don't forget to do this!" "Ryder, don't you know that you can do that?" "Ryder, don't forget to do this!" "Ryder, Ryder, Ryder, Ryder, Ryder!"

If both SAM and Peebee can dial their "The player is an idiot, better tell them what to do" shtick down, the whole mission would be automatically improved 1000000000000000000000x.