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Post by Obliviousmiss on Jul 14, 2017 12:50:24 GMT
I have 6 chapters of a sci-fi fantasy written that I'm going to pick up again when life slows down. In the meantime, I write on thesparklynerdblog.wordpress.com and I tweet at @thesparklynerd 🤓
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Post by Beerfish on Jul 14, 2017 14:32:10 GMT
When I am finished with my 1,725 page magnum opus wonder novel to beat all wonder novels all of you will be so impressed you will stop writing and just utter the words. "After reading that bit of genius, what is the point?" I am on page one at the moment.
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Post by B. Hieronymus Da on Jul 14, 2017 15:56:49 GMT
When I am finished with my 1,725 page magnum opus wonder novel to beat all wonder novels all of you will be so impressed you will stop writing and just utter the words. "After reading that bit of genius, what is the point?" I am on page one at the moment. Oh, page one. Thankyou, I was just about to ask.
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Post by jayrain on Jul 14, 2017 18:04:46 GMT
When I am finished with my 1,725 page magnum opus wonder novel to beat all wonder novels all of you will be so impressed you will stop writing and just utter the words. "After reading that bit of genius, what is the point?" I am on page one at the moment. I'm ready to quit right now just reading that
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Ok how do you guys come up with your character designs from? How do you go about planning them? I have my own system but am curious to see the opinions of others.
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Post by DragonRacer on Jul 15, 2017 14:40:55 GMT
Ok how do you guys come up with your character designs from? How do you go about planning them? I have my own system but am curious to see the opinions of others. Honestly, characters are what come to me first, so doing that is sometimes easier for me than plot or world-building at times. I usually have an immediate initial idea of their general look, demeanor, motivations, and the kind of world they should be set in (fantasy, sci-fi, etc). I'll usually write a little biographical outline like this: Name Race Physical Description Parents Background Vocation Equipment/Weapons General Demeanor Goals/Motivations Role in Story Doesn't mean all of that ^^^ will make an appearance in the story, but it helps to flesh them out for me. Usually two or three characters will come fairly clearly to me for a world setting, then from there I think of others as I think of "well, who might they be friends with" or "who is opposed to them" and from there some plot ideas can usually start forming as well. But for me, the characters come first and have the most importance. Yes, having a plot for them and a cool/believable world are also vastly important, but if people don't feel drawn to or a connection to your characters, they likely won't read long enough to enjoy your amazing plot if your characters are cardboard.
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Post by colfoley on Jul 15, 2017 20:16:26 GMT
Ok how do you guys come up with your character designs from? How do you go about planning them? I have my own system but am curious to see the opinions of others. Honestly, characters are what come to me first, so doing that is sometimes easier for me than plot or world-building at times. I usually have an immediate initial idea of their general look, demeanor, motivations, and the kind of world they should be set in (fantasy, sci-fi, etc). I'll usually write a little biographical outline like this: Name Race Physical Description Parents Background Vocation Equipment/Weapons General Demeanor Goals/Motivations Role in Story Doesn't mean all of that ^^^ will make an appearance in the story, but it helps to flesh them out for me. Usually two or three characters will come fairly clearly to me for a world setting, then from there I think of others as I think of "well, who might they be friends with" or "who is opposed to them" and from there some plot ideas can usually start forming as well. But for me, the characters come first and have the most importance. Yes, having a plot for them and a cool/believable world are also vastly important, but if people don't feel drawn to or a connection to your characters, they likely won't read long enough to enjoy your amazing plot if your characters are cardboard. i actually agree which is why i tend to do them last...or second to last. The way i develop my.over all projects are setting (characters have to have somewhere to live) the beginning and end of the plot (have to know where the Characters go) main characters, and then dwvelop side characters and rest of the plot simultaneously.
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Post by Deleted on Jul 15, 2017 20:18:57 GMT
Can't tell if my art or writing is better. >_>
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Post by B. Hieronymus Da on Jul 15, 2017 20:50:54 GMT
I have done it again. I've had thoughts, provoked no doubt by what others have posted here.
I'm thinking like maybe you shouldn't write the magnum opus novel? Nor the wonder novel. The reason being I suspect the wonder novel is your fear? The fear that stops you from writing? See, I believe it's not page one that is your fear, but your 'The Catcher in the Rye'?
Set out to write 'crap' instead. It won't always be a disaster, because you have something internally in you that recognizes trash and you will continually modify your craft and rewrite.
As to the methodology of writing, I've already hinted that I myself am doing it the all wrong way. Alas, I don't intend to reform.
Ideally, one should work out everything in advance. Spend a lot of time forming the story, inventing and placing all the plot details. Devising a set of scenes by which the story is told. Spend as much time as it takes. Then, as you have it completed as a stack of notes for all the scenes, you just write it. I believe this method was particularly useful in the old age of typewriters, but it totally makes sense in any way.
...Except for creativity and productivity. What follows is not an advice. Just a description of how I do it. I don't think you can use it as an excuse to do the same. It's hard to put the finger on exactly what was wrong - though I'm sure it's something personal - but I never got much anywhere with the well planned story. I suspect it could have something to do with that I'm writing for my recreation. Also, the most and best ideas that spring into my mind comes only as I'm storytelling. My head is pretty much an empty desert when I'm storyplanning. Anyway, the way I get going, and get somewhere, is by only having a loose line to follow. Then, as I write, I'm also telling myself the story. It becomes a journey and I mostly follow it where it takes me. Though, at times, I reconsider and feel I'm on the wrong track and deviates too much from what I had in mind. Then I rewrite or even delete. But as I said, it mostly forms as I write it. And that includes that things pop up which changes the story. And I rewrite. I work over old sections again and again. The text swells by inserted sentences. Some sections, like 10%, others maybe tenfold. I tell myself the story in a linear fashion, starting at the beginning. But I also work over the story again and expand. I also keep a separate data sheet for reference, where I note all characters, places, things and important details and relations. That is actually pretty essential, IMO.
So on the question of creating characters. Well, I simply meet them underway. They define themselves, by how they act and speak. I don't know why I think I can do that, but possibly it's because of all the role-playing? Regardless, it just turns up inside my head. Though it has happened that I had to go back and rewrite an initial meeting with a char, because that char eventually developed into something no longer consistent. ...And as I said, this was not an advice. Just how I have to do it.
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Post by colfoley on Jul 15, 2017 23:08:41 GMT
I have done it again. I've had thoughts, provoked no doubt by what others have posted here. I'm thinking like maybe you shouldn't write the magnum opus novel? Nor the wonder novel. The reason being I suspect the wonder novel is your fear? The fear that stops you from writing? See, I believe it's not page one that is your fear, but your 'The Catcher in the Rye'? Set out to write 'crap' instead. It won't always be a disaster, because you have something internally in you that recognizes trash and you will continually modify your craft and rewrite. As to the methodology of writing, I've already hinted that I myself am doing it the all wrong way. Alas, I don't intend to reform. Ideally, one should work out everything in advance. Spend a lot of time forming the story, inventing and placing all the plot details. Devising a set of scenes by which the story is told. Spend as much time as it takes. Then, as you have it completed as a stack of notes for all the scenes, you just write it. I believe this method was particularly useful in the old age of typewriters, but it totally makes sense in any way. ...Except for creativity and productivity. What follows is not an advice. Just a description of how I do it. I don't think you can use it as an excuse to do the same. It's hard to put the finger on exactly what was wrong - though I'm sure it's something personal - but I never got much anywhere with the well planned story. I suspect it could have something to do with that I'm writing for my recreation. Also, the most and best ideas that spring into my mind comes only as I'm storytelling. My head is pretty much an empty desert when I'm storyplanning. Anyway, the way I get going, and get somewhere, is by only having a loose line to follow. Then, as I write, I'm also telling myself the story. It becomes a journey and I mostly follow it where it takes me. Though, at times, I reconsider and feel I'm on the wrong track and deviates too much from what I had in mind. Then I rewrite or even delete. But as I said, it mostly forms as I write it. And that includes that things pop up which changes the story. And I rewrite. I work over old sections again and again. The text swells by inserted sentences. Some sections, like 10%, others maybe tenfold. I tell myself the story in a linear fashion, starting at the beginning. But I also work over the story again and expand. I also keep a separate data sheet for reference, where I note all characters, places, things and important details and relations. That is actually pretty essential, IMO. So on the question of creating characters. Well, I simply meet them underway. They define themselves, by how they act and speak. I don't know why I think I can do that, but possibly it's because of all the role-playing? Regardless, it just turns up inside my head. Though it has happened that I had to go back and rewrite an initial meeting with a char, because that char eventually developed into something no longer consistent. ...And as I said, this was not an advice. Just how I have to do it. well said. I have so much to say on this but a short time to say it. First off generally when planning out my actual story i do leave it pretty loose. That way i can add. When i was working on that big arse fan fic I'd think 'i feel this chapter is too short' (generally speaking i like my chapters to be at least seven pages long) so what I'd do is b just add a random Character conversation between two characters which serves no other purpose then tov just flesh out the characters. And in my notes in book 2 i have a section 'include conversation between character x and character y' The only problem is that if you are writing a character you have to know that Character. You have to know who they are. RPGs and fan fic make this easy because when i am writing fan fic for bioware i already know them. But on an original work it often takes a while. So that is something i want to brain storm solutions on. Getting to know my characters and ideally know them even before i start writing, since characters are so impotent to me both as an author and consumer of entrainment.
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Post by Psy on Jul 15, 2017 23:54:04 GMT
Still haven't started any fanfic yet.
TBH, Sometimes I wish I never got into writing poetry
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Post by colfoley on Jul 16, 2017 1:22:36 GMT
Another thing I have been doing a loooooottt recently...been watching videos on writing and writing concept and even some stuff on screen writing. And, its awesome. I mean I was vaguely aware that Youtube could be a great educational medium, but only recently have I been using to actively learn. And there is a lot out there. Lore runner, Screen Prism, 'Just Write', Lessons from the Screen Play, and a couple of others. Really great stuff and I will probably link a few videos here later but....until then I welcome everyone else to check them out.
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Post by Lavochkin on Jul 16, 2017 17:41:02 GMT
Still haven't started any fanfic yet. TBH, Sometimes I wish I never got into writing poetry Were those your own poems you recorded for the vocaroo thread?
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Post by legbamel on Jul 20, 2017 11:20:41 GMT
How do you folks go about doing research? Say you have a character that's into guns or you have to describe the condition of a corpse and you're not too sure a flag won't go up on so.e FBI computer when you suddenly start Googling disturbing and specific questions. Do you turn to a local college or just fire up a proxy server or what?
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Post by Verfallen on Jul 20, 2017 11:35:20 GMT
How do you folks go about doing research? Say you have a character that's into guns or you have to describe the condition of a corpse and you're not too sure a flag won't go up on so.e FBI computer when you suddenly start Googling disturbing and specific questions. Do you turn to a local college or just fire up a proxy server or what? Nah, I just research from home. So far I haven't had the Thought Police break down my door. You're allowed to research whatever you want (unless, say, you were 'researching' child pornography or something of that sort by downloading reams of it). Things like corpse descriptions or the effects of partial bodily dismemberment on a conscious victim are fair game. Now, if you were planning some live-action experiments to go along with that research, that could become problematical. Save
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Post by DragonRacer on Jul 20, 2017 14:29:30 GMT
How do you folks go about doing research? Say you have a character that's into guns or you have to describe the condition of a corpse and you're not too sure a flag won't go up on so.e FBI computer when you suddenly start Googling disturbing and specific questions. Do you turn to a local college or just fire up a proxy server or what? I just Google it and don't really worry about it. I've also found Quora to be a pretty cool resource. You might need to create/log-in with a Google account to really get in-depth with it, but it's like a general bizarre question and answer thing, where answers are upvoted for accuracy/relevance. So, a little like a Reddit for writers but easier to read and without the douchewagons.
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Post by colfoley on Jul 20, 2017 18:56:48 GMT
Ah research the bane of my existence.
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Post by smilesja on Jul 21, 2017 0:54:05 GMT
Ah research the bane of my existence.
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Post by colfoley on Jul 27, 2017 7:11:39 GMT
So quick question about editors and those who use them.
In general when it comes to editing there seems to be two basic norms. Either you have someone edit your work, putting suggestions in, and then the writer approves them....or they make the changes as they go. What about you guys? Do you trust your editors to know what to do?
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Post by DomeWing333 on Jul 27, 2017 7:30:53 GMT
So quick question about editors and those who use them. In general when it comes to editing there seems to be two basic norms. Either you have someone edit your work, putting suggestions in, and then the writer approves them....or they make the changes as they go. What about you guys? Do you trust your editors to know what to do? I'm an editor and unless it's a small typo, I don't like making significant changes to someone else's work without permission. And a lot of the time, I don't even know how exactly it should be changed. Because of these issues, I find the use of the Google Docs comments system to be a very convenient way to edit. I can leave the text of the draft alone while still marking up the page all I want with comments (up to and including rewriting lines), and then the writer goes over my comments and discusses with me what changes should be made.
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Post by colfoley on Jul 27, 2017 7:33:54 GMT
So quick question about editors and those who use them. In general when it comes to editing there seems to be two basic norms. Either you have someone edit your work, putting suggestions in, and then the writer approves them....or they make the changes as they go. What about you guys? Do you trust your editors to know what to do? I'm an editor and unless it's a small typo, I don't like making significant changes to someone else's work without permission. And a lot of the time, I don't even know how exactly it should be changed. Because of these issues, I find the use of the Google Docs comments system to be a very convenient way to edit. I can leave the text of the draft alone while still marking up the page all I want with comments (up to and including rewriting lines), and then the writer goes over my comments and discusses with me what changes should be made. My fiancee was using GDocs for a while to edit some of my work band we liked it quite a bit, but it didn't like us much.
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Post by B. Hieronymus Da on Aug 5, 2017 22:10:53 GMT
I haven't had time to listen to this myself yet, but a point of interest is his reaction when he was told that writers' first 5-6 books are generally terrible. "Oh, great, I don't have to be good at this". Which resonates with what I said earlier. Set out to write 'crap'. Just get writing. If you can do this it will eventually sort itself out (Though the last Sanderson novel I read, 'Bands of Mourning' wasn't so good . But he's still the writer that also wrote 'Way of Kings' and 'Words of Radiance'.)
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