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Post by Deleted on Jan 12, 2017 19:32:18 GMT
We know that Saren was not yet on the Citadel during the moments Shepard was talking to Vigil and it is implied that Saren goes directly to the Master Control Unit because Vigil says after one of our squad mates asks about where to find the Master Control Unit: "Through the Conduit. Follow Saren. He will lead you to your destination..... The one you call Saren has not reached the Conduit. Not yet. There is still hope if you hurry." That clearly means that the ONLY difference in the amount of time between Saren arriving on the Citadel and Shepard must be ONLY the length of the Trench Run on Ilos. If you want to believe it took Shepard hours to make that run, you can; but I'm inclined to agree that it most likely took minutes rather than hours. Earlier in that conversation, Shepard indicates that Saren " can use the Conduit to override the Citadel's external defense systems." and Vigil responds that he is "Correct." This means there is absolutely no need for Saren to go to Citadel Control to prevent the Citadel arms from closing. He can override that from the Master Control Unit... same place he where he can then transfer the control of the Citadel over to Sovereign. However, this particular line of Shepard's is poorly written and does contradict what was just discussed with Vigil about the Conduit just being a back door. As a back door, the only thing Saren can do with the Conduit is access the Citadel. He can't use it directly to override the Citadel's systems. Furthermore, the most sensible thing for Saren to have done immediately upon reaching the Citadel would have been to destroy the Conduit itself... particularly if he had hours in which to do so. Assuming Saren would just charge into the Conduit like we did, without taking the time to issue orders, organize the geth or maybe even send a vanguard in first (at this point it wouldn't matter if geth popped up on the Citadel before he did). The line is "use the Conduit to bypass the Citadel's Defenses" And we do see Saren leaving Citadel Control. So he did go there. Likely because an intact control might've been able to reroute and restore defense system functionality before it was too late. As for destroying the Conduit, that's a mini mass relay you're talking about. Even if he had the tools on hand, the resulting explosion would've destroyed the station for sure. Don't think that would've gone over well with his master.If he If he had hours to accomplish it (i.e if it took Shepard hours to make the Trench Run), the Conduit could have been destroyed from the Ilos end; thereby, not destroying the Citadel, but assuredly destroying Shepard, Vigil, the Archives, and perhaps even Normandy in orbit. Big win for Saren. He would have just had to tell a few of those geth he left behind in the Trench to set demolition charges; and the demolition charges set on Eden Prime proves that he can think along those lines. It wouldn't be so bad if there was at least an attempt and perhaps Shepard had to disarm those charges as well as part of the Trench Run... but Saren doesn't even apparently have the time to give such an order to his geth troops. I do stand corrected on the use of the term "bypass" rather than override. However, I still think that in the context of there being a "Master Control Unit" the implication is to shut down the external defenses so that he can then transfer control to Sovereign... not just sneak in around them. Also, since Shepard was instructed to "follow Saren" - then Shepard should have been fighting his way to Citadel Control first... not just bee-lining it for the Council Chambers in the Citadel Tower. The waters are further muddied by the discrepancy in where the game located Citadel Control. Avina #2 (the one by the Citadel Tower) clearly indicates that Citadel Control is in the Citadel Tower... yet, it's not. It's over in the Wards just up some stairs in C-Sec.
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Saren was only a few minutes ahead of Shepard in going through the Conduit. The opening of the Citadel & the docking of Sovereign took minutes, not hours. Based on... what exactly? The actual timed conduit run? Cutscenes? Those can be misleading. Also you're ignoring that Saren didn't go up on the Conduit by himself but rather brought a sizeable number of geth with him. Also, Saren doesn't initially open the arms, he prevents them from closing. And based on the cutscene he had to go to Citadel Control to do that. So it's possible the initial control for the arms was in Citadel Control. Makes sense, given its function and that the Council isn't up in the tower 24/7 nor are they reasonably expected to be the ones actually on guard for a crisis at all hours. So Saren arrives on the Presidium with a shitload of geth, has to storm C-Sec HQ because that's where Citadel Control is, transfer control to the tower, get back to the tower and prepare for Sovereign's arrival, closing the arms behind him. Meanwhile Shepard arrives at the Presidium and has to do some fighting of his own before finally getting to the tower where Saren's been waiting for a while. Seems like more than a few minutes to me. And even a few minutes play out differently in heavily armed combat based on how many troops your bring. The point is Saren needed a lot of backup to do what he did and he couldn't have gotten them there any other way. He still fucked up by attacking Eden Prime instead of using deception to steal the beacon before Shepard even got there. But the search for the Conduit fits. When Shepard lands on Ilos it is practically right on top of Saren. It's also made clear that the Conduit isn't open indefinitely, and that Shepard was only able to drive through it because Saren and his Geth had just passed through. Additionally Shepard's biggest delay was the conversation with Vigil, and Vigil outright states that Saren has not yet passed through the Conduit when the conversation concludes. From that point on Shepard is no longer on foot and the rest plays out as a short race for the Conduit in the Mako. All the indications are that Shepard arrives on the Citadel minutes behind Saren, not hours.
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The big ME1 plot problem revolves around Saren's need to get to Ilos to find the Conduit. We can assume it's his means of Trojan-horsing all of his Krogan and Geth army into the Citadel killing everything in a surprise attack as he ascends to the Tower to find the hidden control panel for Sovereign whereas if he had done so covertly he'd have eyes everywhere and no army to either save him after using the panel to gain control of the Citadel and open Citadel Relay to dark space. Regardless it seems Sovereign and its escort of hundres of Geth ships still move in with brute-force to take over the Citadel which does alert the Citadel Defense and the Alliance, but Saren then closes the arms as Sovereign enters the Citadel so everyone inside is defenseless while it becomes a sort of Reaper base as all the other Reapers then arrive around it (maybe). Saren's plan would probably be to increase ground-resistance while he takes over the Citadel and avoiding C-Sec killing him on sight for disobeying the Council and messing with the Citadel. Either way his plan would risk failing long before Sovereign arrives and Sovereign needs his mole within the tower to manipulate the Citadel because the Keepers aren't functioning as they should. On a side-note, I'm reminded again that the notion that the Crucible was built by Protheans as makes more sense than I thought (even though BioWare backpedaled and said it was the previous species that built it) because Vigil gives Shepard the datafile to gain control of the entire citadel in ME1 and he also tells you protheans manipulated the Keepers, which leads me to believe the Protheans could actually have been aware of the Citadel AI AKA the Catalyst being part of the station and having somehow subverted his programming thus "altering the variables". But alas, BioWare decided the Crucble was (hinted at to be) a Leviathan plan-B concept which also works. Either way it became kind of a convoluted mess. This makes no sense at all... Saren wanting to increase the amount of resistance he is facing during an attack? A covert attack, prior to exposing himself via the Eden Prime attack, would have gotten him closer to the master control unit (council chambers) with fewer casualties to his troops than the frontal assault (just using a "conduit" to drop him onto the public plaza in front of the Tower). A few people suddenly pulling out weapons during a council meeting would have ended the Council immediately. How many people are there shown in the game standing around the Council chambers during Shepard's inaugeration? Maybe 15. There were even less when they were first accusing Saren. The squad aludes to there likely being some snipers out of sight, but still not really enough that Saren, with a few commandos, couldn't easily take them out, especially because they would have been totally surprised... having total trust in Saren (their best Spectre agent). Saren could have then used the Master Control Unit and shut down any external defenses before C-Sec would even be aware anything was happening. Asari commandos could be stationed covertly throughout the Presidium to "surprise" C-Sec officers in various locations simultaneously, thinning their numbers before, again, they're even aware of what is happening. Saren would also have a number of Krogan at his disposal (again, if he had not tipped his hand at Eden Prime), who could have been stationed covertly in various locations throughout the wards (like in the C-Sec area) and probably been able to easily overrun the officers there by first catching them by total surprise. He could also have a bunch of geth hidden on a docked ship (of normal design) - since it would seem totally normal for a Spectre to arrive at the Citadel on a normal ship. The amount of fire power he could bring to to bear on the Citadel via a covert attack would be actually far greater than the amount of troops he was likely able to bring through that "mini" Conduit and he could get them onto more varied locations on the Citadel without detection than having them all drop into only one location. In a more covert attack, he would suffer fewer casualties and inflict more "surprise" casualties on C-Sec before they even realized what was happening. Once Saren has control of the Citadel via using the Master Control Unit, the Citadel's defenses are down and Sovereign could appear through the regular relay and just drive on in. The Alliance fleet wouldn't be alerted to anything, so would not be a factor. Also, by having gained Master control of the Citadel quietly, Saren would have air control over all the Citadel air space and could direct ships into docks normally and ambush them there or use an excuse to put them into some sort of holding pattern. (This is a bonehead move by Cerberus in ME3. They should have answered Joker in a normal fashion, bring him into dock and surprise Shepard as he walked off the ship.) Back to ME1 - Again, Sovereign must have known of that Master Control Unit since the Reapers built the thing to start with. They already know that the keepers aren't doing what they're told. That's self-evident since they aren't trying to open the relay; and Saren could walk through the Citadel any day of the week and just see that the keepers aren't responding to the signal. It doesn't really matter that he find out it was the Protheans who did it, which is the only additional information Vigil can given Saren beyond what Sovereign and Saren already knows or could have easily seen for himself just by quietly observing on the Citadel. It might have been better plot-wise, if Bioware had written it such that the Protheans were the ones to have installed that Master Control Unit and that Sovereign was unaware of it's existence... but they didn't. Alternatively, they could have set it up such that the Protheans did tamper with the Master Control Unit, making it necessary for Saren to have that data file to get things working again... but they didn't. Additionally, if ME1 had done a better job of setting up for the rest of the Trilogy more clearly, then that Master Control Unit AI (installed by the Protheans) could have been revealed as the Catalyst... just needing the Crucible to be installed to be activated. It could have then been easily described as a virus activated within the Citadel systems the moment the Crucible docks and the manner in which it infects and affects the Reapers left in place as the decision of the player (basically, repeating the pattern set up by the Heretic Geth decision in ME2). Instead, to it's own fault, ME3 diverts the plot farther afield by instead revealing the Catalyst to be some sort of dominant Reaper entity AI created by the first race to be harvested... suddenly introducing a whole new species near the end of the Trilogy in the form of a DLC.
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Post by CrutchCricket on Jan 13, 2017 15:56:04 GMT
Saren doesn't need an army. The Geth keep the Citadel forces occupied in space while Sovereign rushes in. All Saren needs is to assassinate a few people in the control tower to cause confusion and take and hold the Council Chamber. Hell the first visit there Ashley mentions how the entire thing is set up to be a very defensible position. Then hold it long enough for Sovereign to dock. At that point he gains complete control of the Citadel. Hence why the magical inexplicable program that the VI gives Shepard on Ilos is so important. It' entire point of existing is to temporarily disrupt Sovereign's control of the Citadel. Without it's magical existence and capability Sovereign would have called in the Reapers. Which is right by C-Sec which is as you say, very defensible. If I was Saren I wouldn't charge it right away even with the geth. I'd send off a few squads to cause chaos in other parts of the station to draw off more officers or to prevent reinforcements from coming in. Maybe make a feint for the Council which C-Sec would have to prioritize. Then I'd hit the Control tower. Yeah but given what the Reapers are and the estimated intelligence of one, I find this hard to swallow. I can buy the Protheans screwing with the Citadel systems enough to corrupt remote control because they had decades and it's a dumb system (well, you know, before the holokid, who's dumb in other ways). But that they can hack protect against a Reaper? Nah, that shouldn't fly. If he had hours to accomplish it (i.e if it took Shepard hours to make the Trench Run), the Conduit could have been destroyed from the Ilos end; thereby, not destroying the Citadel, but assuredly destroying Shepard, Vigil, the Archives, and perhaps even Normandy in orbit. Big win for Saren. He would have just had to tell a few of those geth he left behind in the Trench to set demolition charges; and the demolition charges set on Eden Prime proves that he can think along those lines. It wouldn't be so bad if there was at least an attempt and perhaps Shepard had to disarm those charges as well as part of the Trench Run... but Saren doesn't even apparently have the time to give such an order to his geth troops. I do stand corrected on the use of the term "bypass" rather than override. However, I still think that in the context of there being a "Master Control Unit" the implication is to shut down the external defenses so that he can then transfer control to Sovereign... not just sneak in around them. Also, since Shepard was instructed to "follow Saren" - then Shepard should have been fighting his way to Citadel Control first... not just bee-lining it for the Council Chambers in the Citadel Tower. The waters are further muddied by the discrepancy in where the game located Citadel Control. Avina #2 (the one by the Citadel Tower) clearly indicates that Citadel Control is in the Citadel Tower... yet, it's not. It's over in the Wards just up some stairs in C-Sec. I don't think the problem was time, the problem is means. We've seen what it takes to destroy a full relay, destroying the Conduit would take less but on a scale that's still greater than anything ground forces might carry (well, short of nukes I guess). And why would Saren be so rushed anyway? Unless Sovereign said "we attack at dawn deal with it" why the rush? The plan is as follows: Saren ambushes the Council/Citadel Control through the Conduit pulling a pale imitation of his master. At the same time, Sovereign and the geth fleet bum rush the Citadel. Saren opens the arms (or rather keeps them open) until Sovereign's in, then he closes them, guards the controls and waits for glorious genocide. The plan hinges on Saren's actions, not Sovereign's. No one on the Citadel's aware of the Conduit or even believes Saren can bypass their defenses so when he does so is irrelevant. As for Shepard he has one (admittedly impressive) ship and six fighters on his side, vs a geth army and fleet, remnants of Benezia's commandos and Virmire krogan. So again where's the rush? If anything Saren should stop running, turn around and deal with Shepard for good. He is never at a disadvantage until the very end. As to the Master Control Unit, it sounds like the thing that would control everything... including the hidden functions people aren't supposed to know about. So here is where I would question why such a thing is in a "public area" of the Citadel, as opposed to a hidden keeper area. I would never disagree with you that the Conduit leading to the inaccessible hidden core of the Citadel or really the entire endgame taking place in such an area would've been a much more logical idea than what we have. What we have was done for visual reasons, coming full circle from a literary perspective. It works, but the other way would've been better. Not just for logic but also for later events. The Council continuing to go full "ah yes Reapers" retard for example. If the Master Control Unit is in the tower and Sovereign was hooked up to it for however long, would logs not exist of what he was trying to do that would expose at least some of the hidden truth? Were there no security cameras still active that recorderd Saren's corpse being turned into a glowy hopper husk? If all this had happened in the "hidden core" there would literally be no visible proof but Shepard's word. Also quick note on Shepard following Saren- Saren had already left Citadel Control before Shepard used the Conduit. So whatever magical sense Shepard had as to Saren's exact location on the Citadel (or did an AVINA tell him? I can't remember and I haven't been back there yet) would already be pointing him to the tower.
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If he had hours to accomplish it (i.e if it took Shepard hours to make the Trench Run), the Conduit could have been destroyed from the Ilos end; thereby, not destroying the Citadel, but assuredly destroying Shepard, Vigil, the Archives, and perhaps even Normandy in orbit. Big win for Saren. He would have just had to tell a few of those geth he left behind in the Trench to set demolition charges; and the demolition charges set on Eden Prime proves that he can think along those lines. It wouldn't be so bad if there was at least an attempt and perhaps Shepard had to disarm those charges as well as part of the Trench Run... but Saren doesn't even apparently have the time to give such an order to his geth troops. I do stand corrected on the use of the term "bypass" rather than override. However, I still think that in the context of there being a "Master Control Unit" the implication is to shut down the external defenses so that he can then transfer control to Sovereign... not just sneak in around them. Also, since Shepard was instructed to "follow Saren" - then Shepard should have been fighting his way to Citadel Control first... not just bee-lining it for the Council Chambers in the Citadel Tower. The waters are further muddied by the discrepancy in where the game located Citadel Control. Avina #2 (the one by the Citadel Tower) clearly indicates that Citadel Control is in the Citadel Tower... yet, it's not. It's over in the Wards just up some stairs in C-Sec. I don't think the problem was time, the problem is means. We've seen what it takes to destroy a full relay, destroying the Conduit would take less but on a scale that's still greater than anything ground forces might carry (well, short of nukes I guess). And why would Saren be so rushed anyway? Unless Sovereign said "we attack at dawn deal with it" why the rush? The plan is as follows: Saren ambushes the Council/Citadel Control through the Conduit pulling a pale imitation of his master. At the same time, Sovereign and the geth fleet bum rush the Citadel. Saren opens the arms (or rather keeps them open) until Sovereign's in, then he closes them, guards the controls and waits for glorious genocide. The plan hinges on Saren's actions, not Sovereign's. No one on the Citadel's aware of the Conduit or even believes Saren can bypass their defenses so when he does so is irrelevant. As for Shepard he has one (admittedly impressive) ship and six fighters on his side, vs a geth army and fleet, remnants of Benezia's commandos and Virmire krogan. So again where's the rush? If anything Saren should stop running, turn around and deal with Shepard for good. He is never at a disadvantage until the very end. As to the Master Control Unit, it sounds like the thing that would control everything... including the hidden functions people aren't supposed to know about. So here is where I would question why such a thing is in a "public area" of the Citadel, as opposed to a hidden keeper area. I would never disagree with you that the Conduit leading to the inaccessible hidden core of the Citadel or really the entire endgame taking place in such an area would've been a much more logical idea than what we have. What we have was done for visual reasons, coming full circle from a literary perspective. It works, but the other way would've been better. Not just for logic but also for later events. The Council continuing to go full "ah yes Reapers" retard for example. If the Master Control Unit is in the tower and Sovereign was hooked up to it for however long, would logs not exist of what he was trying to do that would expose at least some of the hidden truth? Were there no security cameras still active that recorderd Saren's corpse being turned into a glowy hopper husk? If all this had happened in the "hidden core" there would literally be no visible proof but Shepard's word. Also quick note on Shepard following Saren- Saren had already left Citadel Control before Shepard used the Conduit. So whatever magical sense Shepard had as to Saren's exact location on the Citadel (or did an AVINA tell him? I can't remember and I haven't been back there yet) would already be pointing him to the tower. The bombs Saren used on Eden Prime are clearly described as being "nukes" (by Maeko Matsuo on Feros if Shepard indicates that the reason he/she became a Spectre is because he saved Eden Prime. She responds with "You're the one who disarmed the nukes..."). So, Saren has the means. Saren is too rushed because, obviously, you're wrong, the Trench Run is minutes long, not hours and Shepard is hot on his tale. Avina #2 can tell him, if the player inquires with her; but Shepard will bee-line for the Citadel Tower even without triggering the conversation with Avina. As I said, one problem in this part is that the same Avina #2, earlier in the game, will clearly tell Shepard that Citadel Control is in the Citadel Tower; but the Emily Wong quest sends Shepard to Citadel Control in the wards up the stairs from C-Sec. The only reason Saren has to ambush the Citadel using the Conduit rather than a more efficient covert attack is because he foolishly blew his "cover" as a Spectre (i.e. destroyed the unlimited accessibility he had to virtually every known area of the Citadel) by attacking Eden Prime for information he really didn't need and that, ultimately, was no real assistance to him. That's precisely why, in my opinion, the ME1 plot undermines itself.
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I don't think the problem was time, the problem is means. We've seen what it takes to destroy a full relay, destroying the Conduit would take less but on a scale that's still greater than anything ground forces might carry (well, short of nukes I guess). And why would Saren be so rushed anyway? Unless Sovereign said "we attack at dawn deal with it" why the rush? The plan is as follows: Saren ambushes the Council/Citadel Control through the Conduit pulling a pale imitation of his master. At the same time, Sovereign and the geth fleet bum rush the Citadel. Saren opens the arms (or rather keeps them open) until Sovereign's in, then he closes them, guards the controls and waits for glorious genocide. The plan hinges on Saren's actions, not Sovereign's. No one on the Citadel's aware of the Conduit or even believes Saren can bypass their defenses so when he does so is irrelevant. As for Shepard he has one (admittedly impressive) ship and six fighters on his side, vs a geth army and fleet, remnants of Benezia's commandos and Virmire krogan. So again where's the rush? If anything Saren should stop running, turn around and deal with Shepard for good. He is never at a disadvantage until the very end. As to the Master Control Unit, it sounds like the thing that would control everything... including the hidden functions people aren't supposed to know about. So here is where I would question why such a thing is in a "public area" of the Citadel, as opposed to a hidden keeper area. I would never disagree with you that the Conduit leading to the inaccessible hidden core of the Citadel or really the entire endgame taking place in such an area would've been a much more logical idea than what we have. What we have was done for visual reasons, coming full circle from a literary perspective. It works, but the other way would've been better. Not just for logic but also for later events. The Council continuing to go full "ah yes Reapers" retard for example. If the Master Control Unit is in the tower and Sovereign was hooked up to it for however long, would logs not exist of what he was trying to do that would expose at least some of the hidden truth? Were there no security cameras still active that recorderd Saren's corpse being turned into a glowy hopper husk? If all this had happened in the "hidden core" there would literally be no visible proof but Shepard's word. Also quick note on Shepard following Saren- Saren had already left Citadel Control before Shepard used the Conduit. So whatever magical sense Shepard had as to Saren's exact location on the Citadel (or did an AVINA tell him? I can't remember and I haven't been back there yet) would already be pointing him to the tower. The bombs Saren used on Eden Prime are clearly described as being "nukes" (by Maeko Matsuo on Feros if Shepard indicates that the reason he/she became a Spectre is because he saved Eden Prime. She responds with "You're the one who disarmed the nukes..."). So, Saren has the means. Saren is too rushed because, obviously, you're wrong, the Trench Run is minutes long, not hours and Shepard is hot on his tale. The only reason Saren has to ambush the Citadel using the Conduit is because he foolishly blew his "cover" as a Spectre (i.e. destroyed the unlimited accessibility he had to virtually every known area of the Citadel) by attacking Eden Prime for information he really didn't need. That's precisely why, in my opinion, the ME1 plot undermines itself. I've always wondered if perhaps in an early script Saren wasn't a Spectre. Maybe originally he lost his Spectre status after that mission with Anderson went south. Sovereign needing the Conduit only makes sense if Saren is an outsider that isn't able to roam around the Presidium with an armed entourage.
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The bombs Saren used on Eden Prime are clearly described as being "nukes" (by Maeko Matsuo on Feros if Shepard indicates that the reason he/she became a Spectre is because he saved Eden Prime. She responds with "You're the one who disarmed the nukes..."). So, Saren has the means. Saren is too rushed because, obviously, you're wrong, the Trench Run is minutes long, not hours and Shepard is hot on his tale. The only reason Saren has to ambush the Citadel using the Conduit is because he foolishly blew his "cover" as a Spectre (i.e. destroyed the unlimited accessibility he had to virtually every known area of the Citadel) by attacking Eden Prime for information he really didn't need. That's precisely why, in my opinion, the ME1 plot undermines itself. I've always wondered if perhaps in an early script Saren wasn't a Spectre. Maybe originally he lost his Spectre status after that mission with Anderson went south. Sovereign needing the Conduit only makes sense if Saren is an outsider that isn't able to roam around the Presidium with an armed entourage. I agree. The discrepancies, in several ways, are suggestive of a significant change of course partway through the writing.
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Post by CrutchCricket on Jan 13, 2017 16:44:52 GMT
The bombs Saren used on Eden Prime are clearly described as being "nukes" (by Maeko Matsuo on Feros if Shepard indicates that the reason he/she became a Spectre is because he saved Eden Prime. She responds with "You're the one who disarmed the nukes..."). So, Saren has the means. Saren is too rushed because, obviously, you're wrong, the Trench Run is minutes long, not hours and Shepard is hot on his tale. The only reason Saren has to ambush the Citadel using the Conduit is because he foolishly blew his "cover" as a Spectre (i.e. destroyed the unlimited accessibility he had to virtually every known area of the Citadel) by attacking Eden Prime for information he really didn't need. That's precisely why, in my opinion, the ME1 plot undermines itself. Who would know... how? "A few stories on the extranet"? A simple "security guard" (her words not mine) on Noveria has details on a major terrorist incident? Also she says "you disabled the nuke". Note the singular. We disabled multiple bombs on Eden Prime. I wonder if the line was initially meant to apply to Virmire and then moved around for some reason. Regardless there are of course several issues with this assumption including: -access to unlimited nukes: even in Mass Effect, nuclear weapons and explosions are treated as a big deal. The Reapers wipe out all missile silos first when they attack a world, indicating they're a threat, either to themselves or to prevent a species wiping itself out in the process. -nukes on hand to begin with: who in Saren's group would need or have nukes on hand? Sovereign and the geth don't need them, the krogan are clones, Benezia as a matriach certainly wouldn't have them as she was respectable before indoctrination and Saren himself as a Spectre as a "do whatever you want and get away with it" badge but still. It's freakin nukes we're talking about. The Council is shocked and disturbed when Shepard sets off a nuke. How would they feel about Saren requisitioning multiple bombs? It's far more likely the Eden Prime jobs were procured on site (and thus not actually nukes but high yield explosives, or perhaps improvised nukes the way the Virmire bomb is) or procured specifically for the mission (which again, attacking was unnecessary, we agree on that much). -Time: You still haven't answered why Saren is running.
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The bombs Saren used on Eden Prime are clearly described as being "nukes" (by Maeko Matsuo on Feros if Shepard indicates that the reason he/she became a Spectre is because he saved Eden Prime. She responds with "You're the one who disarmed the nukes..."). So, Saren has the means. Saren is too rushed because, obviously, you're wrong, the Trench Run is minutes long, not hours and Shepard is hot on his tale. The only reason Saren has to ambush the Citadel using the Conduit is because he foolishly blew his "cover" as a Spectre (i.e. destroyed the unlimited accessibility he had to virtually every known area of the Citadel) by attacking Eden Prime for information he really didn't need. That's precisely why, in my opinion, the ME1 plot undermines itself. Who would know... how? "A few stories on the extranet"? A simple "security guard" (her words not mine) on Noveria has details on a major terrorist incident? Also she says "you disabled the nuke". Note the singular. We disabled multiple bombs on Eden Prime. I wonder if the line was initially meant to apply to Virmire and then moved around for some reason. Regardless there are of course several issues with this assumption including: -access to unlimited nukes: even in Mass Effect, nuclear weapons and explosions are treated as a big deal. The Reapers wipe out all missile silos first when they attack a world, indicating they're a threat, either to themselves or to prevent a species wiping itself out in the process. -nukes on hand to begin with: who in Saren's group would need or have nukes on hand? Sovereign and the geth don't need them, the krogan are clones, Benezia as a matriach certainly wouldn't have them as she was respectable before indoctrination and Saren himself as a Spectre as a "do whatever you want and get away with it" badge but still. It's freakin nukes we're talking about. The Council is shocked and disturbed when Shepard sets off a nuke. How would they feel about Saren requisitioning multiple bombs? It's far more likely the Eden Prime jobs were procured on site (and thus not actually nukes but high yield explosives, or perhaps improvised nukes the way the Virmire bomb is) or procured specifically for the mission (which again, attacking was unnecessary, we agree on that much). -Time: You still haven't answered why Saren is running. Shepard knows... and he/she does not correct Matsuo about it being a nuke. Why would you assume the line was originally meant to refer to Virmire... Shepard sets the nuke on Virmire, he/she does not disable or disarm it. There are also a few problems with just assuming that the Trench Run took hours for Shepard to complete. As as been said, clearly Shepard arrives on Ilos only a short time after Saren. All Saren has time to do there is quickly close the door. As both Han and I have indicated, Vigil clearly indicates that, at the point where Shepard starts the Trench Run, Saren has not yet even reached the Conduit. As Han has said, the Conduit is still active from when Saren used it, so that Shepard can just drive into it with the Mako. The reality is that the story plot is a mess... which is what I've been saying all along. ME1 ultimately has a lot of its own flaws and doesn't do what a proper first installment of a Trilogy should do... that is, provide a solid foundation on which the finale is ultimately constructed. ME1 is to blame for the ultimate mess that is ME3 AS MUCH AS the flaws created anew in ME3 are to blame. Add in the fact that ME2 does nothing to advance the main plot (which is what a 2nd installment of a Trilogy should do) and it is obvious that I'm assessing the blame 1/3 to each installment.
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Post by CrutchCricket on Jan 13, 2017 17:00:37 GMT
Shepard knows... and he/she does not correct Matsuo about it being a nuke. Why would you assume the line was originally meant to refer to Virmire... Shepard sets the nuke on Virmire, he/she does not disable or disarm it. Why would he? Doesn't seem like a situation to brag in nor is he shown to be particularly OCD about that kind of thing. I assumed because Virmire is the big nuke moment, complete with mushroom cloud, wheras Eden Prime is just generic "disarm the bombs". There's no real reason to assume they're nukes apart from this line and in the six years I've been a fan of this franchise I never gave them a second thought. Edit replying to your edit: You still aren't answering why Saren is running. And to the general points, I again wonder why you harp on this point constantly. I can more or less agree with teh following assertions: -ME1 presented problems that impacted the rest of the trilogy. -These problems were not addressed/fixed and were inherited by ME3, making its job harder. that seem to be your conclusion, yet they do not follow from this point, but from others that I've pointed out. So why do you insist on the Conduit being the root of all evil here?
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Post by themikefest on Jan 13, 2017 17:13:16 GMT
When Saren sees the Normandy, he was on foot. Did he walk all the way to the conduit? Or did he call a taxi? If he did walk, Shepard might have caught up to him before he reached the conduit. Don't know.
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Post by Deleted on Jan 13, 2017 17:19:29 GMT
Shepard knows... and he/she does not correct Matsuo about it being a nuke. Why would you assume the line was originally meant to refer to Virmire... Shepard sets the nuke on Virmire, he/she does not disable or disarm it. Why would he? Doesn't seem like a situation to brag in nor is he shown to be particularly OCD about that kind of thing. I assumed because Virmire is the big nuke moment, complete with mushroom cloud, wheras Eden Prime is just generic "disarm the bombs". There's no real reason to assume they're nukes apart from this line and in the six years I've been a fan of this franchise I never gave them a second thought. Edit replying to your edit: You still aren't answering why Saren is running. And to the general points, I again wonder why you harp on this point constantly. I can more or less agree with teh following assertions: -ME1 presented problems that impacted the rest of the trilogy. -These problems were not addressed/fixed and were inherited by ME3, making its job harder. that seem to be your conclusion, yet they do not follow from this point, but from others that I've pointed out. So why do you insist on the Conduit being the root of all evil here? Saren is running because he sees Shepard land in the Mako just be he shuts the door on Ilos. He knows Shepard is hot on his heels pursuing him and doesn't want to be stopped by Shepard from using the Conduit. He tries to slow Shepard down by 1) sealing the door 2) leaving some geth behind that shut down the power 3) leaving some geth behind in the Trench; but he probably thinks there is a good chance Shepard will blow through all those obstacles and keep pursuing him. He also taunts Shepard a bit at the end with something like "I was afraid you wouldn't make it in time" which probably translates to something like "I was really hoping the geth I left to slow you down would be enough that you wouldn't make it in time, but I'm not surprised you're here." Where am I suggesting that the Conduit is the root of all evil? Why do you insist that that's what I'm saying?... When I'm clearly saying the variety of plot discrepancies (including this nonsensical thing with the Conduit, but also including discrepancies in how the Mass Relays work, and where Citadel Control is located) in ME1 are the root of ME1's contribution (1/3 of the blame) to the problem.
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Post by CrutchCricket on Jan 13, 2017 18:24:50 GMT
Saren is running because he sees Shepard land in the Mako just be he shuts the door on Ilos. He knows Shepard is hot on his heels pursuing him and doesn't want to be stopped by Shepard from using the Conduit. He tries to slow Shepard down by 1) sealing the door 2) leaving some geth behind that shut down the power 3) leaving some geth behind in the Trench; but he probably thinks there is a good chance Shepard will blow through all those obstacles and keep pursuing him. He also taunts Shepard a bit at the end with something like "I was afraid you wouldn't make it in time" which probably translates to something like "I was really hoping the geth I left to slow you down would be enough that you wouldn't make it in time, but I'm not surprised you're here." Where am I suggesting that the Conduit is the root of all evil? Why do you insist that that's what I'm saying?... When I'm clearly saying the variety of plot discrepancies (including this nonsensical thing with the Conduit, but also including discrepancies in how the Mass Relays work, and where Citadel Control is located) in ME1 are the root of ME1's contribution (1/3 of the blame) to the problem. So a man with a geth army at his back, and a few krogan clones and asari commandos runs from a guy with crew of just six, while counting on doors and small squads said pursuer has already been blowing through like tissue paper this entire time to stop him? Here's an idea, get those four Colossi by the trench run, and back them up with iike ten more and also about 100 other combat platforms of all sizes and shapes, with a couple of dropships for air support. Then have some asari and krogan flank them when they rush in, box them into a kill zone and turn them into s wiss cheese vaporized specs of dust while chomping on a space cigar. Then activate the Conduit and stroll through like a boss. What's that? Then you wouldn't have a game? Welp, that's what I've been saying about the Conduit from the start! Some things you can poke, some you leave alone because video game. Because you don't talk about any variety of plot discrepancies. You just go back to the Conduit every time. And your past couple of replies have read like a refusal to engage the argument at hand (I had to ask you three times why Saren's running) in favor of simply restating "the Conduit sucks". You've broken off the argument to restate your conclusion despite the fact that we haven't finished debating it yet.
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Post by Deleted on Jan 13, 2017 18:48:03 GMT
Saren is running because he sees Shepard land in the Mako just be he shuts the door on Ilos. He knows Shepard is hot on his heels pursuing him and doesn't want to be stopped by Shepard from using the Conduit. He tries to slow Shepard down by 1) sealing the door 2) leaving some geth behind that shut down the power 3) leaving some geth behind in the Trench; but he probably thinks there is a good chance Shepard will blow through all those obstacles and keep pursuing him. He also taunts Shepard a bit at the end with something like "I was afraid you wouldn't make it in time" which probably translates to something like "I was really hoping the geth I left to slow you down would be enough that you wouldn't make it in time, but I'm not surprised you're here." Where am I suggesting that the Conduit is the root of all evil? Why do you insist that that's what I'm saying?... When I'm clearly saying the variety of plot discrepancies (including this nonsensical thing with the Conduit, but also including discrepancies in how the Mass Relays work, and where Citadel Control is located) in ME1 are the root of ME1's contribution (1/3 of the blame) to the problem. So a man with a geth army at his back, and a few krogan clones and asari commandos runs from a guy with crew of just six, while counting on doors and small squads said pursuer has already been blowing through like tissue paper this entire time to stop him? Here's an idea, get those four Colossi by the trench run, and back them up with iike ten more and also about 100 other combat platforms of all sizes and shapes, with a couple of dropships for air support. Then have some asari and krogan flank them when they rush in, box them into a kill zone and turn them into s wiss cheese vaporized specs of dust while chomping on a space cigar. Then activate the Conduit and stroll through like a boss. What's that? Then you wouldn't have a game? Welp, that's what I've been saying about the Conduit from the start! Some things you can poke, some you leave alone because video game. Because you don't talk about any variety of plot discrepancies. You just go back to the Conduit every time. And your past couple of replies have read like a refusal to engage the argument at hand (I had to ask you three times why Saren's running) in favor of simply restating "the Conduit sucks". You've broken off the argument to restate your conclusion despite the fact that we haven't finished debating it yet. I have posted about the two other ME1 discrepancies (i.e. mass relay function and Citadel Control location) in this very thread. Just stop making such absolute accusations... and maybe we could discuss something else in depth like reasonable people.
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Post by CrutchCricket on Jan 13, 2017 18:55:12 GMT
I have posted about the two other ME1 discrepancies (i.e. mass relay function and Citadel Control location) in this very thread. Just stop making such absolute accusations... and maybe we could discuss something else in depth like reasonable people. Well, I think a wiser course of action would be to agree to disagree. It seems we've taken this discussion as far as it'll go.
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Post by Deleted on Jan 13, 2017 19:30:51 GMT
Another plot hole in ME1 contributing to some of the issues is the way "manipulation" of the Rachni changes hands. On Noveria, the culprits who reawakened the Rachni queen are Binary Helix, working under Saren's direction. The two missions in the Styx Theta cluster, however, place Cerberus behind the spreading of those rachni based on the logs of Elena Flores. How this comes about is never addressed in any of the three games. Did Cerberus buy eggs from Binary Helix in order to start their project? Is there a connection between Binary Helix and Cerberus? Such a connection would certainly have implications for Shepard in ME2 and ME3... but nothing is ever brought up about it in the games again. Similarly, the Thorian issue on Feros is something that Exo-Geni is mismanaging; yet. Here, Exo-Geni is still the culprit when we meet Dr. Ross on Nepheron, but unexplained is the appearance of both Thorian Creepers and Rachni in Cerberus' facilities on Binthu and Shepard will clearly tell Miranda that he saw Cerberus' experiments with rachni and thorian creepers while hunting down Saren. In ME2, the Feros colonists and Exo-Geni don't appear to be connected with Cerberus in any way; and again, it remains just an unexplained plot hole throughout the remainder of the games; and I'm pretty sure that Binary Helix isn't mentioned in ME2 at all. Perhaps if Bioware had taken some time to develop and explain what possibly connects these earlier events involving other companies with Cerberus, ME2 would not seem quite so out of step with the rest of the Trilogy.
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Post by Deleted on Jan 13, 2017 19:37:50 GMT
I have posted about the two other ME1 discrepancies (i.e. mass relay function and Citadel Control location) in this very thread. Just stop making such absolute accusations... and maybe we could discuss something else in depth like reasonable people. Well, I think a wiser course of action would be to agree to disagree. It seems we've taken this discussion as far as it'll go. Fine by me. I've tried to answer your questions and you're not happy with those answers. Agree to disagree works for me.
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Post by gothpunkboy89 on Jan 13, 2017 19:56:45 GMT
Saren doesn't need an army. The Geth keep the Citadel forces occupied in space while Sovereign rushes in. All Saren needs is to assassinate a few people in the control tower to cause confusion and take and hold the Council Chamber. Hell the first visit there Ashley mentions how the entire thing is set up to be a very defensible position. Then hold it long enough for Sovereign to dock. At that point he gains complete control of the Citadel. Hence why the magical inexplicable program that the VI gives Shepard on Ilos is so important. It' entire point of existing is to temporarily disrupt Sovereign's control of the Citadel. Without it's magical existence and capability Sovereign would have called in the Reapers. Which is right by C-Sec which is as you say, very defensible. If I was Saren I wouldn't charge it right away even with the geth. I'd send off a few squads to cause chaos in other parts of the station to draw off more officers or to prevent reinforcements from coming in. Maybe make a feint for the Council which C-Sec would have to prioritize. Then I'd hit the Control tower. Yeah but given what the Reapers are and the estimated intelligence of one, I find this hard to swallow. I can buy the Protheans screwing with the Citadel systems enough to corrupt remote control because they had decades and it's a dumb system (well, you know, before the holokid, who's dumb in other ways). But that they can hack protect against a Reaper? Nah, that shouldn't fly. And for that a few Asari and Krogan are all that is needed. Because the point of the attack isn't to win a ground side military victory were they subjugate everyone. The point is to hold off off C-Sec just long enough for Sovergein to dock with the Citadel. After that without the deus ex machina that Shepard magically has it is game over for the rest of the galaxy. Even if Saren and the Asari and Krogan were swarmed under by the responds of C-Sec and any Specters on the Citadel. It wouldn't matter because they wouldn't have the knowledge or technical skills to over right the giant AI space cuttlefish who is a part of the race that build the Citadel and all it's systems. Rationalize it how ever you want in your own head. Fact is every scrap of measurable detail given in the original game points to how utterly stupid Saren is chasing after something and exposing not only his own actions but eventually Sovereign's as well going after a meaningless and pointless object that he wouldn't have needed in the first place. If he didn't act like a complete and total idiot. Acting as such a cliche bad guy that he literally shoot himself in the foot and ruins any logical plan he might have been able to do in the first 10 minutes of existing in the game. Chasing after a magical mcguffin that he only needs because he exposed himself over something so stupid. And it would be one thing if he went after the mcguffin because he was exposed. But the sprinkles and the shit sandwich that is Saren's plan is that he started after the mcguffin when he didn't need it and exposed himself over it. Seriously even ignoring the fact that with Sovereign's instruction Saren could have easily undid what the Protheans did to alter the Keeper signal. He could have just had the Geth take the Beacon off world and back to behind the Perseus Veil or to his secret base on Virmire. Used it there and then destroyed it. There is no logical reason for him to even be withing a dozen systems of Eden Prime when the events were taking place.
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Post by Link"Guess"ski on Jan 13, 2017 23:47:52 GMT
I know this is cheating but I'm reading the comics by Mac Walters and sometimes other writers. The ones written by John Jackson Miller are actually pretty decent.
In Foundation 3 we get the events prior to the opening of ME1 when Ashley loses the 212 on Eden Prime. At one point she says it's been over a day since Saren's attack and this is before ME1's opening. Weren't it all really urgent while Shepard received the transmission from Eden Prime? Did that transmission really come one day after the attacks started?
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I know this is cheating but I'm reading the comics by Mac Walters and sometimes other writers. The ones written by John Jackson Miller are actually pretty decent. In Foundation 3 we get the events prior to the opening of ME1 when Ashley loses the 212 on Eden Prime. At one point she says it's been over a day since Saren's attack and this is before ME1's opening. Weren't it all really urgent while Shepard received the transmission from Eden Prime? Did that transmission really come one day after the attacks started? Thoughts? Yea their track record of non game books/comics is very hit and miss. With a lot more misses then hits.
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Post by CrutchCricket on Jan 14, 2017 0:43:21 GMT
And for that a few Asari and Krogan are all that is needed. Because the point of the attack isn't to win a ground side military victory were they subjugate everyone. The point is to hold off off C-Sec just long enough for Sovergein to dock with the Citadel. After that without the deus ex machina that Shepard magically has it is game over for the rest of the galaxy. Even if Saren and the Asari and Krogan were swarmed under by the responds of C-Sec and any Specters on the Citadel. It wouldn't matter because they wouldn't have the knowledge or technical skills to over right the giant AI space cuttlefish who is a part of the race that build the Citadel and all it's systems. Rationalize it how ever you want in your own head. Fact is every scrap of measurable detail given in the original game points to how utterly stupid Saren is chasing after something and exposing not only his own actions but eventually Sovereign's as well going after a meaningless and pointless object that he wouldn't have needed in the first place. If he didn't act like a complete and total idiot. Acting as such a cliche bad guy that he literally shoot himself in the foot and ruins any logical plan he might have been able to do in the first 10 minutes of existing in the game. Chasing after a magical mcguffin that he only needs because he exposed himself over something so stupid. And it would be one thing if he went after the mcguffin because he was exposed. But the sprinkles and the shit sandwich that is Saren's plan is that he started after the mcguffin when he didn't need it and exposed himself over it. Seriously even ignoring the fact that with Sovereign's instruction Saren could have easily undid what the Protheans did to alter the Keeper signal. He could have just had the Geth take the Beacon off world and back to behind the Perseus Veil or to his secret base on Virmire. Used it there and then destroyed it. There is no logical reason for him to even be withing a dozen systems of Eden Prime when the events were taking place. A few krogan and asari take on C-Sec HQ (while also providing the general chaos and drawing away forces I mentioned)? You must be joking. Winning ground is precisely what needs to happen since they're not raiding a bake shop here. The fact that they don't intend to hold it afterwards is irrelevant. Saren needs enough troops to fight through C-Sec and back out again, up to the tower. Even if it's a one way trip for all involved, there's multiple stops and loop. Also when you already a geth army why the hell would you not use it? Saren made one mistake. Just one. He used violence at Eden Prime instead of deception and he left witnesses. He needed the beacon (because at that point no one knew what it did or what the Conduit was) he should've showed up with Benezia, a spectre and a matriarch here to take the beacon, wham bam thank you goodbye. And that's it. Instead he decided to torch the place. A stupid mistake, but even so it can be justified by his character. He's arrogant, hates humans and likes to cause carnage. He actually would've gotten away with it too if not for the most unlikely chain of coincidences (and also these pesky kids): a random quarian (a rarity round these parts) recovering geth memory which never happens, who travels to the Citadel and evades assassins by way of Shepard literally wandering down a random alley. Without these events happening exactly as they did, our heroes would've had precisely dick to a) strip Saren of his Spectre Status, promote Shepard to the Spectres and thus c) gather the band and gain command of the ship that would prove his downfall.
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I know this is cheating but I'm reading the comics by Mac Walters and sometimes other writers. The ones written by John Jackson Miller are actually pretty decent. In Foundation 3 we get the events prior to the opening of ME1 when Ashley loses the 212 on Eden Prime. At one point she says it's been over a day since Saren's attack and this is before ME1's opening. Weren't it all really urgent while Shepard received the transmission from Eden Prime? Did that transmission really come one day after the attacks started? Thoughts? IMHO, the writing staff of ME1 and other items such as the comics were really inconsistent about representing their timelines. 1) After viewing the transmission, Joker does clearly say that they are "17 minutes out." 2) The guy in the transmission says "They game out of nowhere." IMHO, that's something he would not be saying if they had already been fighting them for over a day. 3) When Shepard and squad first land, Kaidan says that it smells like smoke and death. To me, this again implies that the smoke from the weapons fire hasn't even had time to settle before Shepard is dropped onto the planet. 4) When Shepard meets up with Ashley, she says: "We were patrolling the perimeter when the attack hit. We tried to get off a distress call, but they cut off our communications. I've been fighting for my life ever since." This certainly says to me that the distress call received by Normandy when it was only 17 minutes out from Eden Prime was the same distress call Ashley says they attempted to send when the attack hit. She does not say that they had been fighting for a day before attempting to send that distress call. 5) Now this is where it starts to get confused - Ashley goes on to say: "We tried to double back to the beacon and walked into an ambush." Followed by the statement that she thinks she's the only one left. If this is the ambush we see in the video, then it's unclear why she would not indicate that they previously engaged them and had tried to double back before trying to send out their distress call. 6) Now, when we encounter the scientists, depending on the options selected, she says "We hid here during the attack. They must have come here for the beacon. Luckily it wasn't here. It was moved to the spaceport eariler this morning. Manuel and I stayed behind to pack up the camp." This clearly suggests that the beacon was moved before the attack began and that less than a day had gone by since the beacon was moved. However, it does not explain why Ashley, then, was unaware that it had been moved before the attack began and before she would have tried to double back to it. 7) The nail in coffin for the "over a day" statement by Ashley in the comic really though comes out of the mouth of Powell, who says: "They brought it here this morning. We loaded it up on the train and shipped it to the other platform. Hard to believe that was only a few hours ago. Feels like a whole other life." Another discrepancy is introduced with the cutscene showing where Sovereign landed... which is clearly very close to the space port where the beacon is moved to and is in clear sight of the burned landing area. Why would Saren spend a day (or even just a few hours) chasing Ashley's unit around the perimeter when what he desires is within sight of his LZ?... and both Cole and Powell do indicate that the ship landed first... before the attack.
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Post by themikefest on Jan 14, 2017 1:01:33 GMT
If Tali wasn't available for the audio file, there would be another way to find evidence against Saren. Udina mentions they lost comms with Feros and there were reports of geth in the area. Shepard heads there. The same happens as in the game, but instead of killing Shiala or leaving her on the colony, take her back to the council to tell the council the same thing she told Shepard.
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This. All Sovereign needs is for Saren to keep the Citadel open so it can dock. Sovereign plans to eventually eradicate all organic life, including it's indoctrinated minions, so if they get killed in a counterattack on Citadel Control it should not matter. Once Saren has fulfilled his purpose and given Sovereign control of the station, he's expendable. Furthermore it is fairly clear that Saren only invaded the Citadel with a small force of Geth that attacked Citadel Control. He didn't have enough time to get an army through (a process that would have taken hours) considering Vigil states the Conduit has not yet been used when it's conversation with Shepard concludes, and Shepard goes through the Conduit a couple minutes later. What happens is that Saren seizes Citadel control with a small force, and allows Sovereign to dock and discharge reinforcements, along with Geth dropships. Krogan for instance aren't encountered at all until Sovereign docks and Geth frigates start coming in. There's no reason why the same process couldn't have played out through an internal attack. An attack from within would have had a much greater likelihood for success as well, because it would have caught everyone flat-footed. The fleets would have been less prepared as well. The fleets were on high alert and defending strategic relays and the Citadel itself only because of the ongoing conflict with the Geth. The Councilors specifically state that in fact when arguing against going to Ilos. An attack from within wouldn't have had the fleets on war footing and many would likely be docked, their crews groundside. I love the original Mass Effect, but it is in spite of the main plot. The Conduit is by far the largest nonsensical plot element in the series.
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Post by themikefest on Jan 14, 2017 2:09:42 GMT
Too bad the collectors weren't around to use their seeker swarms
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